Hell's Fury

• It hurts,
  

• Useless if it misses
  
• Faster moving targets can easily avoid this
  

• Useful for going after things in tight spaces
  

• If someone can avoid the cat, then it was a waste of mana
  
• Tossing something large enough in their way can just stop the spell all together.
  

• Able to block two D-ranks, or 1 C-rank before failing.
  

• B-ranks and higher outright smash this.
  
• Does nothing to block things that come from another direction.
  

• Rather useful for attacking groups of people at once
  

• Useless if in the air
  
• Flying opponents can simply avoid this all together.
  

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[b]Name:[/b] Lava Fist
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Type: [/b] Lava, Offensive
[b] Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2
[b]Description:[/b] With either a thrust of her arm, or a few twitches of her tail, Syn is able to conjure up a large fist of lava that smashes into her target. The fist takes merely a second to for and moves at a rate of 10 meters a second towards the target intended. The first is modeled after a normal males fist, but scaled up to being about 6 feet long, and 3 feet wide and tall. She can reach out as far as 20 meters with the fist
[b]Strengths:[/b]
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[*] It hurts,
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[b]Weaknesses:[/b]
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[*] Useless if it misses
[*] Faster moving targets can easily avoid this
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[b]Name:[/b] Lava cat
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Type: [/b] Lava, Offensive
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2
[b]Description:[/b] As with the norm, with a twitch of the tail or a thrust of the arm, Syn conjures up a single cat made of molten lava.  This cat moves at a rate of 10 meters a second, and can go up to 20 meters away from her. This cat can move side to side to reach their target, and is the same size as a normal house cat.
[b]Strengths:[/b]
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[*] Useful for going after things in tight spaces
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[b]Weaknesses:[/b]
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[*] If someone can avoid the cat, then it was a waste of mana
[*] Tossing something large enough in their way can just stop the spell all together.
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[b]Name:[/b] Lava wall
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Type: [/b] Lava, Defensive
[b]Duration:[/b] 3
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 4
[b]Description:[/b] A simple wall actually. Syn is able to conjure up a wall of lava that is large enough to block the immediate area before her. This wall goes up 10 feet in the air, and curves on the edges as it expands out to have a 6 radius that curves so that it would act as a half dome that covered her.
[b]Strengths:[/b]
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[*] Able to block two D-ranks, or 1 C-rank before failing.
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[b]Weaknesses:[/b]
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[*] B-ranks and higher outright smash this.
[*] Does nothing to block things that come from another direction.
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[b]Name:[/b] Lava Spires
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Type: [/b] Lava, Offensive
[b] Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cooldown:[/b]2
[b]Description:[/b] One of Syn’s more questionable, and deadly abilities in her opinion. Within a moment of time passing, an area around her is instantly turned into a field of death as hardened spikes of molten lava erupt out of the ground around her. They reach out to 20 meters around her, and extend out of the ground at a rate of 10 meters a second. They all reach out to be 30 meters tall, tipped with a heated lava. Regardless of how many spikes one would be impaled with, they still take 1.5 D-ranks
[b]Strengths:[/b]
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[*] Rather useful for attacking groups of people at once
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[b]Weaknesses:[/b]
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[*] Useless if in the air
[*] Flying opponents can simply avoid this all together.

Pyrophobia wrote:Primary Magic: Hell’s Fury
Secondary Magic: Lordly Butler
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Hell’s fury is just a fancy way of describing the magic of a hellcat. Not a spiteful female(not to say she isn’t), but a cat that some have said have been born in the depths of hell itself. In an essence, this magic is similar to make magic as she often makes objects of lava use her magic. Constructs of this molten rock often times are used to complete tasks to save her from having to change forms to do them. She greatly dislikes have to take her human form unless it’s direly necessary.  This means most of her magic is capable of being used in both her cat form, and also her human form.

This magic as stated before acts similar to maker magic, but also resembles normal elemental magic when you get farther into it. While normal maker magic one must use their hands or something for the creation of things, Syn relies mostly on tail movements for the formation of her spells, or just glares at times if you listen to the people around her. This magic is rather a fast pace one, being as she will try to keep things as close range as possible, using her unnatural cat like grace to move around the battle field while delivering odd angled spells.
A glare can't do make magic, so please reword or remove this.

Strengths:

• Lava is rather hot. So attacks from her magic will more than likely leave burns or scars when they hit, being that it is molten earth burning at temperatures as low as 700c and as high as 1200c at higher ranks.
  
• Metal based magics are naturally weak to her lava, meaning if it doesn’t have a weakness listed, then she will deal 20% more damage to metal based constructs, or mages that have covered their body in it.
  This seems more like an ability, please reword or remove.
  
• Hot environments like savannas or natural volcanoes are nearly the pentacle of heat. They are so hot that they allow her to more freely use her magic. Her spells are 10% cheaper in these areas, and also last an additional post with the exception of instants. Cooldowns are extended to match this.
  As above this seems more like a ua, so can not be used as a strength.
  

Weaknesses:

• Spells that alter the terrain greatly when cool leave sections of hardened earth with lingering magic. If an earth based slayer were to consume these areas for a 10% boost to their magic instead of the 5%, giving them an advantage over her in the long run.
  
• In cold areas she has to use her magic effectively, and sparingly. The cool air increases the rate in which her lava cools. Meaning arctic, and similar areas shave a single turn off all of her spells save for instant ones and increasing the mana needed to use her magic by 10%. Leaving them a min of 1 post.
  Magics have a set cooldown and duration so please reword
  
• Ice based magic deal 20% more damage against her spells, and her should she be converting part of her body to lava at the time.
  I would say 10% for same rank and lower, 20% for higher ranks
  
•  In tight areas, most of her spells become useless as she has to worry about the backlash from her own spell splashing back.
  

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Unique Abilities:

• Diva’s Throne: Mostly due to the fact she dislikes to get up at times to get things, or change forms to get something done, Syn developed the ability to do a most wonderful thing, and that is to be able to form objects, or furniture around her of lava. The lava acts most differently than most of her other magic, as it adjusts temperature to the person who is sitting on it. If they need it cooler, it will cool down so that it’s comfortable, or vice versa. The objects she creates with these ability can be controlled with near surgical precision. Everyone has itches they can’t each on their own normally. Furniture created with this ability can be moved around around her, but nothing like she can object. She can move them around a little, mostly up and down or dismissing them. Anything created through this means can’t be used in PvP unless the opponent gives consent.
  
• Lava Supremacy: Aside from a possible Lava slayer, Syn control over lava is somewhat primal. Less of a meager magi wanting to just pick it up as a cool trick, her control of it is rather natural. As such when her lava spell would clash with another lava based spell on the same rank as hers or lower, it will triumph, pushing through it like it wasn’t there.
  I would suggest you take 20% less damage from same level or lower.
  
• Lava hardened: A trick of her trade. Something she loved when it developed. Her fur and skin has naturally hardened in the last years of her life with the use of her magic. As such, due to her primal use of her magic, she takes 10% less damage from attacks done to her.
  

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