by Hania 15th June 2017, 11:15 am
Hello jtmoney09, my name is Tamashi and I will be grading your pet this time around. Any alterations or requests I make will be in
this wonderful colour. If you have any questions, concerns or worries don't hesitate to send me a pm and I'll get back to you as soon as I am able to.
With all that being said, lets begin...
- Grading:
jtmoney09 wrote:Name: Mei
Rank: Weak
Species: Unknown
Type: Combat Pet
Description: - Default Appearance:
- Default Appearance 2:
Abilities:- Combat Abilities:
Name: Petal Storm/Snow Flurry (Depends on her current Appearance)
Please choose a singular name, you can state in the description of the ability that it changes ascetically dependant on her form.
Rank: User Rank (Caps at D-Rank)
Type: Holy,Offensive
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: Two posts
Description: After a short delay,Mei summons some Petals/Snow,She gets ready to aim it at a target,She makes a pulling back motion like if she's using a bow,She shoots it towards a target,All the petals/snow shoots towards the target in a Scattered pattern,They shoot at a speed of 10 meters per second,shooting up to 20 meters away.The petals/snow deal about 10% of the spells rank,Not all of the petals/snow may hit the target.
please specify how long the charge up is. The maximum a D Rank spell can achieve is 15 meters and 7.5m/s so I will ask you to change this. I suggest raising the pets damage to being a full rank of damage
Strengths:
·Deals alot of damage if all petals/snow hit the target
·Great spell if you're in a fight where you are close to each other
Weaknesses:
·Demon slayers aligned with the light element can eat the petals/snow without any negative effects happening towards them
·Unholy magic or darkness magic is able to negate the spell
·Not all of the petals/snow hits the target
- Cosmetic abilities:
·Flight
·Morphing
·Slime magic
This isn't cosmetic this is a magic type I'm going to ask you remove it
·Telepathy with Liam
This seems more like a passive I am going to ask you remove this
·Sensing any unholy beings around Liam and her
This seems more like a passive I am going to ask you remove this
·Sensing and seeing spirits
This seems more like a passive I am going to ask you remove this
Once you have altered what I have requested bump the thread and I will come as quickly as I am able to.