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    Jiyu Kazehime
    Jiyu Kazehime

    Player 
    Posts : 1917
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Wind Magic
    Second Skill: Demonic Takeover
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Jiyu Kazehime 22nd July 2016, 12:53 pm

    Name: Night Hunt.
    Rank: Legendary
    Type: Bow N Arrow.
    Description: The bow is made of a very strong wood with a incredibly dark almost black color while the string of it is pure white made from the hair of some animal. On the bottom of the bow, dangles a few large feathers and a keychain sort of thing that looks like a dog.

    Strengths:
    ♥ Distance From Fights: Jiyu doesn't have to get close to fighting to participate if she uses this.
    ♥ Stealth: Unlike a spell that makes a large noticeable magic circle, this allows her to remain hidden longer.
    ♥ Reusable Ammo; provided she can get her hands on an arrow that didn't hit it's target or break, she can reuse it.
    ♥ Since she’s using her magic for the abilities, her magic power boosts apply to them.


    Weaknesses:
    ♥ It's useless once she's in close quarters, as her body is weak making her incapable of weapon boosts unless she hits a vital point, and even then it only applies at D rank
    ♥ Her quiver only holds 24 arrows this gives her a very limited number of shots.
    ♥Jiyu has to get another arrow and ingrain her magic into it each time she fires, which takes time. (She can only fire one arrow every 200 words)
    ♥ Even when reused the arrows can only be reused so many time before they break for good. (once for explosive breeze, twice for wolf shot)
    ♥ The abilities on this weapon will also damage her allies if they happen to be too close.
    ♥ Even if she doesn’t use it to block, if she is hit with a fire attack and this is on her, it sustains damage as if she had used it to block, without actually taking away any of the damage from her.

    Abilities:
    Ability 1:
    Ability 2:


    Last edited by Jiyu Kazehime on 4th September 2016, 4:17 pm; edited 4 times in total
    Anastasia Isayev
    Anastasia Isayev

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    Lineage : Valkyrian
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    Posts : 2446
    Guild : Black Sails GM
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : [Primary] Ivan Isayev [Secondary] Fafnir, the World Dragon
    Experience : 321116

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Mechanized REquip
    Second Skill: Dragons' Champion
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Anastasia Isayev 25th July 2016, 12:24 am

    Howdy, Windkitten. I'm here to grade your awesome possum bow!
    Anyway, there's a couple things I'd like to see corrected on this weapon
    So anything you see in this color are things I request of you to correct.
    Let's get to it shall we?
    Windkitten wrote:My calculations for damage were done with the fact I intend to upgrade this weapon later on in mind.

    the equation used it Base Magic Damage + base Melee Damage + best current possible Damage Boost doubled.

    Name: Night Hunt.
    Rank: Strong(+)
    Type: Bow N Arrow.
    Description: The bow is made of a very strong wood with a incredibly dark almost black color while the string of it is pure white made from the hair of some animal. On the bottom of the bow, dangles a few large feathers and a keychain sort of thing that looks like a dog.

    Strengths:
    ♥ Distance From Fights: Jiyu doesn't have to get close to fighting to participate if she uses this.
    ♥ Stealth: Unlike a spell that makes a large noticeable magic circle, this allows her to remain hidden longer.
    ♥ Reusable Ammo; provided she can get her hands on an arrow that didn't hit it's target or break, she can reuse it.

    Weaknesses:
    ♥ It's fairly useless once she's in close quarters.
    ♥ Her quiver only hold 24 arrow's this gives her a very limited number of shots.
    ♥Jiyu has to get another arrow each time she fires, which takes time
    ♥ Even when reused the arrows can only be reused so many time before they break for good.
    Abilities: ( List all the abilities it has, make sure that the list is clear and understandable. See Misc rules for how many you can have)
    Ability:
    Ability 2:


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    Jiyu Kazehime
    Jiyu Kazehime

    Player 
    Posts : 1917
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Wind Magic
    Second Skill: Demonic Takeover
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Jiyu Kazehime 25th July 2016, 10:57 am

    I'm editing some things now, the impact and duration. However there are a few thing's I'd like to explain, I know mod's are busy and this can often cause some things to be over looked, and I feel you've over looked some things here.

    1. Ability one range : this is clearly stated in the description as being two feet in all directions from the impact point, scaling up five feet with every rank she increases to the maximum viable for the weapon. (So maxing out at 12 feet currently)

    2. I have a note in the very top of the app saying the damages above B rank are there because this is going to be upgraded as time goes, and I don't want to have to edit them in later when I already know them.


    3. On the note of the damages, the numbers you edited are based on her getting a Direct hit to an enemy, and it's only done to one enemy, anything not directly hit only endures 20 damage points, the base for magic.

    4. She can only use both abilities combined in a thread 24 times max

    4. On the second ability, I am willing to ( have already edited) the cool down to be 3 post's instead of two, since looking at it again I can see how that one might be too much being able to be used every other post, since it only does damage if it direct hits, and it's damage is based on the math for a direct hit from the first ability.


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    Anastasia Isayev
    Anastasia Isayev

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Guild Master- S-Rank- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Valkyrian
    Position : None
    Posts : 2446
    Guild : Black Sails GM
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : [Primary] Ivan Isayev [Secondary] Fafnir, the World Dragon
    Experience : 321116

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Mechanized REquip
    Second Skill: Dragons' Champion
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Anastasia Isayev 26th July 2016, 12:05 pm

    Night Hunt. BTSjguv


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    The Guild is Set to OPEN!  -- This means, feel free to join!
    Anastasia Isayev
    Anastasia Isayev

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Guild Master- S-Rank- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Valkyrian
    Position : None
    Posts : 2446
    Guild : Black Sails GM
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : [Primary] Ivan Isayev [Secondary] Fafnir, the World Dragon
    Experience : 321116

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Mechanized REquip
    Second Skill: Dragons' Champion
    Third Skill:

    Night Hunt. Empty Re: Night Hunt.

    Post by Anastasia Isayev 2nd September 2016, 12:21 pm

    Unlocked via user's request
    Jiyu Kazehime wrote:My calculations for damage were done with the fact I intend to upgrade this weapon later on in mind.

    the equation used it Base Magic Damage + base Melee Damage + best current possible Damage Boost doubled.

    Name: Night Hunt.
    Rank: Strong(+)
    Type: Bow N Arrow.
    Description: The bow is made of a very strong wood with a incredibly dark almost black color while the string of it is pure white made from the hair of some animal. On the bottom of the bow, dangles a few large feathers and a keychain sort of thing that looks like a dog.

    Strengths:
    ♥ Distance From Fights: Jiyu doesn't have to get close to fighting to participate if she uses this.
    ♥ Stealth: Unlike a spell that makes a large noticeable magic circle, this allows her to remain hidden longer.
    ♥ Reusable Ammo; provided she can get her hands on an arrow that didn't hit it's target or break, she can reuse it.

    Weaknesses:
    ♥ It's fairly useless once she's in close quarters.
    ♥ Her quiver only hold 24 arrow's this gives her a very limited number of shots.
    ♥Jiyu has to get another arrow each time she fires, which takes time
    ♥ Even when reused the arrows can only be reused so many time before they break for good.
    Abilities: ( List all the abilities it has, make sure that the list is clear and understandable. See Misc rules for how many you can have)
    Ability:
    Ability 2:


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    Post by Guest 4th September 2016, 10:15 am

    Hey there, Windy. There's just a few things that need to be fixed on your application. You can find them in this color.
    Jiyu Kazehime wrote:Name: Night Hunt.
    Rank: Legendary
    Type: Bow N Arrow.
    Description: The bow is made of a very strong wood with a incredibly dark almost black color while the string of it is pure white made from the hair of some animal. On the bottom of the bow, dangles a few large feathers and a keychain sort of thing that looks like a dog.

    Strengths:
    ♥ Distance From Fights: Jiyu doesn't have to get close to fighting to participate if she uses this.
    ♥ Stealth: Unlike a spell that makes a large noticeable magic circle, this allows her to remain hidden longer.
    ♥ Reusable Ammo; provided she can get her hands on an arrow that didn't hit it's target or break, she can reuse it.
    ♥ Since she’s using her magic for the abilities, her magic power boosts apply to them.


    Weaknesses:
    ♥ It's useless once she's in close quarters, as her body is weak making her incapable of weapon boosts unless she hits a vital point, and even then it only applies at D rank
    ♥ Her quiver only holds 24 arrows this gives her a very limited number of shots.
    ♥Jiyu has to get another arrow and ingrain her magic into it each time she fires, which takes time. (She can only fire one arrow every 200 words)
    ♥ Even when reused the arrows can only be reused so many time before they break for good. (once for explosive breeze, twice for wolf shot)
    ♥ The abilities on this weapon will also damage her allies if they happen to be too close.
    ♥ Even if she doesn’t use it to block, if she is hit with a fire attack and this is on her, it sustains damage as if she had used it to block, without actually taking away any of the damage from her.

    Abilities:
    Ability 1:
    Ability 2:


    Jiyu Kazehime
    Jiyu Kazehime

    Player 
    Posts : 1917
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Wind Magic
    Second Skill: Demonic Takeover
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Jiyu Kazehime 4th September 2016, 4:17 pm

    edit made, now I am off to die XD


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    Post by Guest 5th September 2016, 5:08 pm

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