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    Pein's Human Subordination Magic

    Pein
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    Post by Pein 26th January 2013, 6:37 pm

    Primary Magic: Human Subordination
    Secondary Magic: None ATM.
    Caster or Holder: Lost, Caster Magic
    Description: Human Subordination Magic, also called the Ruler's Magic, is a Lost Magic that allows the user to cast significant influence over humans, making it possible to make them subordinates for the user. In battle, it could be used to temporarily weaken the physical and magical abilities of humans around him. However, the magic does not work properly on non-humans, such as Celestial Spirits. It also allows the user to kidnap and summon humans to aid himself in battle, which means that, it is essentially a reverse version of Celestial Spirit magic. Humans summoned by the user materialize in a "dissolving" manner, and then disappears afterwards in a similar manner. And like spirits, summoned humans are sentient, albeit under the imperatives of the user, and can even verbally responds to commands, implying that it does not completely eliminate free will of the recipient.
    Strengths: The user can take control of a human. The human can be used to do the user's bidding, and also fight for them. This can be used on any human NPC, even if they are the opposite of the user. The user also emits a 10 yard radius orb, that nullifies magic by 10%.
    Weaknesses: The user cannot take control of anything other than a human. If they do, then they are trapped within the thing's body. This can be animals, spirits, etc.
    Abilities/Powers: When using Human Subordination, the user can emit a 10 yard radius that weakens a human’s magic by 10%. The user can also summon past humans that he has taken control of.




    ..:: D-Rank Spells ::..

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    Post by Borro 26th January 2013, 7:06 pm

    Can any of these spells be avoided? Is there a range for any of them? Do they need to be looking you in the eye at first? The spells themselves are okay, but from reading this over it sounds like you can instantly cause these illusions to appear without any necessary condistions in the situation.

    Another thing Im wondering about is that, when they see these illusions, such as the Death Illusion, can they clearly see everything else in the world, such as you, allies, the setting they are currently in. You might also want to specify exactly what the "death realm" is, as there doesnt seem to be any info on what exactly that is.

    Other than a few grammer mistakes, these are the only things that need to be worked on as of now.


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    Because my magic is confusing, here is the link for all those who need to reference it https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t2165-borro-magic#26678
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    Post by Pein 26th January 2013, 7:25 pm

    Made changes, bump.


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    Post by Borro 26th January 2013, 7:33 pm

    Approved


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    Post by Pein 15th February 2013, 8:28 pm

    Bump, with my new magic.


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    Post by TacticalFallacy 15th February 2013, 8:49 pm

    Alright, everything seems in order and the cooldowns are long enough to make up for the strengths of these summons.

    So therefore approved. You will however, still need another staff approval.

    *Puts on white mask with a lightning bolt and dispels into magical runes, returning into Pein's hands*


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    Post by Borro 15th February 2013, 10:40 pm

    Approved


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    Because my magic is confusing, here is the link for all those who need to reference it https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t2165-borro-magic#26678

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