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    Heavenly Body Magic

    ChloeofFairytail
    ChloeofFairytail

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    Completed Heavenly Body Magic

    Post by ChloeofFairytail 26th February 2016, 8:36 pm

    Magic

    basic info:
    Linage:
    Unique Abilities:

    Spells:



    Last edited by ChloeofFairytail on 27th February 2016, 8:31 pm; edited 5 times in total
    Decayuss
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    Completed Re: Heavenly Body Magic

    Post by Decayuss 26th February 2016, 8:56 pm

    Decayuss here, and I'll be grading your Magic! Edits are in this color!

    Original:


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    ChloeofFairytail
    ChloeofFairytail

    Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Player 
    Lineage : Rage of the Soul Torn
    Position : None
    Posts : 65
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Heavenly Body Magic
    Second Skill:
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    Completed Re: Heavenly Body Magic

    Post by ChloeofFairytail 27th February 2016, 11:56 am

    Done


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    Completed Re: Heavenly Body Magic

    Post by Decayuss 27th February 2016, 8:21 pm

    For Light Bullets, the amount of damage you can pump out with them is quite a lot, considering each one does D rank damage (20) and you can fire up to 10 of them (which is 200 damage). And this is not even the maximum considering you can continue firing them after this. I ask that you take this into consideration, and you have a few options.

    1. You can put a maximum amount of damage it can deal.
    2. You can fire less shots.
    3. Anything else you have in mind.


    I see you just replaced the Immune to Gravity Unique Ability...that's fine. Anyways, five times your speed is way too much for anyone. I ask you reduce this to a 20% speed boost.

    Finally, reduce the duration of Aura's blindness by 1 post, and give it a definitive Cool Down


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    Lineage : Rage of the Soul Torn
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    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Experience : 75

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    First Skill: Heavenly Body Magic
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    Completed Re: Heavenly Body Magic

    Post by ChloeofFairytail 27th February 2016, 8:28 pm

    fixed it


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    Completed Re: Heavenly Body Magic

    Post by Decayuss 27th February 2016, 8:30 pm

    60 damage is still hefty for a D rank spell, since that's 3 times its damage.

    30 damage and you're good.


    Increase the Cool Down of Aura to 6.

    Fix this and I'll approve you.


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    ChloeofFairytail
    ChloeofFairytail

    Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Player 
    Lineage : Rage of the Soul Torn
    Position : None
    Posts : 65
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Heavenly Body Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Heavenly Body Magic

    Post by ChloeofFairytail 27th February 2016, 8:32 pm

    done


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    |Character Sheet |      Magic |
    Heavenly Body Magic N8OwMFS
    Decayuss
    Decayuss

    The Nephilim


    The Nephilim

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Guild Master- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : The True Nephalem
    Position : None
    Posts : 1836
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Nephalem Take Over
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Heavenly Body Magic

    Post by Decayuss 27th February 2016, 8:33 pm

    Heavenly Body Magic Deca-stamp_zpshi84vgm3


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