The Sight of Suicide

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Chaoris wrote:Name: The Sight of Suicide (Called SOS by Chaoris)
Rank: Legendary+
Species: Liger/Cyborg
Type: Combat Pet
Description:

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Hitting at six feet tall while on all fours, the massive cybernetic liger is a force to be reckoned with.
The liger has gone mad, having had to sit for ages inside of a cybernetic body that could not move. Being freed from it's prison by the God of Blood, the beast will do anything it's master commands of it. It has no problem with creating death and mayhem, it actually revels in such.

Abilities:

Name: Blood Letting Tooth and Claw
Rank: D
Description: The teeth of the beast are made specifically to shred through the strongest of materials and draw blood. Any attack with the teeth or claws that land will deal The rank of the abilities damage as well as cause the struck opponent to bleed for .5 rank or damage for 2 turns.
This needs a Cool-Down, Type (Attack, Spell, or Passive(although passive doesn't work for this effect), and a Duration of the Attack. If an attack or spell duration should be instant, and or a D rank, and taking into account the DoT 4 posts for a Cool-Down sounds good. Also, if you want it to have a bleed DoT you need to lower the base damage of this. I Would say .5 rank of damage for the spell would make the DoT ok
Strengths:
- Causes bonus bleed damage for 2 turns. (.5 per turn) [color=#43C6DB] This needs to be brought down to .3 (3%) per post]
- Can pierce through armor of the pets rank and lower. (Currently a Legendary+ pet) This only applies to DoT. The base damage of the ability has to still be affected by armor of at least same rank as the ability.
- Can stack with bleeds from other sources.
Weaknesses:
- Melee range attack means having to get close.
- Bleed does not stack multiple times, will only reset the bleed timer if it lands again on a bleeding opponent. The timer can not be reset till after the stack has worn off, or else this will turn into an infinite effect. Each stack (from different sources) will have it's own stack timer
- Flying enemies are hard to hit, requiring jumping which reduces accuracy.
- Can't affect enemies with no circulatory system.

Name: Sight of Suicide
Rank: C
Description: Just the sight of the creature is enough to drive most people into terror. When in battle, enemies that are the rank of this ability or lower are feared, and dealing 50% less damage so long as SOS is in combat. Enemies 2 ranks or lower than the ability will flee from combat.
This This needs a Cool-Down, Type (Attack, Spell, or Passive), and a Duration of the Attack. However, since this is obviously a Passive, it doesn't need a Cool-Down or Duration) But still needs a type placed on it). Also 50% is way too high. If this is intended to be a passive, it needs to be around 10%. If you want the % to be higher, this needs to be turned into a spell or attack, and have a Duration, and Cool-Down. Also this only effects Physical damage, and should be noted)
Strengths:
- Lowers enemies damage by 50% while SOS is in combat. Refer to above edit to edit this correctly
- Enemies of a much lower rank will attempt to flee. [color:9700=43C6DB]This can only effect PvE and not other players, and this should be noted. Unless this was intended to be used in PvP, in which case, please note that, and it will need to be slightly altered.
- Gives pressure in combat, allowing allies the upper hand.
Weaknesses:
- For fear to apply, enemies must be able to see SOS.
- Enemies of Higher rank are half affected by the sight of the creature. 25% 1 rank higher, 2 ranks or more are unaffected. This % needs to altered based on the noted changed above for the %s
- Enemies immune to fear are unaffected.
- May affect allies if they are afraid of SOS as well. (Based on fears/dislikes in character profiles.)

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