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    Post by The Hustler 7th June 2017, 2:36 pm

    Name:
    White Silver
    Rank:
    Artifact
    Type:
    Rifle
    Description:
    Adalia's one and only trusty rifle, with a very strange name at that.  It's the exact same rifle that the original creator of the magic once used to wield, and despite being very old, Adalia has since managed to obtain the parts she needed to not only restore it to its former glory, but even improve on it.  The interesting part about this weapon is that it uses no ammo whatsoever, so, carrying any clips is completely pointless.  Instead, she has a single clip already attached that was once enchanted to never run out of bullets, so it's a marksman's biggest dream come true.  Now that almost all of its potential is realized, it is a formidable weapon for a formidable soldier.  Adalia still feels like it can be improved more, however, even if only slightly.

    This weapon is a peculiar weapon, because while the parts Adalia used to improve on it make it function better, it's also dependent on the user's magical strength, too.  White Silver will continue to get stronger so long as Adalia can get stronger.  One of the most notable things that improves with this weapon as she increases in rank is her range.  At base (D-Rank) White Silver has an effective range of 60 meters.  The range doubles for the next rank, and increases by 100 meters for every rank after that, till it hits 400 meters at its maximum power

    Adalia's ranged spells never consume ammo from this weapon.

    Adalia's weapon now:
    Strengths:
    - The range on this weapon is extraordinary
    Weaknesses:
    - Fairly difficult to use in close combat; despite having a knife for self defense, it's not meant to be used for defensive purposes, and more offense.  If it's used defensively, it'll feel like an awkward spear.
    - While not having to reload can be seen as a good thing, it is also a negative thing.  The user of this weapon is limited to a certain amount of shots per post; other weapons can reload once their clip runs out, this one is forced to wait till the next post.
    Abilities:
    * Adalia's clip never runs out of bullets, so she doesn't need to reload.  Instead, she has a certain amount of bullets she can shoot per post.  At her current rank, it's only 6, and this number resets with each post.  The number of bullets she can shoot increases by 2 per rank.

    * The firepower of rifles is strong, so the speed the bullets travel in is extremely fast.  Adalia's rife is dependent on her magical strength in order to get stronger, though.  Instead of going 762 meters per second, which is the normal speed for a rifle, Adalia's power cannot handle anything near that, so the speed of her bullets are 45 meters per second at base.  It increases by another 45 for the next rank, and is 150 mp/s at B-Rank, 225 for A-Rank, and 300 for S-Rank.


    Powerhouse:
    Sniper Rounds:


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    Post by Guest 7th June 2017, 4:49 pm

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    Post by Julius Seas 28th June 2017, 5:12 pm

    Asayake wrote:
    Name:
    White Silver
    Rank:
    Weak
    Type:
    Rifle
    Description:
    Adalia's one and only trusty rifle, with a very strange name at that.  It's the exact same rifle that the original creator of the magic once used to wield, so it's very old and has seen better days, though, if she could afford it, Adalia could upgrade the rifle to restore it to is former prestige, and make it even better at some point.  The interesting part about this weapon is that it uses no ammo whatsoever, so, carrying any clips is completely pointless.  Instead, she has a single clip already attached that was once enchanted to never run out of bullets, so it's a marksman's biggest dream come true, and it's for that reason Adalia keeps it around, despite it being old.

    Ignore the tiny person:
    Strengths:
    - The range on this weapon is fairly decent, despite being an old rifle.  Its current range is 50 meters, and while it WILL NOT be upgraded via ranking up as a weak weapon, it can be by upgrading the rank of the weapon AND THEN ranking up.
    Weaknesses:
    - Fairly difficult to use in close combat in its current state; she has no knife attachments yet.
    - One of the most important things to note is that this weapon is old.  As in, at least three centuries old.  Because of its age, the rifle has lost a lot of its prestige and ability, and that means that its only a shell of what it can be.
    Abilities:
    * Adalia's clip never runs out of bullets, so she doesn't need to reload.  Instead, she has a certain amount of bullets she can shoot per post.  At her current rank, it's only 6, and this number resets with each post.  The number of bullets she can shoot increases by 2 per rank once the weapon is upgraded to at least Strong.

    * The firepower of rifles is strong, so the speed the bullets travel in is extremely fast.  Adalia's rife is old, however, so its nowhere near as fast as it once was.  Instead of going 762 meters per second, which is the normal speed for a rifle, this one only has a tenth of that - 76.2 meters per second.  This cannot be upgraded via rank as a weak weapon, only through ranking up the weapon itself and THEN player rank will be taken into consideration.


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    Post by The Hustler 28th June 2017, 8:40 pm

    I'm going to make a list of changes I've made here so that the grader knows what to look for.

    The description has been changed slightly to reflect the current status of the rifle, and a significant more was added to it.

    The picture of the weapon has changed.

    The first strength has been slightly changed to reflect the current status of the weapon.

    The first weakness has been slightly changed to reflect the current status of the weapon, while the second one was changed entirely due to the nature of what it was before.

    Slightly changed the wording at the end of the ammo system to reflect the current status of the weapon.  Same with the bullet speed system.

    Added ability called "Powerhouse" which is a passive ability.

    Added ability called "Sniper Rounds" which is an active ability.

    Both abilities scale.


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    Post by Jiyu Kazehime 29th June 2017, 10:16 am

    Good morning, I am Jiyu/Kitty and I will be grading your weapon today so let's get you ready to go, my grading is done in this color.

    Asayake wrote:
    Name:
    White Silver
    Rank:
    Artifact
    Type:
    Rifle
    Description:
    Adalia's one and only trusty rifle, with a very strange name at that.  It's the exact same rifle that the original creator of the magic once used to wield, and despite being very old, Adalia has since managed to obtain the parts she needed to not only restore it to its former glory, but even improve on it.  The interesting part about this weapon is that it uses no ammo whatsoever, so, carrying any clips is completely pointless.  Instead, she has a single clip already attached that was once enchanted to never run out of bullets, so it's a marksman's biggest dream come true.  Now that almost all of its potential is realized, it is a formidable weapon for a formidable soldier.  Adalia still feels like it can be improved more, however, even if only slightly.

    This weapon is a peculiar weapon, because while the parts Adalia used to improve on it make it function better, it's also dependent on the user's magical strength, too.  White Silver will continue to get stronger so long as Adalia can get stronger.  One of the most notable things that improves with this weapon as she increases in rank is her range.  At base (D-Rank) White Silver has an effective range of 50 meters.  The range increases by 50m per rank, until A-Rank where its range potential is unlocked, being 600 meters, which is typical for a normal rifle. I am sorry but even if it's normal for riffles, the site has range rules and the weapon must follow these. Range rules can be found in the magic rules, but D rank is 15-20 while S-rank is 100.

    Adalia's ranged spells never consume ammo from this weapon.

    Adalia's weapon now:
    Strengths:
    - The range on this weapon is extraordinary
    Weaknesses:
    - Fairly difficult to use in close combat; despite having a knife for self defense, it's not meant to be used for defensive purposes, and more offense.  If it's used defensively, it'll feel like an awkward spear.
    - While not having to reload can be seen as a good thing, it is also a negative thing.  The user of this weapon is limited to a certain amount of shots per post; other weapons can reload once their clip runs out, this one is forced to wait till the next post.
    Abilities:
    * Adalia's clip never runs out of bullets, so she doesn't need to reload.  Instead, she has a certain amount of bullets she can shoot per post.  At her current rank, it's only 6, and this number resets with each post.  The number of bullets she can shoot increases by 2 per rank.

    * The firepower of rifles is strong, so the speed the bullets travel in is extremely fast.  Adalia's rife is dependent on her magical strength in order to get stronger, though.  Instead of going 762 meters per second, which is the normal speed for a rifle, this one only has a tenth of that - 76.2 meters per second.  This number will increase by 76.2m/ps until A-Rank, where its full firepower is unlocked and the speed of each bullet goes 762 m/ps.
    This is too fast, there are also speed rules which are found with the range rules in magic rules, speed my only be half of range without drawbacks.

    Powerhouse:
    Sniper Rounds:


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    Post by The Hustler 29th June 2017, 4:00 pm

    I'm a pretty reasonable person to work with, so don't take this as me fighting you, but I don't want to make changes to the range or the speed of the weapon.  What you're asking me to do is basically completely ruining the main focus of my character, which for the most part is being a marksman.  I can throw baseballs faster and farther than what you're asking me to change it to, and that's something you can almost certainly do, too.  Just about anyone could, assuming they're not hindered by disease or disability, yes?  So, this makes literally 100% absolutely NO sense to change a magically powered rifle to be even worse than my real life ball throws, and it's not just a little worse, it's considerably worse than my throws.  It's a magical tool.

    As for Sniper Rounds, I understand.  If that's the case, help me out with this one.  Give me some suggestions.  Clearly, a lot more things have changed than I thought have since I've last been on the site, and I have re-read the rules since our PM, but they confuse me a little, and I want to have something that empowers my shots further somehow.


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    Post by Leila Vergious 8th July 2017, 7:27 am

    Hey there, Asayake! I'm a new mod to be grading your weapon and all of my requests for changes will be done in this color.

    Asayake wrote:
    Name:
    White Silver
    Rank:
    Artifact
    Type:
    Rifle
    Description:
    Adalia's one and only trusty rifle, with a very strange name at that.  It's the exact same rifle that the original creator of the magic once used to wield, and despite being very old, Adalia has since managed to obtain the parts she needed to not only restore it to its former glory, but even improve on it.  The interesting part about this weapon is that it uses no ammo whatsoever, so, carrying any clips is completely pointless.  Instead, she has a single clip already attached that was once enchanted to never run out of bullets, so it's a marksman's biggest dream come true.  Now that almost all of its potential is realized, it is a formidable weapon for a formidable soldier.  Adalia still feels like it can be improved more, however, even if only slightly.

    This weapon is a peculiar weapon, because while the parts Adalia used to improve on it make it function better, it's also dependent on the user's magical strength, too.  White Silver will continue to get stronger so long as Adalia can get stronger.  One of the most notable things that improves with this weapon as she increases in rank is her range.  At base (D-Rank) White Silver has an effective range of 60 meters.  The range doubles for the next rank, and increases by 100 meters for every rank after that Increase from C to B rank is 80 meters, not 100. This would leave the weapon at 420 meters in the end instead., till it hits 400 meters at its maximum power

    Adalia's ranged spells never consume ammo from this weapon.

    Adalia's weapon now:
    Strengths:
    - The range on this weapon is extraordinary
    Weaknesses:
    - Fairly difficult to use in close combat; despite having a knife for self defense, it's not meant to be used for defensive purposes, and more offense.  If it's used defensively, it'll feel like an awkward spear.
    - While not having to reload can be seen as a good thing, it is also a negative thing.  The user of this weapon is limited to a certain amount of shots per post; other weapons can reload once their clip runs out, this one is forced to wait till the next post.
    Abilities:
    * Adalia's clip never runs out of bullets, so she doesn't need to reload.  Instead, she has a certain amount of bullets she can shoot per post.  At her current rank, it's only 6, and this number resets with each post.  The number of bullets she can shoot increases by 2 per rank.

    * The firepower of rifles is strong, so the speed the bullets travel in is extremely fast.  Adalia's rife is dependent on her magical strength in order to get stronger, though.  Instead of going 762 meters per second, which is the normal speed for a rifle, Adalia's power cannot handle anything near that, so the speed of her bullets are 45 meters per second at base.  It increases by another 45 for the next rank, and is 150 mp/s at B-Rank, 225 for A-Rank, and 300 for S-Rank.


    Powerhouse:
    Sniper Rounds:


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    Post by The Hustler 10th July 2017, 3:41 pm

    Hi!

    Thanks for the words of advice. I'll hit each point in order.

    I pretty much just used to ranges from the rules. I know they're guidelines, but I thought they'd be a safe bet. However, if you still would like me to change it, I will! I definitely wouldn't mind.

    I also changed Sniper Rounds to be something slightly different. Made the DR instant and the CD reduced by 1 post, but the CD count still scales per rank till it hits the appropriate rank. Now, the first shot is empowered to deal rank damage. She can shoot a second one if she wants to, but she's rooted in place for the duration of the shot by doing so.


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    Post by Leila Vergious 11th July 2017, 2:59 am

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