Star stopper alices whip

Name: Star Stopper 2.0
Type: Strong whip
Description:After the spirit king realized that Alice had potential as mage, her took her whip, and infused it with magic. The whip grew could now reach up to 12 feet long unravled. It is a Black and Pink bull whip That can leave mark son the oppnent.

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Strengths:
-can latch on to an opponent.
-can also whip the opponent.
-Strong weapon
Weaknesses:
-it cant block
-Is easy to dodge due to linear movement

Abilities

Spoiler:

Weak weapons aren't allowed techniques, its growing ability to me is a technique.

D rank damage isn't a weakness it is a strength.

Please list out each strength and weakness on a new line e.g.
Strengths:
- Causes D rank Damage
- Can wrap around people
Weaknesses:
- Can't be used to block
- Is easy to dodge due to linear movement

This makes it easier to read. I also suggested a second weakness :) Do that and then bump it

Bump

RogueDoll wrote:[b]Name: Star Stopper.
Type: whip
Description: a long Red, pink, and purple horizontaly stipped whip. It is about 35 feet long when it is unraveled. -- A 35 foot long whip would be near impossible to use. I assume you are going for something like the fleure d'etoile that Lucy uses. You won't get something like that for a weak weapon. Just have it as 6 feet long
Strengths:
Can grow up to 45 feet -- No. It cannot grow. Maybe when it is higher, but not at weak
Can latch on to an opponent.
Can also whipe the opponent. -- Replace whipe with whip
D-rank damage
Weaknesses:
It cant block,
No magic ability
Abilities: whip, latch -- As this is a weak weapon just remove the abilities bit entirely.

Please read over this carefully and try to fix everything. A weak weapon is completely ordinary. E.g. its just a whip you could buy in real life.

ok, i edited everything exactly as you instructed

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