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    Post by Guest 29th July 2017, 2:42 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Wolf Dance
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    Wolf Dance is the combat art of the wolf tribe. It is taught to young protectors of the tribe so they would be able to do their duty. It was made to control their inner rage and slow down unintentional transformations.
    Wolf Dance strengthens the body, and by moving ethernano to different parts in it the magic can give different effects. The effects range from self healing to creating fire and ice from hands and feet. It is mostly close and mid range.
    It is not a single magic per se, but more of a combination of effects.

    Nija, once a future protector, learned Wolf Dance from his father. As the tribe was soon killed, he only learned some basic moves like how to move ethernano though the body, calm him mind, and that ethernano can be transformed into elements, but almost no "spells".
    That did not stop him from creating his own. He did it though training, mostly when nobody was watching.

    Strengths:

    • As the magic is close range, it is harder to dodge.
    • It is not restricted to only one element.
    • It is can do offense, defense, and healing.


    Weaknesses:

    • The magic is mostly unusable with a weapon.
    • It is close to mid range, and there can not be any long range spells (this excludes spells from lineage)
    • Defense and healing are restricted to Caster only.
    • Casting depends on movement, no movement no casting.


    Lineage:
    Monkey King's Descent:
    Lineage spells:

    Unique Abilities:

    1. Wolf claws: Being a wolf has its perks. Nija always has his wolf claws ready, and they give him additional damage when fighting unarmed, equal to the weapon of the same rank. ( D: 2hp (Weak), C: 4hp (Strong), B: 6hp (Strong +), A: 8hp (Legendary), S: 10hp (Legendary +) )
    2. Know your enemy: Nija has good fighting experience, and the more he fights with an opponent the more he understands their weaknesses. He gains a 10% bonus to physical damage per post to the maximum of 5 posts (50%), for that single opponent. The bonus resets every time he changes and opponent.
    3. Wolf anger management: The more Nija is in combat the angrier he gets. The anger increases his speed and strength by 5% every post he is in combat, to the maximum of 5 posts (25%). At the 5 post mark Nija turns into a wolf and the bonus is nulated, and starts again one post after Nija exits the wolf form. (Wolf form is a forced transformation from the lineage, that lasts 5 posts and has a 6 post cooldown)



    Spells:
    D rank spells:


    Last edited by Nija on 9th September 2017, 3:12 pm; edited 2 times in total
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    Wolf Dance Empty Re: Wolf Dance

    Post by Leila Vergious 8th September 2017, 4:06 pm

    Hi there, Nija! You already know me from grading of your character, so let's get straight to it. All my requests for changes will be below and done in this color. If you have any questions or have fixed everything, PM me or bump this thread~

    Nija wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Wolf Dance
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    Wolf Dance is the combat art of the wolf tribe. It is taught to young protectors of the tribe so they would be able to do their duty. It was made to control their inner rage and slow down unintentional transformations.
    Wolf Dance strengthens the body, and by moving ethernano to different parts in it the magic can give different effects. The effects range from self healing to creating fire and ice from hands and feet. It is mostly close and mid range.
    It is not a single magic per se, but more of a combination of effects.

    Nija, once a future protector, learned Wolf Dance from his father. As the tribe was soon killed, he only learned some basic moves like how to move ethernano though the body, calm him mind, and that ethernano can be transformed into elements, but almost no "spells".
    That did not stop him from creating his own. He did it though training, mostly when nobody was watching.

    Strengths:

    • As the magic is close range, it is harder to dodge.
    • It is not restricted to only one element.
    • It is can do offense, defense, and healing.


    Weaknesses:

    • The magic is mostly unusable with a weapon.
    • It is close to mid range, and there can not be any long range spells (this excludes spells from lineage)
    • Defense and healing are restricted to Caster only.
    • Casting depends on movement, no movement no casting.


    Lineage:
    Monkey King's Descent:
    Lineage spells:

    Unique Abilities:

    1. Wolf claws: Being a wolf has its perks. Nija always has his wolf claws ready, and they give him additional damage when fighting unarmed, equal to the weapon of the same rank. ( D: 2hp (Weak), C: 4hp (Strong), B: 6hp (Strong +), A: 8hp (Legendary), S: 10hp (Legendary +) )
    2. Know your enemy: Nija has good fighting experience, and the more he fights with an opponent the more he understands their weaknesses. He gains a 10% bonus to physical damage per post to the maximum of 5 posts (50%), for that single opponent. The bonus resets every time he changes and opponent.
    3. Wolf anger management: The more Nija is in combat the angrier he gets. The anger increases his speed and strength by 5% every post he is in combat, to the maximum of 5 posts (25%). At the 5 post mark Nija turns into a wolf and the bonus is nulated, and starts again one post after Nija exits the wolf form. How long does this wolf form last? You should also specify that strength, in this case, means increased melee damage and not spell damage.



    Spells:
    D rank spells:


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    Wolf Dance Empty Re: Wolf Dance

    Post by Guest 9th September 2017, 8:11 am

    Bump. Made all changes.

    I didn't intend for fire kick to be AoE, but now that you told me it makes much more sense, thank you :D
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    Wolf Dance Empty Re: Wolf Dance

    Post by Leila Vergious 9th September 2017, 9:12 am

    My apologies, I actually meant DoT as damage over time but my mind wandered in the wrong direction when I was typing. Your magic is almost ready to go now, just couple more changes. Just like before, bump when finished ^,^

    Ice dance - should say that the freeze works against those of equal or lower rank than the spell rather than mage.

    Heightened state - the cap of 25% needs to be a fixed one so you can remove the "at D rank" as it seems to suggest that the cap will increase in the future, which it shouldn't unless you decide to actually move the spell itself up a rank.


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    Wolf Dance Empty Re: Wolf Dance

    Post by Guest 9th September 2017, 3:17 pm

    Bump.

    All changes were made.
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    Wolf Dance Empty Re: Wolf Dance

    Post by Leila Vergious 9th September 2017, 3:34 pm

    Wolf Dance MQeOt6u

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