Transmuter Lightning Burst Magic

Spirit Link:

Spells:

Killua Zoldyck wrote:        Magic
       
       Primary Magic: Nen
       Secondary Magic:
       Caster or Holder: Caster
       Description:
When working with Nen there are six types of aura; Enhancers, Transmuters, Conjurers, Emitters, Manipulators, then Specialists. every individual is born having one of these six different aura types. Upon learning one's own aura type, a student of Nen can set about learning to apply the technique in a unique way that suits their personality, which can develop into a unique skill. But the person has to open his/her aura to use them. Once a person has had their aura nodes opened, They learn the 4 processes to control Nen. First they must learn to keep their aura from leaking away from their body. Ten (Shroud) is the process of keeping the nodes open, but also having aura flow through and around the body rather than away from it. Once maintained, it creates a shroud around the user that feels neither hot nor cold. Having a shroud of aura surround the body is the most basic defense against the emotional attacks from other users of Nen however, it can't defend against physical attacks. Through frequent meditation, they can improve the quality of their Ten. Zetsu (Suppress) While Ten stops the aura from flowing out more but still allows it to flow around the body. Zetsu stops the flow of aura from their body altogether. By closing all of their aura nodes, the He/she is able to stop outflow of their aura; like water from a valve. Since the user is no longer surrounded by their own aura, they are more sensitive to the aura/attacks of others. This can be useful when tracking another person and it will also prevent other from noticing them. Zetsu can also be used to rest, since it forces the body's external layer of aura to be fully contained within. However, since Zetsu involves shutting off one's aura, it can be dangerous due to it leaving the body defenseless against any attack. Then theirs Ren (Enhance) is a direct application of Ten. Since he/she is capable of keeping aura from leaking away from the body, it's also possible for them to produce more aura around themselves without having to worry about losing it. Ren focuses on outputting a high amount of aura and keeping it on the body, expanding the size and intensity of it. If Ten is considered to be defensive, then Ren would be considered offense. This increases the his/her physical strength and durability and provides a large pool of aura for any advanced techniques or individual skills they decide to use. Lastly is Hatsu (Release/Act) is the release or transmission of one's aura so it can be projected to carry out a certain function. Such as forcing aura into your hand and punching that would be a example. In essence, Hatsu is one's personal expression of Nen that creates a special and unique ability called a Nen Ability. A good Hatsu should reflect a person's character. He/she can focus aura into the his/her eyes that ability is called Gyo but if you focus it anywhere else to strengthen that part if you get hit anywhere the your not focusing on it can hurt him/her badly that is called Ko. With all these He/she is able to find out there class his is Transmutation

Killua uses his transmuter ability's to make lightning by transmuting his aura into lightning but to do this he had to be able to withstand the electricity (he was tortured by his family when he was little). when he uses his lightning he starts to show it in his fingers before he uses it anywhere else. Killua even uses his metal yo-yos by swinging them around his body at high speeds to make a electrical wall by sending lightning through the metal and around him as it swings. it can also be used to shoot out as a lightning bolt from his hand or even take form around him making him lightning fast.

Okay, so I know you're basing this character of yours on the Killua Zoldyck from Hunter X Hunter; but I want you to take it into note that this is a Fairy Tail universe, so everything that you write basing off from HxH won't work here. Only some things would.

So, first things first, you're allowed four spells, but you only have three; so you can add one. Secondly, I notice that all your spells are lightning based, just like Killua's from HxH- which makes me ponder on why you would not prefer using Lightning or Electricity magic. Because, let's be honest, even in the HxH world, Killua will be restricted to that element and the chances of him learning something new are quite less. About being a Transmuter on this site; it doesn't make much sense dear... Since this is an FT forum and you're bringing in a lot of terms from the HxH universe. I won't say its not allowed, but its certainly not prefered.

Now, you'll need to get rid of some things from your description for this to work. Remove the entire part about metal yo-yo's, since you'll need to register them as Weapons if you have to use them and its not right if you write about them in the Magic Registration. Hatsu, Gyo, Zetsu, Ren, etc etc... ALL would need to be developed into Unique Abilities and can't just fit into the description of your magic... That means you have to choose THREE of them and replace your current Abilities or just get rid of them all unless you reach a higher rank and can fit them in.

My suggestion to you is still to use Lightning Magic (look it up on the Fairy Tail Wiki), so that you get the Killua feels~
       Aura Type: (Locked until B rank)

       Strengths:
When using Zetsu he cant be sensed by anyone his level or lower

With his Hatsu he can make his aura go into a object to make it stronger Example: moving it into a shovel it will dig faster and stronger

Both the above strengths need to be replaced since you'd need to get rid of Zetsu and Hatsu.

Lightning attacks have a low chance to hurt him and stun him ( about a 25% chance chance of stun)

       Weaknesses:
Using to much Aura will wear him out quicker or if used to much can kill him
^This is null and void, since the site uses MP system and in your case Aura=MP... Mages don't die because they lost MP >3>
Zetsu won't hide him from anyone a higher than him (will slightly from c)

if attacked using Zetsu he can get more hurt but 25%

If he is using Ko anywhere on him and is attacked anywhere other than the spot he is focusing on he can get badly injured in that area unless he focusing the right amount of energy equal to the power of the attack

All the above three need to be replaced due to the same reason I mentioned with your strengths.

       Lineage:
Spirit Link:
Description: A weathered old monk once had the ability to communicate with spirits. These spirits granted him their abilities, linking with the monk, covering him in a misty white aura, allowing him access to a greater power. The spirits that linked with the monk we’re one of an insane berserker, a warrior with a legendary shield, and a dragon. During a great war, the monk fought for his country, and was supposedly killed in action. It’s rumoured that he fled after the battle, supposedly teaching his family in secret the ways to link with spirits as he once did.
Ability: Allows the user to take on the appearance of a berserker, a guardian, or a dragon in combat.
Usage: Each form lasts for 3 posts and can be used once per thread.
The berserker gains a giant two handed spirit claymore, capable of shredding through User ranked armours and defenses, up to A-Rank. No defensive or healing spells may be used in this form
The guardian gains a massive shield of adamantum capable of blocking the equivalent of 3 A-ranked spells. No additional defensive abilities can be used in this form.
The dragon gives the user the ability to fly and a roar of pure energy equivalent to a B ranked Dragon Slayer roar. Also can use claws and tail for basic melee damage. Cannot use any other spells or magic in this form.

        Unique Abilities: After learning Nen his assassin abilities increased and progressed more

Assassin claws: adjusting his fingernails into claws. These claws are sharper than knives and can tear a limb easily. < This won't work... Even in the HxH universe, the creator has never revealed how Killua developed this ability. Since it was something he possessed even before the Hunter Exam in the series, I suppose it is a genetic or hereditary thing that he gets from the Zoldyck family. It has nothing to do with his Aura, so it can't have anything to do with your magic.

Rhythm Echo: a motion that creates an afterimage of the body through a varying cadence of steps. There is a total absence of noise during the movement, and multiple phantoms appear. It utilizes the Shadow Step technique. < As I said, this is something that Killua developed before he learned Nen- so its an assassin technique that has nothing to do with his Aura; so this can't have any possible relations with your magic.

Kanmuru: allows him to react and move his body at speeds that would normally be impossible (limited can only be used when in godspeed mode)


       Spells:

       Name: Lightning Palm
       Rank: D
       Type: Lightning; Offensive/Defensive
Description:
Killua would focus his aura into his hand the aura would glow around it soon turning into a light blue lightning making static sounds, and as he did the lightning swarms around his hand. this attack can be a defensive by the enemy coming close and Killua pushing him with his palm to shock him, or as a offensive by getting close and grabbing them or touching them to shock them. the range would be arms length, and when hitting them he uses his speed to help boost it touching them it being like a flash.

       Strengths:
Being a Skilled Assassin his speed increases about 20%

If water is in the area it increases his attack by 15%

Has a 10% chance to stun Rank C and 25% for D

       Weaknesses:
It takes 1 Posts to Cooldown

If this is used against a lightning user it lowers attack but 15%

Has a Limited Range

Has to focus if he cant focus to get the lightning he cant do it but if he gets the lightning hes fine

Name: Thunderbolt
Rank: D
Type: Lightning; Offensive
Description:
A natural evolution of his Lightning Palm ability, Killua is also able to project large bolt of lightning from his hands, striking an opponent with electricity from a distance after jumping into the air. This attack can get up to lightning fast speeds up to 100Mph, and reaches up to 35ft



Strengths:
Has a 10% chance to stun Rank C and 25% for D

Is more affective if he is closer to the enemy when he hits them

If water is on the ground and he misses it can electrocute the ground still hitting the enemy if they are on the ground

Weaknesses:
If it Electrocutes the ground if can hit allies around him

Can only be used if he is in the air when firing

If this is used against a lightning user it lowers attack but 15%

Takes 2 posts to cooldown


Name: Godspeed
Rank: D
Type: Lightning; Offensive/Defensive
Description:
With his hair, hands and feet changed into electric type aura, Activating the Kanmuru ability, This ability changes Killua's aura into a field capable of transmitting all electrical impulses from his brain in a straight line directly to the part of the body he wants to use, completely bypassing his nervous system. It is made up of two parts: Speed of Lightning, the ability to move his body according to his own will, used to travel long distances at high speed, and Whirlwind, the ability to sense his opponents movements and have his body react automatically, which he uses to evade enemy attacks with flawless speed and timing. Kanmuru can only be used for a short amount of time before needing to be recharged.
This spell is his fastest spell he moves at speed of lightning.

Strengths:
His speed increases making him fast as lightning

his strength increases to feeling like they are getting hit by 5 lightning strikes

His awareness increases making him slightly untouchable by C Rank but untouchable able by D

Weaknesses:
It takes 5 Posts to cooldown

After it wears off his body will be in serious pain

Unable to dodge some C and higher Ranks

Kanmuru takes 2 posts to cooldown

Killua Zoldyck wrote:Magic
       
       Primary Magic: Nen
       Secondary Magic:
       Caster or Holder: Caster
       Description:
When working with Nen there are six types of aura; Enhancers, Transmuters, Conjurers, Emitters, Manipulators, then Specialists. every individual is born having one of these six different aura types. Upon learning one's own aura type, a student of Nen can set about learning to apply the technique in a unique way that suits their personality, which can develop into a unique skill. But the person has to open his/her aura to use them. Once a person has had their aura nodes opened, They learn the 4 processes to control Nen. First they must learn to keep their aura from leaking away from their body. Killua uses his transmuter ability's to make lightning by transmuting his aura into lightning (it already is lightning just hidden away and is shown as aura but will be turned into it by forcing it to come out kind of like Laxus when he fought natsu his aura turned into lightning) but to do this he had to be able to withstand the electricity (he was tortured by his family when he was little). when he uses his lightning he starts to show it in his fingers before he uses it anywhere else.



       Aura Type: (Locked until B rank)

       Strengths:
Slayers cant eat his lightning unless its being shot at them (mainly the dragons) < Nope, every Lightning Slayer can eat your lightning, no matter what the direction of propagation is.

Increases his speed and strength about 15% < This is more like an ability. So you need to change it.

Lightning attacks have a low chance to hurt him and stun him ( about a 25% chance chance of stun) < Nope, I'll allow this if you write that you have a 25% electricity resistance against spells that are one ranked higher than you or the same rank as you. But it won't work when it comes to any higher than that.

       Weaknesses:
Using to much Aura will wear him out quicker/ make him unable to use his lightning < Aura is locked until B Rank. So this weakness is null and void.

Can hurt allies around him if not watching

Cant use it on Family (family has control over him and scare him) < This is a weakness of your character, not the magic.

Slows him at first when he has to focus < Called as channeling time. It stands true for EVERY mage. Write weaknesses that are specific to this magic.

       Lineage:
Spirit Link:
Description: A weathered old monk once had the ability to communicate with spirits. These spirits granted him their abilities, linking with the monk, covering him in a misty white aura, allowing him access to a greater power. The spirits that linked with the monk we’re one of an insane berserker, a warrior with a legendary shield, and a dragon. During a great war, the monk fought for his country, and was supposedly killed in action. It’s rumoured that he fled after the battle, supposedly teaching his family in secret the ways to link with spirits as he once did.
Ability: Allows the user to take on the appearance of a berserker, a guardian, or a dragon in combat.
Usage: Each form lasts for 3 posts and can be used once per thread.
The berserker gains a giant two handed spirit claymore, capable of shredding through User ranked armours and defenses, up to A-Rank. No defensive or healing spells may be used in this form
The guardian gains a massive shield of adamantum capable of blocking the equivalent of 3 A-ranked spells. No additional defensive abilities can be used in this form.
The dragon gives the user the ability to fly and a roar of pure energy equivalent to a B ranked Dragon Slayer roar. Also can use claws and tail for basic melee damage. Cannot use any other spells or magic in this form.

        Unique Abilities:

Kanmuru: allows him to react and move his body at speeds that would normally be impossible (limited can only be used when in godspeed mode)

Ten (Shroud) is the process of keeping the nodes open, but also having aura flow through and around the body rather than away from it. Once maintained, it creates a shroud around the user that feels neither hot nor cold. Having a shroud of aura surround the body is the most basic defense against the emotional attacks from other users of Nen however, it can't defend against physical attacks. Through frequent meditation, they can improve the quality of their Ten.

Zetsu (Suppress) While Ten stops the aura from flowing out more but still allows it to flow around the body. Zetsu stops the flow of aura from their body altogether. By closing all of their aura nodes, the He/she is able to stop outflow of their aura; like water from a valve. Since the user is no longer surrounded by their own aura, they are more sensitive to the aura/attacks of others. This can be useful when tracking another person and it will also prevent other from noticing them. Zetsu can also be used to rest, since it forces the body's external layer of aura to be fully contained within. However, since Zetsu involves shutting off one's aura, it can be dangerous due to it leaving the body defenseless against any attack.

Then theirs Ren (Enhance) is a direct application of Ten. Since he/she is capable of keeping aura from leaking away from the body, it's also possible for them to produce more aura around themselves without having to worry about losing it. Ren focuses on outputting a high amount of aura and keeping it on the body, expanding the size and intensity of it. If Ten is considered to be defensive, then Ren would be considered offense. This increases the his/her physical strength and durability and provides a large pool of aura for any advanced techniques or individual skills they decide to use.

Lastly is Hatsu (Release/Act) is the release or transmission of one's aura so it can be projected to carry out a certain function. Such as forcing aura into your hand and punching that would be a example. In essence, Hatsu is one's personal expression of Nen that creates a special and unique ability called a Nen Ability. A good Hatsu should reflect a person's character. He/she can focus aura into the his/her eyes that ability is called

Gyo but if you focus it anywhere else to strengthen that part if you get hit anywhere the your not focusing on it can hurt him/her badly that is called Ko. With all these He/she is able to find out there class his is Transmutation

You're only allowed THREE abilities as a D Rank mage. Choose three and then get rid of the rest.
       Spells:

       Name: Lightning Palm
       Rank: D
       Type: Lightning; Offensive/Defensive
Description:
Killua would focus his aura into his hand the aura would glow around it soon turning into a light blue lightning making static sounds, and as he did the lightning swarms around his hand. this attack can be a defensive by the enemy coming close and Killua pushing him with his palm to shock him, or as a offensive by getting close and grabbing them or touching them to shock them. the range would be arms length, and when hitting them he uses his speed to help boost it touching them it being like a flash. Write the effects on the opponent after they're attacked with this spell.

       Strengths:
Being a Skilled Assassin his speed increases about 20% < Nope. Your character is the assassin- so the spell is not the one boosting his speed. Besides, this won't actually be allowed since the spell is focused around your character's palms.

If water is in the area it increases his attack by 15% < 15% of what? Strength? Speed?

Has a 10% chance to stun Rank C and 25% for D < RPing can't be a chance game here. Be precise and specific. Also, note down the duration.

       Weaknesses:
It takes 1 Posts to Cooldown < Increase to 3 posts.

If this is used against a lightning user it lowers attack but 15% < Increase to 25%

Has a Limited Range

Has to focus if he cant focus to get the lightning he cant do it but if he gets the lightning hes fine < Happens with all the mages. Write something specific for this spell.

Name: Thunderbolt
Rank: D
Type: Lightning; Offensive
Description:
A natural evolution of his Lightning Palm ability, Killua is also able to project large bolt of lightning from his hands, striking an opponent with electricity from a distance after jumping into the air. This attack can get up to lightning fast speeds up to 100Mph, and reaches up to 35ft Write the direction of propagation for the attack. Does it home in?



Strengths:
Has a 10% chance to stun Rank C and 25% for D  No chance thingy please.

Is more affective if he is closer to the enemy when he hits them < Why?

If water is on the ground and he misses it can electrocute the ground still hitting the enemy if they are on the ground

Note down the duration.

Weaknesses:
If it Electrocutes the ground if can hit allies around him

Can only be used if he is in the air when firing

If this is used against a lightning user it lowers attack but 15% < 25%

Takes 2 posts to cooldown < 3 posts


Name: Godspeed
Rank: D
Type: Lightning; Offensive/Defensive
Description:
With his hair, hands and feet changed into electric type aura, Activating the Kanmuru ability, This ability changes Killua's aura into a field capable of transmitting all electrical impulses from his brain in a straight line directly to the part of the body he wants to use, completely bypassing his nervous system. It is made up of two parts: Speed of Lightning, the ability to move his body according to his own will, used to travel long distances at high speed, and Whirlwind, the ability to sense his opponents movements and have his body react automatically, which he uses to evade enemy attacks with flawless speed and timing. Kanmuru can only be used for a short amount of time before needing to be recharged.
This spell is his fastest spell he moves at speed of lightning. This is only a D Rank spell, so it is very limited in its use.

Strengths:
His speed increases making him fast as lightning < How fast?

his strength increases to feeling like they are getting hit by 5 lightning strikes < Nah, nah... That's too much. I'd say it increases your base strength by 15%

His awareness increases making him slightly untouchable by C Rank but untouchable able by D < Um, what? Recheck this sentence and its meaning.
Also add duration.

Weaknesses:
It takes 5 Posts to cooldown

After it wears off his body will be in serious pain < For how long?

Unable to dodge some C and higher Ranks < Dodging is dependent on your PvP opponent's spell and everything... So, this weakness is redundant.

Kanmuru takes 2 posts to cooldown < Depends on if you choose to keep this as an ability. If yes, then this needs to be mentioned right below the ability and not here.

Name: Rhythm Echo
Rank: D
Type: Offensive, Defensive < How can it be both? I think its more like Supplementary.
Description: ( How the spell is cast, what it looks like, what it does, extra info. Make sure to get into detail. You are required to list a given Speed,  Range,  Area of Effect,  and any applicable measurements (such as the size of a created barrier).  All of these are as appropriate.  Some spells wont have a speed,  some wont have an AoE. But include all that apply.) < Remove all this.

Killua usually starts to walk around the Enemy making the same step over and over and a motion that creates an afterimage of the body when he walks around the steps making them. There is a total absence of noise during the movement, and multiple phantoms appear. It utilizes the Shadow Step technique. He would look like there is tons of them making a circle around them but he is moving a high speeds causing the after image effect. this is caused by his lightning aura increasing his speed. < What's the Shadow Step technique?


Strengths:
His speed increases by 15%

Makes him harder to hit and or dodge

can be used on any solid ground

Note down the duration.

Weaknesses:

It takes 2 posts to cooldown < 3 posts

Cant be used in air

Can be slowed down on slick surfaces

can get hit if all of the after images are attacked at once

Killua Zoldyck wrote:Magic
       
       Primary Magic: Nen
       Secondary Magic:
       Caster or Holder: Caster
       Description:
When working with Nen there are six types of aura; Enhancers, Transmuters, Conjurers, Emitters, Manipulators, then Specialists. every individual is born having one of these six different aura types. Upon learning one's own aura type, a student of Nen can set about learning to apply the technique in a unique way that suits their personality, which can develop into a unique skill. But the person has to open his/her aura to use them. Once a person has had their aura nodes opened, They learn the 4 processes to control Nen. First they must learn to keep their aura from leaking away from their body. Killua uses his transmuter ability's to make lightning by transmuting his aura into lightning (it already is lightning just hidden away and is shown as aura but will be turned into it by forcing it to come out kind of like Laxus when he fought natsu his aura turned into lightning) but to do this he had to be able to withstand the electricity (he was tortured by his family when he was little). when he uses his lightning he starts to show it in his fingers before he uses it anywhere else.



       Aura Type: (Locked until B rank)

       Strengths:
If opponent has metal on them it can increase damage by 15%

if attacks hit it can paralyze the opponent

Killua has a 25% electricity resistance against spells that are one ranked higher than him or the same rank as him

       Weaknesses:
Wind Magic User Rank and above will cancel this magic

Can hurt allies around him if not watching

Cant be used if in water (can shock himself)

Mirrors, cause they Reflect his lightning < Mirrors don't reflect lightning, they reflect LIGHT. I'd suggest you write, "Rubber, plastic, wood and all other insulators; since they are bad conductors of electricity."


       Lineage:
Spirit Link:
Description: A weathered old monk once had the ability to communicate with spirits. These spirits granted him their abilities, linking with the monk, covering him in a misty white aura, allowing him access to a greater power. The spirits that linked with the monk we’re one of an insane berserker, a warrior with a legendary shield, and a dragon. During a great war, the monk fought for his country, and was supposedly killed in action. It’s rumoured that he fled after the battle, supposedly teaching his family in secret the ways to link with spirits as he once did.
Ability: Allows the user to take on the appearance of a berserker, a guardian, or a dragon in combat.
Usage: Each form lasts for 3 posts and can be used once per thread.
The berserker gains a giant two handed spirit claymore, capable of shredding through User ranked armours and defenses, up to A-Rank. No defensive or healing spells may be used in this form
The guardian gains a massive shield of adamantum capable of blocking the equivalent of 3 A-ranked spells. No additional defensive abilities can be used in this form.
The dragon gives the user the ability to fly and a roar of pure energy equivalent to a B ranked Dragon Slayer roar. Also can use claws and tail for basic melee damage. Cannot use any other spells or magic in this form.

        Unique Abilities:

Kanmuru: allows him to react and move his body at speeds that would normally be impossible (limited can only be used when in godspeed mode) < Specify the speed with numerical data.

Zetsu (Suppress) While Ten < What is Ten? You have to explain that too for this to work. stops the aura from flowing out more but still allows it to flow around the body. Zetsu stops the flow of aura from their body altogether. By closing all of their aura nodes, the He/she is able to stop outflow of their aura; like water from a valve. Since the user is no longer surrounded by their own aura, they are more sensitive to the aura/attacks of others. This can be useful when tracking another person and it will also prevent other from noticing them. Zetsu can also be used to rest, since it forces the body's external layer of aura to be fully contained within. However, since Zetsu involves shutting off one's aura, it can be dangerous due to it leaving the body defenseless against any attack.
^This ability is currently useless for you considering we use the MP system and everything. So it won't help you rest and regain power or anything. So, I suggest you go up to the Character Perk rules, and take a note of Aura sensory range for D Rank mages and increase it by a bit. That way, this ability would actually DO something for you.

Then theirs Ren (Enhance) is a direct application of Ten. Since he/she is capable of keeping aura from leaking away from the body, it's also possible for them to produce more aura around themselves without having to worry about losing it. Ren focuses on outputting a high amount of aura and keeping it on the body, expanding the size and intensity of it. If Ten is considered to be defensive, then Ren would be considered offense. This increases the his/her physical strength and durability and provides a large pool of aura for any advanced techniques or individual skills they decide to use. < This is EXACTLY like the Aura effect that we have in place for B Ranked and higher mages; so you can't have this as an ability now.

       Spells:

       Name: Lightning Palm
       Rank: D
       Type: Lightning; Offensive/Defensive
Description:
Killua would focus his aura into his hand the aura would glow around it soon turning into a light blue lightning making static sounds, and as he did the lightning swarms around his hand. this attack can be a defensive by the enemy coming close and Killua pushing him with his palm to shock him, or as a offensive by getting close and grabbing them or touching them to shock them. the range would be arms length, and when hitting them he uses his speed to help boost it touching them it being like a flash.

       Strengths:
If opponent has metal on them it can increase damage by 15%

If water is in the area the Lightning on his palms increase strength by 15%

If contact was made it stuns the opponent  

Write that the duration of this spell is "Instant"

       Weaknesses:
It takes 3 Posts to Cooldown

If this is used against a lightning user it lowers attack but 25%

Has a Limited Range

If opponent has anything non conductible on them (Example: Rubber) the attack will not work

Name: Thunderbolt
Rank: D
Type: Lightning; Offensive
Description:
A natural evolution of his Lightning Palm ability, Killua is also able to project large bolt of lightning from his hands, striking an opponent with electricity from a distance after jumping into the air. This attack can get up to lightning fast speeds up to 100Mph, and reaches up to 35ft. if the attack hit his opponent is left stunned with static around them.



Strengths:
Can stun enemy's User Rank and lower

Is more affective if he is closer to the enemy when he hits them due to them being at the heart of the power

If water is on the ground and he misses it can electrocute the ground still hitting the enemy if they are on the ground for a post

Write that the duration of this spell is "Instant"

Weaknesses:
If it Electrocutes the ground if can hit allies around him

Can only be used if he is in the air when firing

If this is used against a lightning user it lowers attack but 25%

Takes 3 posts to cooldown


Name: Godspeed
Rank: D
Type: Lightning; Offensive/Defensive
Description:
With his hair, hands and feet changed into electric type aura, Activating the Kanmuru ability, This ability changes Killua's aura into a field capable of transmitting all electrical impulses from his brain in a straight line directly to the part of the body he wants to use, completely bypassing his nervous system. It is made up of two parts: Speed of Lightning, the ability to move his body according to his own will, used to travel long distances at high speed, and Whirlwind, the ability to sense his opponents movements and have his body react automatically, which he uses to evade enemy attacks with flawless speed and timing. Kanmuru can only be used for a short amount of time before needing to be recharged.
This spell is his fastest spell he moves at speed of lightning. (the speed of light aka if he is s rank D rank wont see him move but if hes d fighting a s they can see him) < As I said, this is too much for a D Rank spell. Choose either increased reactions or speed as an effect of this spell. That is, get rid of Speed Of Lightning OR Whirlwind. Also, since you're a D Rank; moving at the speed of lightning; will still leave you visible as a BOLT of lightning that streaks around. This makes it possible for even D Rank mages to see you.

Strengths:
His speed increases making him fast as lightning (the speed of light aka if he is S rank D rank wont see him move but if hes D rank fighting a S they can see him)

his base strength increases by 15%

His senses increase (example: If he was rank D fighting rank A they can block him and hit him but if was a few higher then them he would be able to not be hit or blocked as easy)

Write down the duration for this spell.
Weaknesses:
It takes 4 Posts to cooldown

After it wears off his body will be in serious pain for about 2 posts (if at end of battle it would be a day and a half)

If rubber/non conductible is on the opponent the electric on his body wont shock them decreasing the attack by 25%

Will lose control of speed can make him run into things if not careful

Name: Rhythm Echo
Rank: D
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Description: ( How the spell is cast, what it looks like, what it does, extra info. Make sure to get into detail. You are required to list a given Speed,  Range,  Area of Effect,  and any applicable measurements (such as the size of a created barrier).  All of these are as appropriate.  Some spells wont have a speed,  some wont have an AoE. But include all that apply.)

Killua usually starts to walk around the Enemy making the same step over and over and a motion that creates an afterimage of the body when he walks around the steps making them. There is a total absence of noise during the movement, and multiple phantoms appear. He would look like there is tons of them making a circle around them but he is moving a high speeds causing the after image effect. this is caused by his lightning aura increasing his speed.


Strengths:
His speed increases by 15%

Makes him harder to hit and or dodge

can be used on any solid ground

only lasts until rhythm is broken

Weaknesses:

It takes 3 posts to cooldown

Cant be used in air Add another weakness since you have 4 strengths.

Can be slowed down on slick surfaces

can get hit if all of the after images are attacked at once

Killua Zoldyck wrote:Magic
       
       Primary Magic: Transmuters Lighting Burst
       Secondary Magic:
       Caster or Holder: Caster
       Description:
Killua uses his transmuter ability's to make lightning by transmuting his aura into lightning (it already is lightning just hidden away and is shown as aura but will be turned into it by forcing it to come out kind of like Laxus when he fought natsu his aura turned into lightning) but to do this he had to be able to withstand the electricity (he was tortured by his family when he was little). when he uses his lightning he starts to show it in his fingers before he uses it anywhere else.


       Strengths:
If opponent has metal on them it can increase damage by 15%  

if attacks hit it can paralyze the opponent

Killua has a 25% electricity resistance against spells that are one ranked higher than him or the same rank as him

       Weaknesses:
Wind Magic User Rank and above will cancel this magic

Can hurt allies around him if not watching

Cant be used if in water (can shock himself)

Rubber, Doesn't conduct electricity

       Lineage:

Spirit Link:

        Unique Abilities:

Kanmuru: allows him to react and move his body at speeds that would normally be impossible (limited can only be used when in godspeed mode) That speed would makehim 25% faster

You also get 2 more UAs, FYI

     

Spells:

Killua Zoldyck wrote:Magic
       
       Primary Magic: Transmuters Lighting Burst
       Secondary Magic:
       Caster or Holder: Caster
       Description:
Killua uses his transmuter ability's to make lightning by transmuting his aura into lightning (it already is lightning just hidden away and is shown as aura but will be turned into it by forcing it to come out kind of like Laxus when he fought natsu his aura turned into lightning) but to do this he had to be able to withstand the electricity (he was tortured by his family when he was little). when he uses his lightning he starts to show it in his fingers before he uses it anywhere else.


       Strengths:
If opponent has metal on them it can increase damage by 15%

if attacks hit it can paralyze the opponent

Killua has a 25% electricity resistance against spells that are one ranked higher than him or the same rank as him

       Weaknesses:
Wind Magic User Rank and above will cancel this magic

Can hurt allies around him if not watching

Cant be used if in water (can shock himself)

Rubber, Doesn't conduct electricity

       Lineage:

Spirit Link:

        Unique Abilities:

Kanmuru: allows him to react and move his body at speeds that would normally be impossible (limited can only be used when in godspeed mode) That speed would makehim 25% faster


     

Spells:

Killua Zoldyck wrote:Magic
       
       Primary Magic: Transmuters Lighting Burst
       Secondary Magic:
       Caster or Holder: Caster
       Description:
Killua uses his transmuter ability's to make lightning by transmuting his aura into lightning (it already is lightning just hidden away and is shown as aura but will be turned into it by forcing it to come out kind of like Laxus when he fought natsu his aura turned into lightning) but to do this he had to be able to withstand the electricity (he was tortured by his family when he was little). when he uses his lightning he starts to show it in his fingers before he uses it anywhere else.


       Strengths:
If opponent has metal on them it can increase damage by 15%

if attacks hit it can paralyze the opponent

Killua has a 25% electricity resistance against spells that are one ranked higher than him or the same rank as him

       Weaknesses:
Wind Magic User Rank and above will cancel this magic

Can hurt allies around him if not watching

Cant be used if in water (can shock himself)

Rubber, Doesn't conduct electricity

       Lineage:

Spirit Link:

        Unique Abilities:

Kanmuru: allows him to react and move his body at speeds that would normally be impossible (limited can only be used when in godspeed mode) That speed would makehim 25% faster


     

Spells:

Killua Zoldyck wrote:Magic
       
       Primary Magic: Transmuters Lighting Burst
       Secondary Magic:
       Caster or Holder: Caster
       Description:
Killua uses his transmuter ability's to make lightning by transmuting his aura into lightning (it already is lightning just hidden away and is shown as aura but will be turned into it by forcing it to come out kind of like Laxus when he fought natsu his aura turned into lightning) but to do this he had to be able to withstand the electricity (he was tortured by his family when he was little). when he uses his lightning he starts to show it in his fingers before he uses it anywhere else.


       Strengths:
If opponent has metal on them it can increase damage by 15%

if attacks hit it can paralyze the opponent

Killua has a 25% electricity resistance against spells that are one ranked higher than him or the same rank as him

       Weaknesses:
Wind Magic User Rank and above will cancel this magic

Can hurt allies around him if not watching

Cant be used if in water (can shock himself)

Rubber, Doesn't conduct electricity

       Lineage:

Spirit Link:

        Unique Abilities:

Kanmuru: allows him to react and move his body at speeds that would normally be impossible (limited can only be used when in godspeed mode) That speed would makehim 25% faster


     

Spells: