All right, just a few notes:
1. You have your appearance description in the wrong part. You'll want it by "Appearance:"
2. This is just a suggestion, but I think your character would fit better as a guildless mage rather than tied down to a guild. His openness and willing to do things for the hell of it is very much like how a guildless mage would act in my opinion. Of course, in no way am I telling you to change your option, but just take it to mind.
1. You have your appearance description in the wrong part. You'll want it by "Appearance:"
2. This is just a suggestion, but I think your character would fit better as a guildless mage rather than tied down to a guild. His openness and willing to do things for the hell of it is very much like how a guildless mage would act in my opinion. Of course, in no way am I telling you to change your option, but just take it to mind.