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    Post by Mark Baxter 20th July 2015, 2:37 pm



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    Solar Flare: Singing Sun

    Secondary Magic: Nope

    Caster or Holder: Holder

    Description: Solar Flare is a type of fire magic, but it is unique in many ways. One of these is the fact that fire produced with this magic is, for all intents and purposes, fire, but it is special in two ways. First off, it has no elemental weaknesses, meaning the fire produced with Solar Flare cannot be burnt out by water, or go out because of lack of air. Also, Solar Flare fire contains just the smallest sliver of the user's soul, making it inedible to Fire Dragon Slayers, Fire God Slayers, and Fire Demon Slayers. Also, Solar Flare changes the very user of the magic, turning them into a being made of pure fire. The only way to seal off this being and turn the user into a human is something called a "Solar Loop". By default, users of Solar Flare have four Solar Loops, and when they are wearing all of them, they are, for all intents and purposes, a human with the ability to use fire magic. However, as they remove their loops, they become less and less human, and more and more fire being.

    Singing Sun is a variant of Solar Flare magic that does not use the Solar Loops to the fullest extent of their power, however, it more than makes up for that with the pure power of the flames produced with Singing Sun. Because the Singing Sun flames are so absurdly powerful, the user can use them to propel themselves, essentially allowing them to fly. Singing Sun also specializes in taking people's spells, and turning them into the user's own power, very similarly to a slayer. Another thing Singing Sun is good at is blowing things up. Also, because the user is made partially out of fire, alcohol is purged from their system almost instantly.

    Strengths:

    No elemental weaknesses.

    Cannot be eaten by God Slayers, Dragon Slayers, or Demon Slayers.

    The user can become a being made out of fire, which can potentially be very powerful.

    Weaknesses:

    The more Solar Loops the user removes, the more susceptible they become to ice magic.

    Because Singing Sun is so devastating, it can often be used to accidentally hurt the user's allies.

    If the Solar Loops are broken, the user is basically screwed, because they are very weak to ice attacks, and their MP is slowly drained while they are in fire being mode.

    Singing Sun does not use the Loops to their full potential.

    Lineage:
    Pride of a Mercenary:

    Unique Abilities:

    Singing Sun:
    Solar Loops:
    Flame Creation:
    Hyper Mode:
    Gloves of the Sun:

    Spells:

    Signature Spells:
    D-Ranked Spells:
    C-Ranked Spells:
    B-Ranked Spells:
    Spell Fusions:
    Spell Template:


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    Post by Elijah 21st July 2015, 10:16 am

    [quote="Skyllon"]Magic

    Primary Magic: Earth God Slayer Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    God Slayer Magic is an ancient type of magic, taught by the Gods themselves, which can be used to destroy those called Gods. God Slayers can eat their respective elements, which allows them to recover their Mana, they can also incorporate their elements in their bodies, as well as use many different attacks that are related to their elements.

    Brennan learned his Earth God Slayer Magic from Gaia, the Earth Goddess herself and uses it just like any other God Slayer. He eats his elements, and uses black earth in order to attack his enemies. One of his most recognized spells is 'Earth God's Bellow', which allows him to shoot a stream of the black earth that his magic is recognized for from his mouth. Brennan has also learned a few God Slayer's Secret Arts, strong attacks that only those who are extremely Proficient in God Slaying Magic can learn.

    Strengths:

    • Defense: Earth is largely defensive in nature, so it can be used very well defensively.
    • Consumption: Earth is almost everywhere, therefore consuming it is easy for Earth God Slayers.
    • Area of Effect: Since earth makes up the ground, Area of Effect attacks are very easy to use.

    Weaknesses:

    • Demon Slayers: Earth God Slayers cannot consume Earth made by Earth Demon Slayers.
    • Metal: Earth Magic is weak against metal magic, as some metallic blades can cut through rock.
    • Water: Some manners of Earth magic can be turned into mud by water.
    • Incapacitation: If the user's body is largely incapacitated, it is impossible for Earth God Slayer Magic to be cast.

    Lineage:
    Pride of a Mercenary:
    Unique Abilities:
    Gaia's Blessing:

    Corruption Charm:

    Earthen Anatomy:

    God Slayer Benefits:

    Spells:

    Signature Spells:

    D-Rank Spells:

    C-Rank Spells:

    Okay.

    The changes are in brackets and in this color. Bump the thread when done with the changes. If you want to discuss the edits, we can do so over PM or on Skype, or just on this thread.
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    Post by Mark Baxter 21st July 2015, 12:04 pm

    Bump


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    Post by Elijah 21st July 2015, 12:48 pm

    Only one more change.

    In the spell Armor of Earth, please change the 50% damage increase, to adds C-rank damage to the users physical attacks.
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    Post by Mark Baxter 21st July 2015, 12:49 pm

    Bump


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    Post by Elijah 21st July 2015, 12:56 pm

    Looks good now.


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    Post by Aliannah 30th September 2015, 7:15 pm

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    Post by Cr1tikal 6th October 2015, 9:38 pm

    Notes in this color!

    Skyllon wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Earth God Slayer Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    God Slayer Magic is an ancient type of magic, taught by the Gods themselves, which can be used to destroy those called Gods. God Slayers can eat their respective elements, which allows them to recover their Mana, they can also incorporate their elements in their bodies, as well as use many different attacks that are related to their elements.

    Brennan learned his Earth God Slayer Magic from Gaia, the Earth Goddess herself, well, from an Enchanted Book that she made, and uses it just like any other God Slayer. He eats his elements, and uses black earth in order to attack his enemies. One of his most recognized spells is 'Earth God's Bellow', which allows him to shoot a stream of the black earth that his magic is recognized for from his mouth. Brennan has also learned a few God Slayer's Secret Arts, strong attacks that only those who are extremely Proficient in God Slaying Magic can learn.

    Strengths:

    • Defense: Earth is largely defensive in nature, so it can be used very well defensively.
    • Consumption: Earth is almost everywhere, therefore consuming it is easy for Earth God Slayers.
    • Area of Effect: Since earth makes up the ground, Area of Effect attacks are very easy to use.

    Weaknesses:

    • Demon Slayers: Earth God Slayers cannot consume Earth made by Earth Demon Slayers.
    • Metal: Earth Magic is weak against metal magic, as some metallic blades can cut through rock.
    • Water: Some manners of Earth magic can be turned into mud by water.
    • Incapacitation: If the user's body is largely incapacitated, it is impossible for Earth God Slayer Magic to be cast.

    Lineage:
    Pride of a Mercenary:
    Unique Abilities:
    Earth Manipulation:


    Corrupt Cross:

    Gaia's Eye:

    Gaia's Blessing:

    God Slayer Benefits:

    Spells:

    Signature Spells:

    D-Ranked Spells:
    C-Ranked Spells:






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    Post by Mark Baxter 7th October 2015, 5:30 am

    Bump!


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    Post by Cr1tikal 9th October 2015, 8:41 pm

    Spoiler:

    With all edits now finished, Approved!


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    Post by Wolfe 16th October 2015, 6:27 pm

    Spoiler:

    Topic has been moved per players request for edits.

    Bump when finished.


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    Post by Mark Baxter 19th October 2015, 12:48 pm

    Bump!


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    Post by Cr1tikal 2nd November 2015, 1:13 pm

    Spoiler:

    Approved, again!


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    Post by Akryn 19th November 2015, 9:02 pm

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    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 29th November 2015, 9:10 pm

    Sup brodine, I'll be takin' care of you this time 'round. My comments are in This color

    Dig Dug Champion wrote:

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Mountain God Slayer Magic

    Secondary Magic: Sinner's Sword Art: Excalibur

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description: Earth magic is arguably one of the best types of elemental magic, letting the user have the world under their feet at their fingertips. Earth God Slayer Magic takes this earth, and corrupts it, allowing the user to perform even more deadly effects than already possible with normal Earth Magic. However, there there are ways the refine the ever-so-powerful Earth God Slayer Magic even more, two ways, to be exact. These two sub-techniques are called Mountain God Slayer Magic and Desert God Slayer Magic.

    In order to use his magic more effectively, Brennan focused specifically on one sub-type of Earth God Slayer Magic, the Mountain sub-type. The magic is obviously still Earth God Slayer Magic, so the user can still manipulate/create all aspects of the earth, but their focus is manipulating stone, which most mountains are made of. This affinity for stone causes the user to focus much less on the versatility of sand, and much more on the brute destructive strength of stone. Because stone is much less malleable than sand or even everyday earth, Mountain God Slayers focus much more on buffing themselves with their own magic power and dealing one single devastating blow, which might very well be a one hit knock out.

    Brennan himself takes the concept of 'self-buffing' to a whole new level, a grand majority of his spells focus on making him a devastating brute, in exchange for his speed, and allow him to deal explosive blows with even just his bare fists. However, because of this, Brennan often moves much slower than is ideal, which cannot generally be fixed by a magic that centers around stones.

    Strengths:

    Mountain God Slayer Magic can be used for self-buffing, meaning that the user can make themselves stronger with their magic.

    Although largely melee in nature, Mountain God Slayer Magic allows the user to hurtle boulders at opponents.

    The user can turn any existing earth into stone, allowing this magic to be used anywhere where there is earth.

    Weaknesses:

    Wind spells are generally more effective against Mountain God Slayer ranged spells, as most of the ranged spells can be easily deflected by wind.

    When the user buffs themselves, they often become slower, due to the fact that stone is very heavy.

    Often times, casting the user's spells requires some sort of movement, making them nearly impossible to cast if the user is gagged.
    This is more of a minor nit-pick, not a real balancing comment; but binding is when you make someone immobile or less mobile. Gagging is when you prevent them from speaking by binding their mouths.

    Most types of magic that involve some sort of explosion (i.e. Crash Magic) can weaken Mountain God Slayer Magic's spells by exploding part of the stone.

    Lineage:
    Pride of a Mercenary:


    Unique Abilities:
    Blessing of the Mountain- Passive:


    Rocky Terrain- Passive:


    Earth Manipulation- Passive:


    Godspeed- Passive:


    God Slayer Benefits:


    Spells:

    Signature Spells:


    D-Ranked Spells:


    C-Ranked Spells:


    Spell Template:


    Locked Until B-Rank:

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    Post by Mark Baxter 29th November 2015, 9:23 pm

    Bumpie bump bump!


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    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 29th November 2015, 10:26 pm

    I noticed you only have a normal signature spell; the rules have changed slightly since you last checked them I think. On top of your normal signature, at C Rank you also gain a D Rank signature slot.
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    Post by Mark Baxter 30th November 2015, 6:06 am

    Hmm, would you mind if I added that at B-Rank? I'm in a rush to get this approved for a Dungeon...


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    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 30th November 2015, 8:32 am

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    Post by Mark Baxter 17th January 2016, 4:39 pm

    Not for whoever grades this--

    Please leave the magic unlocked in order for me to add my B-Rank spells. I am currently too busy to add them, and I need my magic approved for the event. But if at all possible, please leave it unlocked.

    B-Rank UA added, just not spells.


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    Akryn
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    Post by Akryn 17th January 2016, 8:12 pm

    FINALIZED AND CLOSED!


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    Post by Princess Natsu 19th January 2016, 3:38 pm

    Unlocked by the request of the user.


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    Post by Mark Baxter 19th January 2016, 3:43 pm

    Edits:

    - 'Hyper Mode' UA totally revamped.
    - 'Solar Loops' UA totally revamped.
    - 'Flame Creation' UA slightly edited.
    - 'Flame Travel' D-Ranked spell removed.
    - 'Flicker' D-Rank spell added.
    - 'Flaming Uppercut' C-Rank spell removed.
    - 'Dual Burn' C-Rank spell added.
    - B-Ranked spells added.
    -Spell Fusions added.
    -Lineage Signature Spell 'Sanguine Sword' added.


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    Post by King Elyx 24th January 2016, 1:29 pm

    Brennan wrote:


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    Solar Flare: Singing Sun

    Secondary Magic: Nope

    Caster or Holder: Holder

    Description: Solar Flare is a type of fire magic, but it is unique in many ways. One of these is the fact that fire produced with this magic is, for all intents and purposes, fire, but it is special in two ways. First off, it has no elemental weaknesses, meaning the fire produced with Solar Flare cannot be burnt out by water, or go out because of lack of air. Also, Solar Flare fire contains just the smallest sliver of the user's soul, making it inedible to Fire Dragon Slayers, Fire God Slayers, and Fire Demon Slayers. Also, Solar Flare changes the very user of the magic, turning them into a being made of pure fire. The only way to seal off this being and turn the user into a human is something called a "Solar Loop". By default, users of Solar Flare have four Solar Loops, and when they are wearing all of them, they are, for all intents and purposes, a human with the ability to use fire magic. However, as they remove their loops, they become less and less human, and more and more fire being.

    Singing Sun is a variant of Solar Flare magic that does not use the Solar Loops to the fullest extent of their power, however, it more than makes up for that with the pure power of the flames produced with Singing Sun. Because the Singing Sun flames are so absurdly powerful, the user can use them to propel themselves, essentially allowing them to fly. Singing Sun also specializes in taking people's spells, and turning them into the user's own power, very similarly to a slayer. Another thing Singing Sun is good at is blowing things up. Also, because the user is made partially out of fire, alcohol is purged from their system almost instantly.

    Strengths:

    No elemental weaknesses.

    Cannot be eaten by God Slayers, Dragon Slayers, or Demon Slayers.

    The user can become a being made out of fire, which can potentially be very powerful.

    Weaknesses:

    The more Solar Loops the user removes, the more susceptible they become to ice magic.

    Because Singing Sun is so devastating, it can often be used to accidentally hurt the user's allies.

    If the Solar Loops are broken, the user is basically screwed, because they are very weak to ice attacks, and their MP is slowly drained while they are in fire being mode.

    Singing Sun does not use the Loops to their full potential.

    Lineage:
    Pride of a Mercenary:

    Unique Abilities:

    Singing Sun:
    Solar Loops:
    Flame Creation:
    Hyper Mode:
    Gloves of the Sun:

    Spells:

    Signature Spells:
    D-Ranked Spells:
    C-Ranked Spells:
    B-Ranked Spells:
    Spell Fusions:
    Spell Template:

    Hey Brennan! Elyx here! I will be grading your application today! All of the comments I made above are in this color. Please consider them as you edit. If you have any questions, do not be afraid to shoot me a PM and I will answer back ASAP. Thank you!
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    Post by Mark Baxter 24th January 2016, 6:38 pm

    *gasp* Elyx is a mod again!

    Alright, so my edits to my UAs I made did not save, so there have been slight changes made to those. All edits you asked for have been made.


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