Heaven's God Slayer

D-Rank Spells:

C-Rank Spells:

B-Rank Spells:

A-Rank Spells:

S-Rank Spells:

H-Rank Spell:

TacticalFallacy wrote:Fair enough, three S-rank spells, did not see that. And yes, I can tell that you are H-rank. No need to state the shockingly obvious. <---Sorry about that, I thought you didn't know about my H-Rank donation.

Heaven God's Fury - Disapproved. Remove the part about physical abilities because that is too broad. Keep the specific things like strength, defense and remember to put speed into the description. <---Added everything

Heaven God's Pistol - Let's raise its power a little higher and have it such that it can pierce the body of a B-rank mage and below, thus it can deal severe damage by hitting vital spots.<---Added everything

Heaven God's Cannon - Grammar mistake in description. Give me the thickness of the beam.<---Added everything

Heaven God's Bellow - Standardize your units. Is it 10-15 meters or 10-15 feet? Also, let's specify the statement "This will annihilate anything in its path" to "This can annihilate all non-magical structures in its path, making it highly destructive in such environments."<---Added everything

Heaven God's Fist - Why is this good against long-range combatants? This spell has no particular use against such people, who in fact will have the advantage due to their range. Also, you can expand on the impact power of the spell so that it is distinct from normal punches. Make it like "the sheer force of the spell can pulverize steel" or "it can cause the ground to explode into a miniature crater."<---Added everything. I believed that since they focused on long-range, their physical abilities aren't matched up to that of a Slayer, but your view seems to have more logic.

Heaven God's Lariat - Remove the redundant part about "several and multiple bones". Both adjectives mean the same thing, so choose one. Also, define what do you mean by "getting hurt enough" in terms of ranked damage.<---Added everything

Holy Nova -  Have it such that you are more exposed during the charge-up post. Not only is your arm pulled back concentrating on the spell, so you only have one arm to block attacks, you also cannot move or use other offensive spells. In exchange, this spell can overcome normal S-rank spells. Only S-rank attacks that require just as much focus can cancel it out. Also, given how small the range and how large the AoE, another weakness is that your own allies are likely to get hit by this spell.<---Added everything

Holy Resonance - Be more specific: state that it is the damage of the spells that get boosted, "increasing spells by 25%" does not make much sense. Also, I want you to limit the boost to A-rank and below spells. Also, I stated before that I want the condition that the boost lasts until either Holy Resonance ends or 5 spells are used, whichever comes first.<---Added everything

Holy Blessing - Let's specify the length and details of his exhaustion. Have it be that he remains tired for two posts, unable to run, reduced ability to block and unable to perform S-rank and above spells. Also, his boosts are purely physical(since the spell boost is taken up by Resonance), so only physical-based spells get stronger while the long-ranged ones remain unchanged.<---Added everything

H-rank: There is a little contradiction: the middle-beam(which as the middle, specifies the exact position of the spell) is stated to happen 3 meters in front of Ikuto, but you also state that the range of the spell is anywhere in 50 meters of him. It is impossible for these two numbers to coexist and I am more inclined to have you use the 50 meter range, so long as Ikuto has sight of the target location, and have the location of the middle-beam be detemined by Ikuto concentrating at a single point at the ground(i.e. the target point). Let's have it, as a H-rank, such that the beams come down at (obviously) light-speed(basically meaning that it is next-to-impossible to dodge the middle one. It is possible to dodge the others due to the time delay) Next, potential weaknesses: as AoE, extremely dangerous towards other teammates and Ikuto himself(you can't eat your own light, remember), shockwaves are able to indiscriminately push everyone including Ikuto off their feet if shot close-by, it is possible to dodge the other five beams due to the time-delay, reducing the damage, and the sheer heat of the beams turn the hit ground to molten lava, making it impossible to stand on for all non-heat mages for 3 posts. Finally, add a charge-post, where the magic circles can be seen but Ikuto still needs time to gather up the sufficient light.<---Added everything

TacticalFallacy wrote:All D-rank spells approved.
All C-rank spells approved.
All B-rank spells approved.

Heaven God's Bellow - Guess I needed to be specific. Read through the spell carefully. The state that the range of the spell is 15 meters. However, 10-15 feet is considered the long-range in the side-step weakness. I'm sure you meant 10-15 meters, not feet. Also, beam size. <---Fixed.

Heaven God's Fist - I get what you trying for but that is pretty much the weakness for every long-range mages, who can't handle damage as well as close-combat fighters from any spell anyway, so it's too non-specific to be used as a weakness for your spell. Other than that, approved.<---Pre-approved.

Heaven God's Holy Resonance - For the third time, both the spell boost and the shield abilities will end if the Holy Resonance duration is reached, even if you have not used 5 spells yet. Also, in your description you doubled damage for spells, but your strength is still "increases next five spells by 25%" <---Sorry about making you say it for the third time, Tact. But fixed for sure this time.

H-rank: 
Looks like you also misinterpreted me. You state that the middle beam now strikes 50 meters in front of Ikuto. What I wanted was that the middle beam strikes any point Ikuto concentrates at, so long as he has line of sight. This new statement thus makes it that you can choose to shoot the beam anywhere in a 50 meter radius around you. Your original statement makes it such that you HAVE to shoot it 50 meters away from you. 

Also, the ground of lava is both a strength and weakness, because only specifically Fire and Magma mages can stand on this, meaning any enemy or ally(and even Ikuto himself) cannot stand on the area for three posts.

Finally, I've checked your AoE, and if I am correct in assuming that you mean that the each beam has a 5 meter radius (since you said "5 meter wide, in a radius"; this is why you should be clear, else I'll have to make assumptions like this), then your real AoE is a 15 meter radius, or in other words, 30 meter wide. Change the AoE in your description to fit that.<---Fixed all of it.