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    Sloths Dark Écriture (Law of the Witch) Magic

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    Post by Guest 15th February 2013, 8:38 pm

    Primary Magic: Dark Écriture (Law of the Witch)
    Secondary Magic: Secondary magic, I’m poor as crap I can’t afford that :P
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Dark Écriture is a type of “Letter Magic”, by writing out magic Runes, the User can cause different effects. What he or she writes become Law. The user can use it to not only trap enemies, but also make certain conditions in order for them to exit, however, the user cannot trap them forever. The User can also make the opponent feel certain emotions, by magically writing the emotion or feeling on their body. A upside to this effect is that the User can be up to 5 meters away when writing the rune. However, single word runes such as Emotions/feeling will only take 1 or posts. Trapping runes, which take sentences or sometimes paragraphs, require sometimes 3 to 5 posts.
    Strengths:
    - can be used to block, attack, and trap enemies
    - can make allies fight each other
    - can trap as many people that can fit in a Rune
    - Can gives buffs to them selves and allies, I guess enemies too but why would they want too?
    - they can’t get smudged
    Weaknesses:
    - The trap isn’t forever
    - takes time to make a Rune
    - If in dark form for too long, will get stuck that way (Jk they will just die)
    - the runes themselves last for a short period of time.

    Abilities/Powers:

    d-rank spells:

    c-rank spells:


    Last edited by Succubus Queen on 21st February 2013, 8:00 pm; edited 11 times in total
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    Star Re: Sloths Dark Écriture (Law of the Witch) Magic

    Post by TacticalFallacy 15th February 2013, 9:04 pm

    General:
    -This is alright.

    Letter Carrier:
    -Alright.

    Dark Spelling: Fear
    -Also good.

    Dark Spelling: Pain:
    -A spell that is able to amplify itself to inflict damage 9 times its rank is not acceptable. I can only allow you to have 1 shock per post for the first 2 and then after that, 2 shocks for the final post, to bring it up to 4 shocks of D-rank.
    -Also, please complete the incomplete sentences in this spell.

    Dark Écriture: Dark Body:
    -So using this spell, the user can run 20 mph. When normal humans can sprint 23 mph......... (=.=)
    Please increase this to 30 mph.
    -Since you grow larger in size, you actually become a bigger target, so at the same time, your evasiveness is lowered, not increased by 55%. Because at the same time your other two percentage increases are actually very large for a D-rank, in order to counter it, please decrease your evasiveness by 20%. If you go and tell me that your increased speed makes you more evasive, then I will have to tell you to drop the entire statistic of increased evasiveness, because that is just restating a statistic that you already stated before.


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    Post by Guest 15th February 2013, 9:28 pm

    ok edited :)
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    Post by TacticalFallacy 15th February 2013, 9:34 pm

    Approved. WITH A DARK SMILE!!!! :twisted:


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    Post by Borro 15th February 2013, 9:55 pm

    Approved


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    Because my magic is confusing, here is the link for all those who need to reference it https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t2165-borro-magic#26678
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    Star Re: Sloths Dark Écriture (Law of the Witch) Magic

    Post by Guest 18th February 2013, 2:24 pm

    Rank up edits have been added :)
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    Post by Alye 18th February 2013, 3:18 pm

    Dark Spelling: Pain. You accidentally put 2 posts in the Weaknesses section, instead of three.

    Please raise the cooldown of Reflector to at least four posts.

    Law of Meteors: That name needs to be revised.. Maybe Celestial Law? Meteorical Law? Also, are four meteors being fired all at once, or is it one at a time, over the span of four posts? And give a rough size description of these meteors.


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    Post by Guest 18th February 2013, 3:25 pm

    edited :)
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    Post by Alye 18th February 2013, 3:25 pm

    Sloths Dark Écriture (Law of the Witch) Magic  8dfvno9
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    Post by Alye 21st February 2013, 7:57 pm

    This spell is a tad bit confusing. This seems to be more of a Take-Over ability then a spell. However, since it's only usable when in your Dark Body form, I'll allow it. However, your only C-Rank. Strong weapon damage is something I can see you achieving if you were B-Rank at the least. Round out the damage a bit, please.


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    Post by Guest 21st February 2013, 8:01 pm

    edited :)
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    Post by Alye 21st February 2013, 8:01 pm

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