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    Viktor's Descendant

    Odhran Aegisbane
    Odhran Aegisbane

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Zodiac Key- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Gods of the Celestial Spirit Realm
    Position : None
    Posts : 331
    Cosmic Coins : 35
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 786,120

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill: Ark of Embodiment
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Odhran Aegisbane 3rd June 2016, 3:57 pm

    Name: Elian Camnar
    Gender: Male
    Age: 18
    Birthday: 02/29
    Sexuality: Straight
    Special Characteristics: Numerous small scars across body, major scar across left eye

    Personality:
     
      Until he had learned his magic, Elian was seen as a kind, carefree, and outgoing guy. He was often seen caring for his younger brother after his parents had died, and was well-liked by the members of his community. The people of the village were aware of his and his brother’s true identities, and the truth behind their supposedly dead father. Elian and his brother were of the bloodline of the infamous cannibal, Victor. The boys’ father had acquired a taste for human flesh and blood and had travelled to satisfy his cravings.
       
    After the village elder had told the brothers the truth, Elian set off to find and kill his father. He had found that he could quickly learn a form of Blood Magic. After learning this magic and realising he could kill his father, Elian’s personality took a drastic change. Elian became increasingly introverted and began developing a case of sadism, and he grew an increasing obsession with the thought of killing his father. In the end, Elian had managed to kill his own father, after his father had killed Elian’s only true friend, his brother. Elian found that the world had seemed to abandon him due to his ancestry.
       
    Afterwards, Elian joined a minor Dark Guild and became known as the Blood Knight. He had become completely sadistic, taking pleasure in his opponent’s pain at his magic. He had killed many people in that time. However, that changed when a legal guild shut down his guild, sending an experienced wind mage to take down Elian. After a hard-fought battle, the mage ended up using his magic to throw Elian off of a nearby cliff, nearly killing Elian and causing his fear of heights.
     
      Elian no longer knew who he was, save for that he was of Victor’s Descent and he could use some magic involving blood, in addition to the burned-in memories of his childhood fiasco involving his family, leading to his wish to avenge his brother. Because of his lack of knowledge on anything, he has had a burning desire in his shriveled up, possibly dead heart to regain his memory. Despite this desire, he is always worrying about if he would uncover something terrifying in his past. His personality, as well as his power, completely changed. Elian remember the rush of joy he would get from the pain of others, and reveled in any opportunity he would get to hurt others. He remains a very introverted person, and would stop at nothing in order to obtain any goal he would wish to obtain, leading to a desire to be stronger in order to finally achieve anything close to happiness since it was ripped away from him in his childhood, which also lead to a desire to paint the world red in the blood of his enemies.

    His bloodline being that of the cannibal and blood mage Victor has lead to his obsession with blood and anything that used to be alive. However, the fact that his bloodline caused the death of two of the closest people he ever knew, his brother and his father, settled deep in Elian’s mind. When outside of battle in a time of complete peace (i.e. non-torture-y stuff), he resents his bloodline with a passion, but when in battle, he is completely taken over by his bloodline and wants nothing but the pain and bleeding of everything. This will often is seen as him hunting down retreating prey, and he knows they won’t be able to hide.
    In battle, Elian retains some sadism, enjoying the pain of his opposition. He will often disregard his own safety in order to cause his opponents as much pain as possible, without killing them, as death ends his fun. Despite being reckless, he easily becomes aware of his power draining, and will often flee a battle if he begins running out of blood, as if he runs out of blood, he becomes very weak and his magic is all but useless.

    Likes:
    Blood, because it’s the source of his magic
    Meat, because it used to be alive, and it contains blood
    Cherries and cherry flavoring, because it looks like blood
    The colour red, because it is the colour of blood
    Duster Coats, because they look dramatic
    Dislikes:
    The colour blue, because it’s the opposite of red, the colour of blood
    Hats, because they ruin his hair and he feels they don’t look good. At all.
    Dancing, as he feels it’s a waste of time
    Music, because he finds it to ruin his concentration in battle
    Motivations:
    Avenging his brother, as his brother’s life was taken too quickly from him
    Regaining his memories, as he wishes to remember more than just the bad things in his history
    Getting stronger, as he believes that more strength means he will reach his goals quicker
    Fears:
    Regaining his memories, as he is afraid if there is even more bad things from his past
    Heights, from the event that ended up nearly killing him
    Running low on blood, as it is the key source of his magic

    General Appearance


    Height: 6’0”
    Weight: 155 lbs
    Hair: Bright orange, in a faux hawk ~1.5 in above top of head, and reaching to middle of back of neck
    Eyes: Blood red
    Skin Tone: Light
    Appearance:
    Elian has relatively small featured, with small, slanted red eyes, a thin, aquiline nose, and small, pointed ears. He generally wears a black duster coat with black jeans and a red undershirt. In addition, he will often wear red loafers when outside of battle, but will quickly go barefooted when a battle begins. On the inside of his duster, he often has an array of knives in order to draw blood on his opponent. He wears a silver ring with a bright ruby on the top which acts as a button to activate a small blade on the bottom of the ring which impales into his hand, providing blood.


    Guild/Council

    Guild: Basilisk Fang
    Tattoo: Right side of neck, blood red
    Rank: D-Rank


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    Godlike Frederik
    Godlike Frederik
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    Post by Godlike Frederik 4th June 2016, 12:41 am

    It said it was not checked eons ago, if that may be the case our apologies. It can be because the staff might have overlooked something. Or because the staff currently works through character approval thread. https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t13953-character-approval-thread our current method of dealing with character applications.

    Either way, I will be your moderator for today. And be reviewing your application.


    First off and foremost, is your Personality around here we maintain a certain wordcount of 500 words for it. I can understand it might be a tad difficult to create a wall of text out of the blue like that. But what mostly works well, is taking all your current fears and motivations. And describe those in your personality as well. For instance, under motivations you have 'getting stronger' this can easily be used in your personality, where you explain why your characters needs to be stronger.

    Second, your personality as it is now, is more of a summary. Going deeper into some of the aspects of the personality would help with that. Like 'bloodline of the infamous cannibal, Victor' it is stated you and your characters brother are descended from that. But besides craving for flesh and blood it doesn't explain what for an emotional effect it has on Elian.


    Third, are the Motivations and Fears. Have them a bit more fleshed out, similar to your Likes and Dislikes. It can be one sentence, or a bit more explaining your character more thoroughly. Why is avenging his brother that important to him, Why does he want to get stronger is it because he wants to avenge his brother? Why does he fear heights?

    Anyway thats about it, you can bump this thread when you're ready again. By simply posting a reply with bump. Also if you need any further help feel free to send me a private message.


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    Odhran Aegisbane
    Odhran Aegisbane

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Zodiac Key- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Gods of the Celestial Spirit Realm
    Position : None
    Posts : 331
    Cosmic Coins : 35
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 786,120

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill: Ark of Embodiment
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Odhran Aegisbane 4th June 2016, 9:53 pm

    Bump


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    Godlike Frederik
    Godlike Frederik
    The Forsaken

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- 11 Sinner- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Apex of Darkness
    Position : None
    Posts : 2972
    Guild : Errings Rising
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 258,417

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Plague Craft
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Godlike Frederik 13th June 2016, 11:45 pm

    Approved


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