Abzix registration

Name:Abzix Knightmare
Gender:Male
Age:13
Birthday:4/2
Sexuality:straight
Special Characteristics:gills on his neck,which he can hide or make invisible to the normal eye his eyes can also see very clearly under water or in the dust,fog or any kind of blinding weather condition.

Personality:Abzix is more of the quite friendly type he although he isn’t much shy during a party he loves food although it shows very little on his body he is a loving meat eater he tries to act tough and hold in his emotions and sometimes has mental brake downs which were caused by the man who killed his mum he believes he doesn’t need friends but after some time he begins to like them very much he doesn’t like to go to the extreme and sometimes looses himself in anger. He tends to ignore most problems ,not wanting to get involved, and pretends like he doesn’t care but inside he cares deeply for his comrades and would go to great lengths to protect and save them. He behaves like that because he believes if he lets love into its heart its going to get stolen again just like his mum so he tries not to get o attached to people he once found somebody to replace the whole his mother left in his heart, Nina and Astro, they were his best friends but they went on a mission and only Nina returned after wards she mysteriously disappeared this tore his heart apart but his team mates slowly opened that heart and he slowly became more friendly and open.

He prefers not to use fighting as a primary method,against his friends and former allies, but he is not to be provoked as he is a gifted mage and lashes very badly when he is angry he beats senseless anyone who talks trash about his beliefs he often also brakes down mentally and begins to fight like a crazy person he works well under leadership but doesn’t really fancy it as he believes working in groups means your weak he isn’t much of leader either but he works very good solo or with one partner as working with one person or two as he believes there will less risk of failure. His battles usually end with destruction of about 10 meter radius he doesn’t favour his ultimate attacks as they leave hi drained on the battle field although as time passes he doesnt mind working in teams. His advantage area is the desert sea or any foggy area this advantage benefits him greatly because when his gills are used his senses tighten how he got them are unknown to him all he knows is that he is the only one he has meet with that kind of ability he feels somewhat alone in the world due to this and it adds to his mental frustration giving him more reason to lash out at any opponent ,in a real fight,


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Guild-they provided shelter when he had no where to go they made him strong he owes a lot to him.

Food-although it doesn’t show on his body he terribly like food


His pet ferret-his pet the red ferret Hiroku was a gift from his father, an ex member of the ten wizard saints, it has been with him for a long time.

Dark guilds-they make trouble and cause destruction and offer something to beat up.

Dislikes

Bullies-they are on thought full idiots who pick on weak

Rain-it makes every wet and disgusting and promotes the growth of algae and things on the walls and gutters.

when he is looked down on- it makes him feel week like he cant do anything.

Motivation[/color]

to be a great mage- when his mother died he was saved by a mage named mystogan from then he wanted to be strong and repay the favor

to be a wizard saint-he wants to be a wizard saint to show all that hes a bad ass

by dragon slayers-they are awesome.

fears

toads-because their poisons nullifies many of his abilities

giant spiders-they creep him out enormously,he is very afraid of them

the oblivion alliance masters-they would trash completely in a fight although he fears the day they would come after him he plans to defeat all of them.

wight:5ft4
Weight:55kg
Hair:black straight
Eyes:dark purple
Skin Tone tanned

General appearance-:he has straight black hair with brown eyes he weirs dark blue trousers and thin black shoes similar to that o similar to that of Bacchus the rest of his legs are covered in bandages from the waist up he weirs a green short sleeve shirt.

Guild[/color]:Fairy tail``````````````
Tattoo:Neck,red
Rank:D

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Likes dislikes fears and motivations must all have at least 3 things and must all have a description. All must be in list form. Ex.
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Remove the brackets in appearance

Remove the year in birthday

Personality must be at least 500 words, explaining how he is in battle, as a leader, under a leader, and with a teammate

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is it ok now?

Your not suppose to post another post of your apps. You just edit it.

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You need to have at least 3 of everything: likes/dislikes/motivations/fears.

So yeah, you need to add 3 fears and they better be legit: everyone is afraid of something.

General Appearance is a section to separate it from the mental part: you need to have an actual appearance underneath how your character looks that states what he/she wears and what they look like on a daily basis.

I thought you were told to remove the parenthesis, do that.

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your last fear, death, is not legit. You need to give a real fear and a real reason why they fear it.

You ignored my comment about the General Appearance; i will not read that until you have added an official Appearance section underneath Skin Tone, or your last specific detail in that section. You do not have ANY appearance right now.

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You need one more dislike

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...One more dislike....I am starting to think no one is paying attention to the "Need at least three of each like/dislike/motivation/fear" thing.

Also there is no such thing as the Unholy 10 anymore. Replace it with either Horseman or something new.

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Ok, approved...Next time though, don't give your text a color and make sure to BOLD the template....i am just not caring for the template being bolded in this one sense you did color coding.