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    Khorne
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    Spiked Collar of Control Empty Spiked Collar of Control

    Post by Khorne 18th November 2015, 1:51 am

    Name: Spiked Collar of Control
    Rank: Legendary+
    Type: Necklace/Collar
    Description: A speed collar that is fused with the flesh of the neck. The magical energy released from the item improves the powers of the user while also increasing the amount of healing received by the owner of the item.
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    Strengths:
    - Increases the healing done to him by healing spells and abilities.
    Weaknesses:
    - Increased healing only affects him.
    - Does not come off, ever. The item is fused with the skin.
    Abilities:

    Embodiment of Power:

    Spiked Collars Blessing:


    Last edited by Khorne on 31st May 2018, 2:45 am; edited 4 times in total
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    Spiked Collar of Control Empty Re: Spiked Collar of Control

    Post by Chaotic Rumble 18th November 2015, 7:56 am

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    Heyo mate, I'll be the one reviewing your item today.  I'm just going to quote the application so we know the state of it prior to changes; I won't actually write in it.

    Right, so let's begin!

    The item itself is mostly alright. I'd personally elaborate on the description more so that we have a better idea of why the strengths and weaknesses make sense. Not a must, but definitely appreciated.

    Mind Protection - This can only apply to effects that are equal or lower in rank of the collar. Anything higher should be able to affect you. The collar obviously scales with you, however, up until a certain point (I believe it was up till A or S-Rank for Legendary+ items, but don't quote me on that).

    Spiked Collar's Blessing - Looks good! I would probably have this scale as well... But probably not, so we'll leave it as it is.

    Please bump once you've made the changes, or have anything you'd like to discuss!


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    Khorne
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    Spiked Collar of Control Empty Re: Spiked Collar of Control

    Post by Khorne 18th November 2015, 10:40 am

    Bump, edited first ability to state what was asked for it and made a note that it maxes out at S; the highest ability rank for legendary+.


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    Spiked Collar of Control Empty Re: Spiked Collar of Control

    Post by Chaotic Rumble 19th November 2015, 5:42 am

    Alright, it's fine.

    'Tis approved~!


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    Jiyu Kazehime
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    Spiked Collar of Control Empty Re: Spiked Collar of Control

    Post by Jiyu Kazehime 23rd May 2017, 10:53 pm

    Unlocked and Moved for you.

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    Spiked Collar of Control Empty Re: Spiked Collar of Control

    Post by Lilium 16th December 2017, 6:39 pm

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    Spiked Collar of Control Empty Re: Spiked Collar of Control

    Post by kittykool75 29th May 2018, 11:07 pm

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    Post by 88 31st May 2018, 2:19 pm

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