Naknight

• Suitable for offense, defense and support
  
• Suitable for fighting both multiple people and single people
  

• Due to the nanites being microscopic robots most of the magic can be eaten by metal slayers
  
• Electric type magic is 25% extra effective against this magic
  
• Limited by the user's imagination and knowledge of what they are reconstructing/upgrading
  

• Weapon creation: The user is able to change his/her body into close ranged weaponry in order to enhance their physical strike capacity. At D, C and B rank this is equivalent to a weak rank weapon, at A and S this goes to strong, at H it goes to legendary. This could be something as sharpening the user's things to blades or as large as changing the user's entire arm into a giant hammer. At most the weapon can be 6ft in length.
  
• Map: A thin layer of near invisible nanites can be sent out over a large area. This area is 100m and increases by 100m every rank. This mist sends a message into the user's head that maps out the area. It will seep into buildings and other areas allowing for the mapping of the inside of buildings. However, they will not be able to easily identify what objects are merely that their are solid and non-solid objects. This mist costs no MP to activate and can remain indefinitely.
  
• Flight: The user can configure their body to form wings that have small thrusters attached allowing for the user to fly as fast as they can move on the ground.
  

D rank 5/5:

Signature spells:

Veil Crane wrote:Demonic Realm
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:

Within their realm a demon is king and this magic brings the concept of their realm to this world. Within a certain area the user is able to freely manipulate the very space within their realm and everything within it. This has uses in both offense, defense and support.

In terms of offense the user is able to create energy beams, explosions, blades, and constructs.
In tersm of defense the user can construct armor, walls and even things like statues to defend them.
In terms of support they can enhance themselves or allies in various ways including transforming himself into his true demonic realm.

The realm starts at 100ft in range at D rank and increases by 100ft every rank.
I would rather the demonic realm bit be part of your Unique Abilities

Strengths:

• Suitable for offense, defense and support
  
• Suitable for fighting both multiple people and single people
  

Weaknesses:

• Range is limited to the territory
  
• Can only control within territory
  
• Opponents can easily gauge the user's max range
  

Abilities/Powers:

• Gravity Defiance: By channeling energy to the hands and feet the user is able to freely walk upon walls and ceilings. This also allows for flight and walking on water.
  
• Automated defense: The user has a natural defense mechanism built in which causes a small field of magical to flare up around an area hit. This reduces same rank and below physical and spell damage by 10% and each rank above by 5%.
  
• Map: The user is able to focus and map out the area within their territory. This allows them to know where everything is within their territory this includes people. However, he cannot see inside buildings so if someone is inside then he will not know where they are. This is updated in his head in almost real time and he is able to project this out to show people.
  
• Minor Telekinesis: The user can freely manipulate small objects within their field of vision via manipulating the space around them. This is most often used to carry wine bottles to himself. This can be used on his weapons and armor, but cannot be used on others weapons and armor.
  
• Range increase: All physical attacks will have a small amount of energy surrounding them that is near invisible. This will increase the range of the physical attacks by about four inches which can throw off targets quite a bit.
  

D rank 5/5:

C Rank 8/8:

B rank 7/7:

A rank 6/6:

Anastasia Isayev wrote:1:  Demonic Realm, as it was written prior, effects the range of your spells.  It was never mentioned in the original that you were in the center of the realm, which could essentially allow you to move and perform your spell's ranges at 100 feet as a D Rank, which is more than double a D Rank's spell's range.  I had asked staff about it and they were the ones that stated it should be a UA.  With the way it was originally presented:
D Rank:  100 ft = 30 meters
C Rank:  200 ft = 61 meters
B Rank:  300 ft = 91 meters
A Rank:  400 ft = 122 meters
S Rank:  500 ft = 152 meters
H Rank:  600 ft = 182 meters
Considering how it used to be written, that would be near double range for most of your spells until you get to A Rank.  Which, even then, is still 50% larger.  However, with the change that it is now centered, it effectively cuts it in half which I agree is now usable (though, it undercuts the higher ranks in terms of range).  But as mentioned before, staff stated it was something that ought to be a UA.  However, with the inclusion of Veil always being in the middle, I'll give it a pass.  

I thought i'd implied the center thing. I added it as a clarification just incase. Glad that sorted that

2:  A teleport can work much different out of combat than it does while in combat.  A teleport out of combat can be approved for traveling MUCH further than it can be used in combat, which is resorted to a simple movement spell.  The only reason I asked for that is if it is used Out of Combat, I would allow you to travel much further while in combat, allowing you to travel only the rank's distance. I usually offer this to all teleportation spells; though I may have worded it bad. As i've not limited it to within the territory and Veil at the center is this ok? Same for the replacement sort of bit

3:  The A Rank distance is generally 75m/246 ft.  Usually, spells are to travel at half of the distance per second.  So normally spells of A Rank travel for 75m @ 37.5m/s.  So having your A Rank spell travel at 75m/s is actually very good.  It's also faster than most mods will allow. The guidelines are well...guidelines. I don't mind messing with speeds much though 75m/s is quite slow imo. Giving spells a set range negates the whole territory concept and thus makes the magic pointless. Whilst I appreciate the guidelines...I also feel that creativity should be taken into account and we shouldn't force abitrary ranges on things...just my opinion

4:  With the inclusion of Veil always being in the middle; it's fine now.  If Veil wasn't in the middle, it would have allowed extended range and, quite frankly, full reign of anything that happens within the area, which I'm not exactly a fan of.  However, after the rewording of Veil being in the center of it, I give it a pass.

5:  As for Obscuring Mist -- That's just how debuffing/negative effects work on this site. I agree if it was a debuff or negative effect directly effecting someone. However, if a fog rolled into an area higher ranks wouldn't magically be able to see through it. That's all this is...a mist. It makes no sense to me that rank alone would be enough to thwart this. Enhanced sight sure, but just rank? Seems a bit meh

6:  For Invisibility -- See above.  These rules are in the mod grading guidelines. See above, but also this isn't a debuff or negative effect. Its camouflage basically. However, I did add something that means that higher ranks are more likely to see the shimmer

7:  Sensing -- My mistake, you're correct on this one.

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There are a few things I initially forgot to correct in the first wave, but once you fix the above, I'll get around to correcting those.

Veil Crane wrote:Demonic Realm
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:

Within their realm a demon is king and this magic brings the concept of their realm to this world. Within a certain area the user is able to freely manipulate the very space within their realm and everything within it. This has uses in both offense, defense and support.

In terms of offense the user is able to create energy beams, explosions, blades, and constructs.
In tersm of defense the user can construct armor, walls and even things like statues to defend them.
In terms of support they can enhance themselves or allies in various ways including transforming himself into his true demonic realm.

The realm starts at 100ft in range at D rank and increases by 100ft every rank. The user is always at the centre so the maximum range of most spells is half that of the territories width.

Strengths:

• Suitable for offense, defense and support
  
• Suitable for fighting both multiple people and single people
  

Weaknesses:

• Range is limited to the territory
  
• Can only control within territory
  
• Opponents can easily gauge the user's max range
  

Abilities/Powers:

• Gravity Defiance: By channeling energy to the hands and feet the user is able to freely walk upon walls and ceilings. This also allows for flight and walking on water.
  
• Automated defense: The user has a natural defense mechanism built in which causes a small field of magical to flare up around an area hit. This reduces same rank and below physical and spell damage by 10% and each rank above by 5%.
  
• Map: The user is able to focus and map out the area within their territory. This allows them to know where everything is within their territory this includes people. However, he cannot see inside buildings so if someone is inside then he will not know where they are. This is updated in his head in almost real time and he is able to project this out to show people.
  
• Minor Telekinesis: The user can freely manipulate small objects within their field of vision via manipulating the space around them. This is most often used to carry wine bottles to himself. This can be used on his weapons and armor, but cannot be used on others weapons and armor.
  
• Range increase: All physical attacks will have a small amount of energy surrounding them that is near invisible. This will increase the range of the physical attacks by about four inches which can throw off targets quite a bit.
  

D rank 5/5:

C Rank 8/8:

B rank 7/7:

A rank 6/6:

Veil Crane wrote:Demonic Realm
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:

Within their realm a demon is king and this magic brings the concept of their realm to this world. Within a certain area the user is able to freely manipulate the very space within their realm and everything within it. This has uses in both offense, defense and support.

In terms of offense the user is able to create energy beams, explosions, blades, and constructs.
In tersm of defense the user can construct armor, walls and even things like statues to defend them.
In terms of support they can enhance themselves or allies in various ways including transforming himself into his true demonic realm.

The realm starts at 100ft in range at D rank and increases by 100ft every rank. The user is always at the centre so the maximum range of most spells is half that of the territories width.

Strengths:

• Suitable for offense, defense and support
  
• Suitable for fighting both multiple people and single people
  

Weaknesses:

• Range is limited to the territory
  
• Can only control within territory
  
• Opponents can easily gauge the user's max range
  

Abilities/Powers:

• Gravity Defiance: By channeling energy to the hands and feet the user is able to freely walk upon walls and ceilings. This also allows for flight and walking on water.
  
• Automated defense: The user has a natural defense mechanism built in which causes a small field of magical to flare up around an area hit. This reduces same rank and below physical and spell damage by 10% and each rank above by 5%.
  
• Map: The user is able to focus and map out the area within their territory. This allows them to know where everything is within their territory this includes people. However, he cannot see inside buildings so if someone is inside then he will not know where they are. This is updated in his head in almost real time and he is able to project this out to show people.
  
• Minor Telekinesis: The user can freely manipulate small objects within their field of vision via manipulating the space around them. This is most often used to carry wine bottles to himself. This can be used on his weapons and armor, but cannot be used on others weapons and armor.
  
• Range increase: All physical attacks will have a small amount of energy surrounding them that is near invisible. This will increase the range of the physical attacks by about four inches which can throw off targets quite a bit.
  

D rank 5/5:

C Rank 8/8:

B rank 7/7:

A rank 6/6:

Veil Crane wrote:Demonic Realm
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:

Within their realm a demon is king and this magic brings the concept of their realm to this world. Within a certain area the user is able to freely manipulate the very space within their realm and everything within it. This has uses in both offense, defense and support.

In terms of offense the user is able to create energy beams, explosions, blades, and constructs.
In tersm of defense the user can construct armor, walls and even things like statues to defend them.
In terms of support they can enhance themselves or allies in various ways including transforming himself into his true demonic realm.

The realm starts at 100ft in range at D rank and increases by 100ft every rank. The user is always at the centre so the maximum range of most spells is half that of the territories width.

Strengths:

• Suitable for offense, defense and support
  
• Suitable for fighting both multiple people and single people
  

Weaknesses:

• Range is limited to the territory
  
• Can only control within territory
  
• Opponents can easily gauge the user's max range
  

Abilities/Powers:

• Gravity Defiance: By channeling energy to the hands and feet the user is able to freely walk upon walls and ceilings. This also allows for flight and walking on water.
  
• Automated defense: The user has a natural defense mechanism built in which causes a small field of magical to flare up around an area hit. This reduces same rank and below physical and spell damage by 10% and each rank above by 5%.
  
• Map: The user is able to focus and map out the area within their territory. This allows them to know where everything is within their territory this includes people. However, he cannot see inside buildings so if someone is inside then he will not know where they are. This is updated in his head in almost real time and he is able to project this out to show people.
  
• Minor Telekinesis: The user can freely manipulate small objects within their field of vision via manipulating the space around them. This is most often used to carry wine bottles to himself. This can be used on his weapons and armor, but cannot be used on others weapons and armor.
  
• Range increase: All physical attacks will have a small amount of energy surrounding them that is near invisible. This will increase the range of the physical attacks by about four inches which can throw off targets quite a bit.
  

D rank 5/5:

C Rank 8/8:

B rank 7/7:

A rank 6/6:

Veil Crane wrote:Storm Maestro
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:

Music is something that influences many things. It can tame savage beasts, cause plants to grow, sooth the soul and much more. Those who master the lost magic known as Storm Maestro become known as Conductors of the Storm and gain the power to turn the very weather itself to their will with simple gestures. It is said that the greatest Virtuoso can use their magic to play a tune as they kill you.


Those who practise this magic will tend to be found whistling, snapping their fingers or tapping their feet. They are very sensitive to sounds, particularly poor music and badly played music can actually negatively effect them or send them into a rage.  However, they have to have a good view of the battle so they are probably around somewhere nearby even if you can't see them.

Those who wield this magic wield the power of lightning, hail, snow, rain and wind and can combine these freely to make powerful spells that can eliminate their opponent. The odd thing about these spells is that every one of them will either make a musical sound whilst active or when it strucks.

Strengths:

• Suitable for offense, defense and support
  
• Suitable for fighting both multiple people and single people
  

Weaknesses:

• Bad music can enrage and weaken the user
  
• Silence spells will halve the effectiveness of these spells because the sound is part of the power
  
• Other than the traps and a few support spells this is not useful for stealthy combat because all the spells make musical noise
  

Abilities/Powers:

• Gravity Defiance: By manipulating a mixture of the natural electricity, moisture and air around them the user is able to freely walk on the air, walls and ceilings as well as upon water and other liquid and gaseous surfaces. Of course, dangerous surfaces like lava and acid will still hurt them.
  
• Enhanced sound capacity: The user's sense of hearing is greatly enhanced allowing them to hear 50% better than most without negative consequences. Furthermore, they are able to amplify the sounds they generate by 50% meaning they can sing, shout, clap a lot louder than most. They can also do the opposite and nullify the sounds they make to near silence making them incredibly stealthy.
  
• Map: A thin layer of near invisible mist can be sent out over a large area. This area is 100m and increases by 100m every rank. This mist sends a message into the user's head that maps out the area. It will seep into buildings and other areas allowing for the mapping of the inside of buildings. However, they will not be able to easily identify what objects are merely that their are solid and non-solid objects. This mist costs no MP to activate and can remain indefinitely.
  
• Team Speak: The mist used by map can also be used to communicate with people. The user will hear conversations spoken within the mist and will be able to speak freely to those within the mist, even isolating particular people. It is like he is whispering in their ear in a melodious way.
  
• Minor object creation: By manipulating the various elements under their control they are able to create non-offensive tools such as keys, basic survival equipment, batteries and other useful tools. If used for offense these will only do 1hp damage.
  

D rank 5/5:

C Rank 8/8:

B rank 7/7:

A rank 6/6:

Veil Crane wrote:

Storm Maestro
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:

Music is something that influences many things. It can tame savage beasts, cause plants to grow, sooth the soul and much more. Those who master the lost magic known as Storm Maestro become known as Conductors of the Storm and gain the power to turn the very weather itself to their will with simple gestures. It is said that the greatest Virtuoso can use their magic to play a tune as they kill you.


Those who practise this magic will tend to be found whistling, snapping their fingers or tapping their feet. They are very sensitive to sounds, particularly poor music and badly played music can actually negatively effect them or send them into a rage.  However, they have to have a good view of the battle so they are probably around somewhere nearby even if you can't see them.

Those who wield this magic wield the power of lightning, hail, snow, rain and wind and can combine these freely to make powerful spells that can eliminate their opponent. The odd thing about these spells is that every one of them will either make a musical sound whilst active or when it strucks.

Strengths:

• Suitable for offense, defense and support
  
• Suitable for fighting both multiple people and single people
  

Weaknesses:

• Bad music can enrage and weaken the user
  
• Silence spells will halve the effectiveness of these spells because the sound is part of the power
  
• Other than the traps and a few support spells this is not useful for stealthy combat because all the spells make musical noise
  

Abilities/Powers:

• Gravity Defiance: By manipulating a mixture of the natural electricity, moisture and air around them the user is able to freely walk on the air, walls and ceilings as well as upon water and other liquid and gaseous surfaces. Of course, dangerous surfaces like lava and acid will still hurt them.
  
• Enhanced sound capacity: The user's sense of hearing is greatly enhanced allowing them to hear 50% better than most without negative consequences. Furthermore, they are able to amplify the sounds they generate by 50% meaning they can sing, shout, clap a lot louder than most. They can also do the opposite and nullify the sounds they make to near silence making them incredibly stealthy.
  
• Map: A thin layer of near invisible mist can be sent out over a large area. This area is 100m and increases by 100m every rank. This mist sends a message into the user's head that maps out the area. It will seep into buildings and other areas allowing for the mapping of the inside of buildings. However, they will not be able to easily identify what objects are merely that their are solid and non-solid objects. This mist costs no MP to activate and can remain indefinitely.
  
• Team Speak: The mist used by map can also be used to communicate with people. The user will hear conversations spoken within the mist and will be able to speak freely to those within the mist, even isolating particular people. It is like he is whispering in their ear in a melodious way.
  
• Minor object creation: By manipulating the various elements under their control they are able to create non-offensive tools such as keys, basic survival equipment, batteries and other useful tools. If used for offense these will only do 1hp damage.
  

D rank 5/5:

C Rank 8/8:

B rank 7/7:

A rank 6/6: