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    Ring of Draining

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    Ring of Draining Empty Ring of Draining

    Post by Guest 21st December 2016, 1:37 pm

    Name: Ring of Draining
    Rank: Strong
    Type: Ring
    Description: 
    Ring of Draining:
    Strengths:

    • Made of rather sturdy materials, it is very hard to actually break this ring with physical attacks

    Weaknesses:

    • If this ring isn't being worn, it is useless.
    • At the end of the day, it is just a ring. As such, it is susceptible to being lost just like any other ring.

    Ability:
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    Last edited by Tyra Gassion on 21st December 2016, 2:13 pm; edited 3 times in total
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    Ring of Draining Empty Re: Ring of Draining

    Post by Guest 21st December 2016, 2:06 pm

    Hey Tyra! This lovely ring looks great so far, but there are a few corrections that are needed, which I listed in this color. Please edit and bump!

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    Ring of Draining Empty Re: Ring of Draining

    Post by Guest 21st December 2016, 2:13 pm

    Edits have been made: Removed a strength to reflect the way the ring actually works, and added those other edits you asked for in a note in the ability ^^
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    Ring of Draining Empty Re: Ring of Draining

    Post by Guest 21st December 2016, 2:22 pm

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    Approved~!

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