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Name: Kimomora
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Birthday: 11\03
Sexuality: straight
Special Characteristics: A patch over his left eye and a scar on his chest.

Personality:He strives everyday to better his techniques, increase his energy, and to achieve his goal , avenge his father. He doesn't like being around people and he doesn't like being affiliated with anybody because he doesn't want them hurt or worse, killed on his account. He is very kind towards people but never shows that emotion or any other sort of emotion because he feels showing emotion is a sign of weakness which his father taught him before he was murdered. He loves his brother very much; his feelings of his brother’s safety being before any other thing are strong. Even at a young age, He was talented, and his teachers said his progress hardly required any help. In his battles, He was shown to be an immensely powerful ninja and gained praise from the other guils. He rarely shows emotions and keeps his composure even when surprised or irritated. He’s early childhood was marred by war, the time his father was killed and butchered to death, the violence of which caused him to seek peace at any cost. He is gives respect to whoever gives it back. He is determined to protect is little brother no matter what and if you mess or bully his little brother or even if you tease him, he'll give you a beating of a life time.He never frowns or shows anger around his little brother not even a little. He always acts clumsy around his brother and never fights around him. He always plays around with his brother when he's not on a mission. He's always serious when he accepts a job and always tense cause his little brother always requests to go with him and he can't say no.
In battle he rarely uses his sword except when he is being beating and at the blink of death. When he was young and mainly practiced sword fighting and the master that trained him to use a sword made him take a vow to never use his sword on the helpless. He's mode completely changes when he spits out his lollipop to a serious person. Under a leader he does as commanded without any question asked and would do anything as the leader commands and without hesitation or a seconds thought. When and if appointed the role of a leader he does his he’s best to guide his comrades to victory without any loss of lives/casualties. If with a partner he will prepare a plan of attack and strategize any move they’ll make to approach the target and always find a way to combine he’s and his partners powers to maximize them to be at there peak. But fights better alone and tries hard to perfect he’s techniques in battle and always asks the problem with he’s technique if defeated. He always fight with a strategy and never just plunges into a fight. He's best technique is with his sword but rarely uses it unless at the blink of death. He never underestimates his opponents.

Likes:
-He likes his little brother, the only family he has left.
-He likes defending the helpless. Because he feels that as a mage it is his duty to protect the helpless.
-He likes exceeds. He believes they give the ultimate support in battle which he could use to his advantage.
Dislikes:
-He hates being regarded as inferior to someone because it makes him feel insecure and reminds him of how he wasn't strong enough to protect his father.
-He hates being called a coward because it reminds him of how he couldn't save his family from being murdered.
-He hates being reminded of how his father died helplessly in a rubbery that took place 7 years ago.
Motivations:
-To become the strongest mage any one has ever seen because he believes that his father would be proud of him.
-To avenge his father to free himself from guilt and to know that he's father would be proud of him.
-To protect his younger brother the only family he has left ever since his parents were murdered.
Fears:
-He fears not being able to help someone ever since it reminds him of the catastrophe from 7 years back
-He fears spiders, they just creep him out.
-He fears losing his brother, his only family.
General Appearance
Height: 6ft5
Weight: 125
Hair: thick, long, soft, blue-red hair
Eyes: Purple
Skin Tone: Light skinned
Appearance: Fitted body wears a glove on the left hand, and always has a lollipop in his mouth only when hes fighting seriously will he spit it out.He has thick, long, soft, blue-red hair with purple eyes he weirs dark blue trousers and thin red shoes similar to that of Bacchus the rest of his legs are covered in bandages from the waist up he weirs an orange short sleeve shirt.With his sword hanging loosely at his back

Guild/Council

Guild: Sabertooth
Tattoo: A dark tattoo located on his right shoulder blade.
Rank: Rank D

Your personality is far too short. It needs to be at least 500 words. Also, why is the entire thing in bold? Furthermore, please go into more depth on your appearence

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General Appearance is not part of the app that you fill in, it is a seperator between the mental and physical aspect of the application.

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Personality is too short. You need to give reasons for each of your likes, dislikes, fears and motivations.

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"General Appearance
-He has thick, long, soft, blue-red hair with purple eyes he weirs dark blue trousers and thin red shoes similar to that of Bacchus the rest of his legs are covered in bandages from the waist up he weirs an orange short sleeve shirt.With his sword hanging loosely at his back"

this is not a section to fill out; please move all the response text underneath General Appearance to just the Appearance section. Thank you.

Can you also give more detail into the responses for the likes/dislikes/fears/motivations. They are still short and do not really give the full information on why you choose to label those there.

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Personality has to be at least 500 words. Without that you are not getting approved.

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Fair enough. I say approved