PET(DONE)

Kai_Shibetake wrote:Name:Tsuna
Species:Sky Liger
Type:Combat pet
Description:

Spoiler:

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[b]Abilities:

-Sustained flight <-- OK
-Comprehension and duplication of human speech <-- OK
-Immense stamina(only when anger) <-- OK
-Immense strength(only when anger) <-- OK
-Healing light emits from it's body <--A bit sketchy, healing light to heal its owner I presume? Please explain this.
-Thick fur for medium type armor <-- OK
-Poison and disease immunization <-- OK
-Can turned anger and turned into adult 5 times in a thread with duration of 5 posts for each trasformation before turning back to cub and cooldown post before can be anger again is 2 posts. <--This looks like a spell to me. Cant be a passive ability. You can include this below but you have to take one out.

Name:Healing Wave
Rank:B <-- Rank, should either be C or D
Description:

Because of his unknown nature,its body strangely emits healing light from his own bodies but it only can heal others but not itself.The light can heal any wound or poison of B rank and below only but no A rank and above.The light from his body is emits from his bodies giving a wide area effect.

<-- Rank, change B to D and A to C
Strengths:

-Massive area of effect. <-- State the range, and not too wide please
-Can also cure poison. <-- OK
-Very useful while acting as backup to help it's master while fighting.<-- OK, just keep in mind it may get harmed or worse killed.

Weaknesses:

-Cannot heal itself.<-- OK
-Can be cancelled if attacked by enemies while doing it or loss concentration.<-- OK
-Cannot do nothing else like offensive attack while doing it.<-- OK
-Cooldown 1 post,can use 2 times before cooldown.<-- Change Cooldown to 2 post, Duration 1 post.
-Cannot heal wounds or poisons of A rank and above.<-- Canot heal poison or wounds made by rank C magic

Name:Sonic Speed
Rank:B (Turned to A when its anger) <-- Chang B to D and A to C
Description:

Because of its flight cappabilities it can use sonic speed that increase his speed tremendolously that it use for transporting the caster.It is so fast that people rarely seen through this.It speed is so great that when we get hit but it our flesh is cut through.The speed produce wind like razor that cut through even trees.Using this it can lash out at enemies to attack it or just for faster trasportion.

<-- You have to choose on this one, either you faster trasportation or lash out at enemies.Also im assuming the caster is its master.
Strengths:

-It is very fast that only a skilled enemies can see through this attack.<-- Does skilled mean higher ranked mages?
-Can be use for transporation <-- As ive said you have to choose
-Very hard to predict the attack

<-- Same as my last comment
Weaknesses:

-Earth,Mud,Rock magic users can block this with defensive spell of C rank and above but for other users only B rank and above defensive spell can block it. <-- Change C to D and B to C
-Can be use 3 times before cooldown,2 cooldown post.(Can be used 4 time before cooldown with 2 cooldown post when anger) <-- Actually as long as its within post limit you can use it as long as you want. Please clarify the cooldown and Duration
-Attack may be innacurate <-- OK
-Can be counter back to it by Wind mages users. <-- OK
-Can be easily dispersed by Wind mages. <-- OK

Name:Shockwave Roar
Rank:A <-- Change to C or D
Description:

It go by a stance position and give a great fearful roar.If you think this a normal roar you are wrong.The roar give a shockwave empulse to enemies making them somewhat petrified and cant move.This is cause by the roar which released shockwave empulse to enemies's nerve cell which prevent any activity and movement for temporary.

<--So in short an attack that can stun enemies, please limit the range of this attack.
Strengths:

-Enemies is somewhat petrified for 2 post <--1 post only, 2 posts and they are sitting ducks
-Enemies can attack by that time. <-- not sure how this became a strength
-Giving chances for us to attack <-- Same here, not sure how this is useful

Weaknesses:

-Though enemies cannot move but some mages with mind type magic like illusion may use his/her magics. <-- OK, but might i also add in, those that doesnt require hand gestures or rituals can use magic freely too.
-Can be use 1 time before cooldown,cooldown post is 2(Can be use i time before cooldown with cooldown post of 1 when anger) <-- Cooldown 3 duration 1
-Electric type mages can use his own magics to counter this magic. <-- Just electical mages? what about higher ranked spells? And also barriers and shield?

Kai_Shibetake wrote:Name:Tsuna
Species:Sky Liger
Type:Combat pet
Description:[spoiler]Adult Sky Liger

Abilities:

-Sustained flight <-- Fine
-Comprehension and duplication of human speech <-- Fine
-Immense stamina <-- Enhanced Stamina
-Immense strength <-- Enhanced Strength
-Thick fur for medium type armor <-- Can be pierced by C-rank Everything.
-Poison and disease immunization <-- Remove

Name:Sonic Speed
Rank:C
Description:

Because of its flight capabilities it can use sonic speed that increase his speed tremendously that it use for attacking enemies.It is so fast that people rarely seen through this.It speed is so great that when we get hit but it our flesh is cut through.The speed produce wind like razor that cut through even trees.Using this it can lash out at enemies to attack them with razor like wind.

Strengths:

-It is very fast that only a higher rank enemies can see through this attack. <-- Fine
-Very hard to predict the attack from this attack because of its fast attack.<-- Fine

Weaknesses:

-Earth,Mud,Rock magic users can block this with defensive spell of D rank and above but for other users only C rank and above defensive spell can block it. <-- Fine
-2 duration posts,2 cooldown post. <-- Fine
-Attack may be innacurate <-- Fine
-Can be counter back to it by Wind mages users. <-- Fine
-Can be easily dispersed by Wind mages. <-- Fine

Name:Shockwave Roar
Rank:C
Description:

It go by a stance position and give a great fearful roar.If you think this a normal roar you are wrong.The roar give a shockwave empulse to enemies making them somewhat stunned and cant move.This is cause by the roar which released shockwave empulse to enemies's nerve cell which prevent any activity and movement for temporary.The roar also has disintegrate ability which hurt their opponent by making them had a burn like wound that increase its painful over time like a poison but its not..The limit range for it's attack is by 15 meters around him.

Strengths:

-Enemies is somewhat stunned for 1 post <-- Fine
-Enemies cannot attack or even move to dodge at that time. <-- Enemies can attack, they just can't physically move.
-While unable to move the enemies suffer pains from the roar that increase overtime if the enemies had scratch for 1 post as long as the stun last. <-- Fine

Weaknesses:

-Though enemies cannot move but some mages that doesnt require hand gestures or rituals can use magic like illusion can be use to counter attack.<-- Just say that mages can still find ways to counter attack
-Cooldown post are 3,duration post is 1 <-- Fine
-Electric and Earth type mages are uneffected by this magic. <--How are they not effected? Its a sound attack.
-Higher rank spells,shield or armor of rank B be and above be able to resist the shock <-- Correction, Rank C and Above.