Midnight's Magic

Magicite wrote:Primary Magic: White Mage Magic <--Fine
Secondary Magic: <--Fine
Caster or Holder: Caster <--Fine
Description:

White Mage Magic is a Caster Magic which allows the user to pour magical energy
into a target. It is one of the rarest magics in the world, focuses mainly
on recovery and support spells. By far the most useful aspect of healing
magic is that it is easy on the user. It's not that healing magic requires
less magical energies to cast but that knowing healing magic passively gives
the users increased magical reserves and magical regeneration, allowing them
survive longer, heal longer and support longer. <--Fine

Strengths:

*Healing- White Mage magic has a large variety of what it can heal. From mending
wounds, removing poisons and diseases and another ailments/status effects. <--Fine
*Supportive-White Mage magic has a wide range of support magic ranging from buffs to protection and even some debuffs. <--Fine

Weaknesses:

*Offense- White Mage magic has very few offensive spells and what spells it does
have never get very strong. <--Fine
*Range- White magic is a magic that relies on close proximity to mid ranged
spells. <--Fine

Abilities/Powers:

*Life's energy- is always filling the user with life's energy. Giving them
greatly enhanced magical reserves and recovery rate. It is it's greatest ability. <--Fine
*Blessed- Healing spells that are used on self heal as if 1 rank better. <-- No. You are D-rank, you heal like a D-rank, you are C-rank, you Heal like a C-rank. Fix that.

Name: Cure <--Fine
Rank: D <--Fine
Type: Support-Healing <--Fine
Description: Raising a hand forward within several meters of someone or placing their hand on someone, the hand begins to glow a soft blueish-white aura as the body's wounds are healed. <--Fine
Strengths: Heals up to D rank wounds. <--Fine
Weaknesses: Short range. <--Missing a cooldown

Name: Antidote <--Fine
Rank: D <--Fine
Type: Support-Healing <--Fine
Description: Raising a hand forward within several meters of someone or placing their hand on someone, the hand begins to glow a soft greenish-white aura as the body's poisons are healed. <--Fine
Strengths: Heals poisons up to +1 rank to the caster. <--No, can only heal D-rank poisons. Fix that.
Weaknesses: Short range. <-- Missing a Cooldown, needs a different weakness, you're not using the same weakness over and over again. for future reference.

Name: Libra <--Fine
Rank: D <--Fine
Type: Support-Tracking <--Fine
Description: The caster simple concentrates for a moment and can feel the life source of anything living within 60' and how strong of a life force they have. <-- 60' whats?
Strengths: Great for locating people and creatures <--Fine
Weaknesses: Lasts 3 posts <--Fine, But I want you to include a charge time as this essentially lets you metagame peoples' placements.

Name: Dia <--Fine
Rank: D <--Fine
Type: Offensive-Buff <--Fine
Description: The caster simple concentrates for a moment and touches a weapon. The weapon gains a faint swirling blueish-white aura to it. When the weapon strikes anything it gains some magical force behind it. <--Fine
Strengths: Adds D rank harm effect to a weapon. <--Fine
Weaknesses: Lasts 3 posts. Only works on weapons. <--Fine

*Blessed- Healing spells that are used on self heal as if 1 rank better. <-- No. You are D-rank, you heal like a D-rank, you are C-rank, you Heal like a C-rank. Fix that

Name: Cure <--Fine
Rank: D <--Fine
Type: Support-Healing <--Fine
Description: Raising a hand forward within several meters of someone or placing their hand on someone, the hand begins to glow a soft blueish-white aura as the body's wounds are healed. <--Fine
Strengths: Heals up to D rank wounds. <--Fine
Weaknesses: Short range. <--Missing a cooldown

Name: Antidote <--Fine
Rank: D <--Fine
Type: Support-Healing <--Fine
Description: Raising a hand forward within several meters of someone or placing their hand on someone, the hand begins to glow a soft greenish-white aura as the body's poisons are healed. <--Fine
Strengths: Heals poisons up to +1 rank to the caster. <--No, can only heal D-rank poisons. Fix that.
Weaknesses: Short range. <-- Missing a Cooldown, needs a different weakness, you're not using the same weakness over and over again. for future reference

Name: Libra <--Fine
Rank: D <--Fine
Type: Support-Tracking <--Fine
Description: The caster simple concentrates for a moment and can feel the life source of anything living within 60' and how strong of a life force they have. <-- 60' whats?
Strengths: Great for locating people and creatures <--Fine
Weaknesses: Lasts 3 posts <--Fine, But I want you to include a charge time as this essentially lets you metagame peoples' placements