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    Seikatsu's Sword

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    Ninetails Derpfox

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    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 8th May 2015, 5:49 pm

    Name: Thorn of Betrayal
    Rank: Weak
    Type: Sword

    Description:
    The Sword is composed of two segments: Thorn and Betrayal, these segments to no separate.

    The Blade is 1 meter long, and primarily black, and towards the bottom has a thorn-like protrusion pointing away from Seikatsu (when the sword is wielded). Close to the spine is an indented line with grey coloring. Along that same line at the thorn, are three blood-red jewels on each side.
    Thorn:

    The hilt of the sword is black with a piece of bloody cloth wrapped around it. On the end of the hilt a dagger with a very jagged blade is attacked, and has the bloody cloth wrapped around it. The bloody cloth wraps around and enters a slot in the dagger. A long piece of the cloth is left hanging when the dagger end is in use, otherwise, the dagger end is wrapped in the rest of the cloth. The blade on the dagger is very jagged, and the dagger starts at a very faint blue, and get a little darker toward the tip. This dagger is quite literally one with the sword, as it is fused at the core, to the inside of the sword and cannot be removed. The blood on the cloth belongs to Seikatsu's fiance and was taken the day he killed her, and the rest of his tribe.
    Betrayal:
    Strengths:
    1 Allows Seikatsu to fight opponents without exhausting all his MP
    2 Allows Seikatsu to fight opponents face-to-face which can be problematic for long ranged wizards, or wizards who don't normally take part in the fighting (example: summoners, celestials etc..)
    3 Reminds Seikatsu of where he came from

    Weaknesses:
    1 The dagger on the hilt makes it so Seikatsu can't use the pummel to knock people out
    2 The dagger on the hilt reminds Seikatsu of what he did
    3 Can be broken fairly easily (but repaired in the next thread)
    4 The dagger on the hilt is not detachable
    5 Completely useless at a distance of over 2 meters... (Seikatsu's Arm length + the length of the blade is 2 meters)

    Abilities: N/A


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    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 11th May 2015, 12:06 am

    Bump
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 11th May 2015, 12:58 am

    Firstly your images are far too big. Please try to find smaller ones or shrink these down.

    Strength 2 and weakness 3 aren't really strengths and weaknesses of the weapon. Please replace these. I would suggest something along its suitability of close range combat and long range combat. Or the durability of the weapon as weapons can break (but are fixed in your next thread)


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    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 11th May 2015, 1:19 am

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    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 11th May 2015, 1:22 am

    Made edits
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 11th May 2015, 1:29 am

    Your images are still far too big buddy. Can you shrink them down to about half their size?


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    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 11th May 2015, 1:40 am

    Did some editing on paint, any better?
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 11th May 2015, 1:41 am

    Much better. Now I can actually see what they look like.

    *thinks for a moment*

    Yeah seems good.

    Approved


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