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    Take Over: Demon Soul

    Kranzer
    Kranzer

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    Completed Take Over: Demon Soul

    Post by Kranzer 11th July 2016, 8:09 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Take Over: Demon Soul
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you trained for goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description: This particular type of TakeOver magic allows Kranzer to adopt the form of various creatures that he has come to know on a more personal nature. How he has come to know such beings is largely a mystery and he isn’t one to talk on such matters. There are four demons in total and each one holds dominion over a different host of powers. For the moment he only has access to Xaram who holds dominion over the shadows and the night. So it isn’t a surprise that the form provides the most benefit when used after the sun had long since set below the horizon.

    Through the manipulation of his magical energy the memories and habits of the demonic beings are conjured not from some other realm but from within his very body. His body is used as a catalyst for the transformation and his magical energy is the key. He’s able to either allow the demonic entity to take over certain parts of his body or to surrender his body outright to take on the full form of the demon. There is an inherent danger when he lets the demon fully loose. While it isn’t a true entity he can become so engrossed in mimicking the demon that there is always that risk of losing himself within the transformation and losing control. When he allows his body to be taken over the change is heralded by the appearance of crimson circles.


    Strengths:

    • Increased Strength and Speed
    • Resistance to the same element as his current form. Example: Xarram possesses a resistance to shadow magic.


    Weaknesses:

    • Weak against demon slayer magic
    • Spells are weak vs Opposing Element
    • Takes 15% more damage from spells of the opposing Element.


    Lineage:
    Light of Luna:


    • Dark Metabolism [Passive] When Tristan in near or surrounded by natural shadows and darkness his body can draw it in similar to how Xarram was able and use it to replinish his energy. [+3% MP regen ever post when surrounded by natural shadows and darkness]
    • Eye of the Demon [Passive] Due to the dark nature of the magic he uses Tristan has become more attuned to the night and dark places. Due to this he has perfect vision in the dark. This allows him to see as if it were actually day.
    • Adaptive Body [Active] Due to the rigors he faces every time he allows a demon to take over and alter their body it has become quite adaptable. His body was normally weaker than the forms he assumed but gradually over time his prowess increased. [+10% Strength and Speed; When he assumes a Full TakeOver his physical attacks are enhanced by the form's element. Ex: Xarram's physical attacks are shadow based.]


    Spells:
    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS
    Xarram:


    Last edited by Kranzer on 14th July 2016, 8:10 pm; edited 1 time in total
    Anastasia Isayev
    Anastasia Isayev

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    Completed Re: Take Over: Demon Soul

    Post by Anastasia Isayev 14th July 2016, 7:16 pm

    Y Halo thar Kranzer..
    You're going to be my guinea pig for grading Take Overs...
    Mwahahaha
    Anyway, if you see anything written in this color then you'll know these are corrections I'd like from you...

    Let's get to it shall we...

    MWAHAHAHAHAHA *coughs*
    Kranzer wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Take Over: Demon Soul
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you trained for goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description: This particular type of TakeOver magic allows Kranzer to adopt the form of various creatures that he has come to know on a more personal nature. How he has come to know such beings is largely a mystery and he isn’t one to talk on such matters. There are four demons in total and each one holds dominion over a different host of powers. For the moment he only has access to Xaram who holds dominion over the shadows and the night. So it isn’t a surprise that the form provides the most benefit when used after the sun had long since set below the horizon.

    Through the manipulation of his magical energy the memories and habits of the demonic beings are conjured not from some other realm but from within his very body. His body is used as a catalyst for the transformation and his magical energy is the key. He’s able to either allow the demonic entity to take over certain parts of his body or to surrender his body outright to take on the full form of the demon. There is an inherent danger when he lets the demon fully loose. While it isn’t a true entity he can become so engrossed in mimicking the demon that there is always that risk of losing himself within the transformation and losing control. When he allows his body to be taken over the change is heralded by the appearance of crimson circles.


    Strengths:

    • Strength and Speed reach into the next class.  Not a strength.  This is actually way too powerful.  I could allow for "increased speed and strength" as a Strength while you have a UA upping either, but having this as a strength is a bit too much.  Please change this
    • Spells are more powerful at night or in darkened areas.  This would work more as a UA instead of a Strength


    Weaknesses:

    • Weak against demon slayer magic
    • Spells are weak vs Opposing Element
    • Takes 15% more damage from spells of the opposing Element.


    Lineage:
    Light of Luna:


    • Dark Metabolism [Passive] When Tristan in near or surrounded by natural shadows and darkness his body can draw it in similar to how Xarram was able and use it to replinish his energy. [+3% MP regen ever post when surrounded by natural shadows and darkness]
    • Eye of the Demon [Passive] Due to the dark nature of the magic he uses Tristan has become more attuned to the night and dark places. Due to this he has perfect vision in the dark. This allows him to see as if it were actually day.
    • Shadow Armor [Active] Due to the depth of understanding Tristan has gained through the fusing with Xarram he has gained insight into the demon's ability to manipulate its natural element. By manipulating the shadows in the surrounding environment and mixing it with his magical power Tristan is able to mold it into a type of semi-solid armor that encases his body or smaller portions if he so desires. [Rank dependent defensive ability that activates once every three posts. Example: For Rank D takes 2 Rank D or 1 Rank C to destroy the armor.]
      Well, this might be a little too powerful for it to be activated once every 3 posts.  Might I suggest having 10% damage resistance, boosting it to 15% in darkness instead?


    Spells:
    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS
    Xarram:



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    Kranzer
    Kranzer

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    Completed Re: Take Over: Demon Soul

    Post by Kranzer 14th July 2016, 8:14 pm

    Thank you for all the feedback. :) I made the suggested edits. For the Shadow Armor UA I switched it out for a different idea called Adaptive body. I took your suggestion to change the strength to just increased strength and speed and made that UA add in 10% if that's reasonable. I added in a 1 post cooldown times for the active abilities. Based on what I understand the Partial Takeovers have a duration limit which is set to 3 posts. So with that'd make it a max of two uses of the abilities each time the Partial Takeover is used. If you'd like we can chat on Skype for any further edits or we can continue posting here. I am more than happy to go either route. xourn.lockheart is my Skype. Thank you.


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    Anastasia Isayev
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    Completed Re: Take Over: Demon Soul

    Post by Anastasia Isayev 15th July 2016, 5:48 pm

    Take Over: Demon Soul BTSjguv


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