Puppeteer of Shadows

Magic

Primary Magic: Puppeteer of Shadows
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:
To Hana, shadows are merely just a toy/tool. Ever since she was a small girl she would play with the shadows making animals and such and control them. Hana's then grown fond of puppets. Wooden or not, and she's earned her magic's nickname through many fights. She has learned to use one's shadow to take control of them or any other object, counting as useful.

How it works is that Hana forms her magic into invisible strings connecting to her fingers. Since she can't control a person just by their body or an object's form, she uses her talent of manipulating shadows and connects her strings to those. Since a person's body and shadow are one, Hana is now able to manipulate the victim's body or the object. However, she may not break any bones or parts of a material.


Strengths:
♠ May control any shadow
♠ May control any object or person of the shadow
♠️ Works strongest when a shadow is visible

Weaknesses:
♠️ Can't see shadows unless there's moonlight so can't her magic in the dark
♠️ No longer has control if the person is merely cut
♠️ If she loses too much concentration, she no longer has control

Lineage:
Knight of Spirits

Description: One of the Seven Knights of King Kuroryu, this Knight could summon ethereal spirits to aid him in battle offense. He was said to be extremely proficient with his equipment as they were powered with spirits.

Unique Abilities: Allows the user to increase offense and defense capabilities upon activation. Acts as a passive throughout the period of activation. Activating too long will result in body paralysis. As another passive, without activation, the user is adept with using equipment (+5 base "Unarmed" damage and they're generally skilled with their weapons).
Night Affinity: ♠️ Night is the prime time of darkness, and as such, Shinobu gains a 10% boost in strength and speed and 5% MP every two posts as soon as the sun has set below the horizon.


Spells:

Name:  Shadow Needles
Rank: D
Type: Shadow, Offensive
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Description: Any and all surrounding shadows rush to the user. Then the shadows shoot out from underneath the user out towards the enemy. Then the shadow shoot out in random directions, large needles a meter in size.  The shadow is solid.
Strengths:
-There will always be shadows or darkness.
-Random pattern makes it harder to predict
-Large needles
-Does 2 regular D-Rank hit if 26-50 needles hit, 1 if 1-25 hit. Most needles that can be released is 50, but is rarely used so it doesn't take up all her magical energy.
Weaknesses:
-Light Magic
-Fire Magic
-Can avoid by not being near the shadow


Name: Shadow Cloak
Rank: D
Type: Shadow Defensive
Duration:2 posts.
Cooldown: 4 posts.
Description: If Hana feels the need she could hide in somebody else's shadow whether it's for a break or not a sneak attack.
Strengths:
♦ Great for sneak attacks
♦ Gives her time to restore her magical energy
♦ She would be able to spy without getting caught

Weaknesses:
♦ Can't attack or harm ANYTHING
♦ Cannot use any other magic in this state
♦ Although she does have time, it's only for two posts

Name: Shadow's sight
Rank: D
Type: Shadow Offensive
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: Allows Hana to see shadows in the dark so that if she's in absolute need of a shadow, she may use one. It also allows her to see in the dark

Strengths:
♦ Helps Hana to find  shadow to manipulate
♦ Hana could also use this to find a hidden enemy
♦Hana could use this skill if it's pitch black
Weaknesses:
♦ May not use another spell in this state so has to be accurate when connecting strings to a shadow
♦ Her eyes burn a little afterwards
♦ Everything moves in slow motion.

Name: Shadow's sword
Rank: D
Type: Shadow Offensive
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts.
Description: Using shadows Hana can make a sword that can only cut through something once until it dissapears. The sword can cleanly cut through ibject unless it's living, then it can only cot through 2 inches deep and 5 inches long. This only causes 1 regular D-Rank hit.
Strengths:
♦ If she is in need of a weapon she may use her magic to get one in an instant
♦ Her sword is a shadow so it's ALMOST indestructible
Weaknesses:
♦ Is weak against fire magic
♦ If it hasn't cut anything by 1 post, it fades
♦ Fades even when it doesn't cut through desired target

Decayuss here and I'll be grading your Magic! Edits are in this color!

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You still need to state how much damage "Shadow Needles" do. Once you do that, and if it's reasonable, I can approve ya.'

All changes have been made. I think that's fair enough for a D-Rank wizard.