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    Vieille Mélodie D'une Nouvelle Main

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    Post by Guest 11th April 2016, 1:26 pm

    Name: Vieille Mélodie D'une Nouvelle Main
    Rank: Legendary + Item
    Type: Violin
    Description:
    In Case:
    Out of Case:
    Vieille Mélodie D'une Nouvelle Main, or just ‘Vieille’, is a violin that once belonged to Astrid’s grandmother back when she was an avid musician, and has been passed down through the Foss family for generations. It’s used to sooth the minds and souls of those who hear it.

    Strengths:
    Has fairly light weight.
    Abilities cannot be used by anyone who does not know the songs.

    Weaknesses:
    The violin cannot be summoned, therefore the user has to carry it.
    The songs have to be played perfectly in order to activate the abilities.
    If the song is interrupted the ability stops.

    Abilities:
    La Chanson De L'intérieur: When this song is played, depending on how exactly it is played, Astrid can manipulate the light around her to her will. Though this light cannot hurt anyone, it is mostly used for performance purposes, creating the story of the song with her light. (Light can travel up till 80 meters and adds 20 meters until it caps off at B rank, in which it will travel up to 100 meters) Any spells/abilities that stem off the light produced are limited in range to their respective rank. Any spell or ability used through this are increased in power by 60%.

    Guérison Requiem: When the song is played on this violin all allies within a 30 meter range (goes up by 10 until it caps off at A rank) and Astrid herself earn back 5 MP every post and 5% MP every other post, as well as giving back 50% 2x player rank damage to allies and herself. The AoE healing van only happen once every 5 posts.


    Last edited by Madame Astrid on 23rd July 2018, 2:53 pm; edited 4 times in total
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    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 11th April 2016, 6:30 pm

    AMI wrote:



    Guérison Requiem: When the song is played on this violin all allies within a 30 meter range (goes up by 10 until it caps off at A rank) and Astrid herself earn back 10 MP and HP every other post. I'm gonna need you to give this a maximum duration, a cooldown, a minimum of 1 strength, and a minimum of 2 weaknesses please. Aside from this ability, the rest of this beautiful piece of amazingness is good. Violinist master race will be the ones to survive the zombie apocalypse!
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    Post by Guest 11th April 2016, 7:12 pm

    Edited. The violin is ready for said apocalypse~
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    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 12th April 2016, 1:21 pm

    AMI wrote:

    Guérison Requiem:
    Equal to Player Rank (Max A Rank) <--- Please add this in
    Duration: 6
    Cooldown: 7
    Description: When the song is played on this violin all allies within a 30 meter range (goes up by 10 until it caps off at A rank) and Astrid herself earn back 10 MP and HP every other post. In total this can recover 30HP, and 30MP. Personally, I think 30HP is simply too low, and 30MP is a lot.

    Please reduce the MP recovery from 10 per 2 posts, to 3 per post.
    If you'd like, you can have this recover 1x Ability Rank Damage per post


    Strengths:
    Gives both MP and HP.

    Weakness:
    Has no other effect than healing.
    If the user messes up the healing ceases.


    I also rechecked your first ability, and I'd like you to edit the effect so it doesn't go to S Rank, since the abilities of Legendary(+) cap at 1 A Rank, and 1 B Rank. HOWEVER, at B Rank you can have the range of the light be 100 meters, only because the effect of the ability states that it's just a cosmetic ability. You'll also have to add to it that "Any spells/abilities that stem off the light produced are limited in range to their respective rank."
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    Post by Guest 12th April 2016, 7:55 pm

    Hopefully everything is edited correctly.
    Say if i missed anything. ^^
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    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 12th April 2016, 8:39 pm

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