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    Magic

    Primary Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: Celestial Spirit Magic is a type of Magic in which the user summons Celestial Spirits by opening their gates through the use of Celestial Spirit Gate Keys. In order for a Mage to have successful use over a Celestial Spirit and bring it/him/her into the human world, a contract must be signed between the user and the spirit. After a contract is signed, that spirit becomes available to the user for any means necessary.

    Kai uses his Celestial Spirits not only to help him advance in battle- since he alone is a complete pacifist- but also figure out more about himself. The powers of different Celestial Spirits derive from distinct concepts; each with their own, special personality. With the guidance of each spirit, Kai has a new trait to gain when seeing them fight in battle. The most connective spirit Kai holds is Libra; the Celestial Spirit of Balance. This spirit alone helps Kai understand what is right and wrong about himself to build a new future.  
    Strengths:

    • Multiple Allies- This magic allows Kai to build an army of friends to fight his enemies; an overwhelming support for the opposition, in some cases.
    • Versatile- There are countless Celestial Spirits in the Celestial Spirit World. Therefore, Kai has many spirits to choose from.
    • Control- Kai does not have to control these spirits like puppet; they can fight on their own while their brain power is just as strong- and sometimes stronger- than their owner's.

    Weaknesses:

    • Contracts- Kai can only summon spirits from the Celestial Spirit World whom have successfully signed contracts with him in the past.
    • Pacifism- Kai is a complete pacifist, and therefore much weaker than his spirits. If his spirits fail to get in his opponent's way, Kai is an open target for punishment.
    • Damage- Each spirit can only take so much damage before they must be sent back into the Celestial Spirit World for healing (cooldown).

    Lineage:
    Soldier of Chaos:
    Description:There was once a general who's skill in battle was unsurpassed, and his leadership demanded the respect of all his soldiers. However he craved longingly for a warrior to match his skill. Slowly, this craving turned to a corrupting desire until he was lost in his search. He challenged everyone and everything that came across his path, slaughtering his king-his soldiers- fellow generals- and soon started a massive war that spread across the continent. One by one, kingdoms fell to his might. Finally, his desire turned his men against him, where they tricked their general to being entombed and to rot for eternity. The general finally died, but his spirit lived on to possess other soldiers to finally end his craving. Every so often; a Soldier is consumed by unquestionable blood-thirst, and an immeasurable desire for carnage and war until they meet their true rival in a battle to the death.
    Ability: Upon activating the lineage, the user's strength is dramatically increased, as well as his endurance and speed. They obtain a cleaving passive for their physical attacks, with a blood red aura wave emitting from whatever they are using for a weapon. 5 meter range.
    Usage: The user can only buff themselves once per thread, and it lasts five posts. While under the effects of the buff, they receive a debuff, where they will turn on everything near them, including allies until the buff has ended. If used too much, the side effects increase in duration until the person is completely corrupted by the desire.
    Unique Abilities:

    • Celestial Spirit World- As a Celestial Spirit Mage, when outside of battle, Kai can freely transport himself into the Celestial Spirit World to meet his spirits, along with countless others in their own dimension. He can also use this method to transport out, as well.
    • Gravity Manipulation- Kai is the key-holder of Libra, a Celestial Spirit who specializes with gravity. Therefore, Kai is able to  freely manipulate the effect that gravity has on his body. This is mostly used to allow for flight or to enable faster falling for an attack. This doesn't effect magically created gravity. Kai is able to reduce the effect of gravity to zero or increase the effect up to three times normal gravity. This also allows him to alter his sense of gravity so that he can freely walk up walls and on ceilings as if they were the ground.
    • Swap- Kai can instantly swap which Celestial Spirit he is using in the middle of battle as long as he pays the price in magic power, respectively. In his current rank, D, this will put the swapped spirit on cooldown.




    Name: Gate of the Silent Hound: Absol
    Spoiler:
    Rank: D
    Type: Summon
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Kai utilizes the power of the Silent Hound's Gate- a silver key- to release Absol from the Celestial Spirit World. Absol is very silent, though merciless in battle. The exception to this is his obedience, which he reveals proudly as he respects the commands of his owner, respectfully. He will not speak to anyone but Kai. His personality takes after his owner's completely. Absol has the ability to engulf whatever target he pounds his paw upon in flames (immune to his own power). Absol runs at 30 MPH, is 4 feet in height, and weights 75 pounds. Absol can only burn people. Only then can his active ability of fire be activated after pounding the opponent.
    Strengths:

    • Burn- Whatever Absol pounds with his paw is set on fire.
    • Summon- Absol's summon is instant.
    • Immunity- Both Absol and his owner are immune to the flames Absol produces.

    Weaknesses:

    • Damage- Two amounts of D-Ranked damage, one amount of C-Ranked damage or anything above will force Absol back into the Celestial Spirit World, and put him on cooldown.
    • Water- Water will instantly nullify the burning effect Absol holds.
    • Fire Slayers- Any sort of fire slayer can absorb Absol's flames harmlessly.
    • Physical Contact- Absol must physically touch the enemy for his combative ability to trigger.

    Passive 1:
    Absol's Passive:



    Name: Gate of the Heavenly Scales: Libra
    Spoiler:
    Rank: D
    Type: Summon
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Libra is one of the 12 Golden Zodiac Keys. Kai utilizes Libra's key to summon her from the Celestial Spirit World. Libra's combative ability is to reduce the effect of gravity on an enemy to zero, as long as that enemy is within 15 meters of her location. Libra is just as silent as Absol, and has a personality identical to Kai's. She will only talk with him. Libra runs at a fast speed of 40 MPH, is 5 feet in height and weights 85 lbs.
    Passive 1:
    Libra's First Passive:
    Passive 2:
    Libra's Second Passive:
    Strengths:

    • Gravity Manipulation- Libra can manipulative gravity to send the enemy afloat.
    • Tactician- Kai counts on Libra the most as she proves to be the most intelligent Kai has to summon. She utilizes her surroundings well.
    • Fast- In her current D-Ranked state, Libra is the fastest Celestial Spirit Kai has to offer into a fight.

    Weaknesses:

    • Damage- It takes two amounts of D-Ranked damage, or the equivalent to force Libra back into the Celestial Spirit World (cooldown).
    • Lightning- Lightning strikes down from high to low potential, which is enough to break through the gravity effect Libra can use upon her enemies.
    • Range- Libra can only affect her enemies if they are standing within a small range of 15 meters from her.
    • Earth- Mages who specialize with the earth element, or have any power that can move the earth, like the lightning element, can break through Libra's gravity effect.


    Name: Gate of the Moon Feline: Mew
    Image of Mew:
    Rank: D
    Type: Summon
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Mew is a completely speechless, unknown creature that has been assumed a feline, hence the name of her key. She is overly protective of Kai and obedient to him. Mew has the ability to unleash lightning upon targets within 15 meters of her and deal D-Ranked damage if her enemies are struck successfully. Mew can run 25 MPH, is 3 feet in height, and weights 50 lbs.
    Passive Abilities:
    Mew's Passive:
    Strengths:

    • Immunity- Mew's conditions of battle do not harm Kai even if he is within Mew's field of attack.
    • Water- Mew is especially dangerous to those who specialize in the water element.
    • Field Control- Mew's spell promotes a sign that nobody should come near her as her lightning continuously affects a small radius around her.

    Weaknesses:

    • Wind- The element of wind can set Mew's lightning off-course.
    • Earth- Mages who specialize with the element of earth will have a resistance towards Mew's lightning attack.
    • Damage- Two amounts of D-Ranked damage will force Mew back into the Celestial Spirit World. If this is the case, Mew will be forced on cooldown, as well.
    • Movement- Mew cannot move while her lightning goes off.


    Name: Gate of the Enforcers: Phoenix
    Spoiler:
    Rank: D
    Type: Summon
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Kai utilizes the silver key, Gate of the Enforcers to summon Phoenix. Just like the other D-Ranked spirits, Phoenix is very silent, and will only speak to Kai. He is more obedient to Kai than the other spirits, and merciless in battle. Phoenix has the ability to trigger a tornado in a 15-meter radius of himself, both he and his owner being immune to this. Those who are caught in this tornado will receive D-Ranked damage and rippling effects. Phoenix is 6 feet tall and weights 180 lbs. His wings are 8 feet.
    Passive Abilities:
    Phoenix's Passive:
    Strengths:

    • Flying- Phoenix can fly, making it difficult for those who would normally seek targets on the ground to hit him.
    • Lightning- Phoenix's wind can set lightning off-course, and is there especially strong versus the element.
    • Field Control- Phoenix assures nobody gets close to him as his tornados only circulate around himself.

    Weaknesses:

    • Damage- If Phoenix receives two amounts of D-Ranked damage or the equivalent, he will be forced back into the Celestial Spirit World, where he will be set on cooldown.
    • Slow- Phoenix is slow on the ground, and will only travel 20 MPH.
    • Range- Phoenix's combative ability only affects a small range of 15 meters.
    • Fire- Phoenix is especially weak against fire. One fire spell will send him into the Celestial Spirit World.


    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)


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    In Progress Re: Kai's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Thorn 28th March 2015, 3:40 am

    Kai wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: Celestial Spirit Magic is a type of Magic in which the user summons Celestial Spirits by opening their gates through the use of Celestial Spirit Gate Keys. In order for a Mage to have successful use over a Celestial Spirit and bring it/him/her into the human world, a contract must be signed between the user and the spirit. After a contract is signed, that spirit becomes available to the user for any means necessary.

    Kai uses his Celestial Spirits not only to help him advance in battle- since he alone is a complete pacifist- but also figure out more about himself. The powers of different Celestial Spirits derive from distinct concepts; each with their own, special personality. With the guidance of each spirit, Kai has a new trait to gain when seeing them fight in battle. The most connective spirit Kai holds is Libra; the Celestial Spirit of Balance. This spirit alone helps Kai understand what is right and wrong about himself to build a new future.  
    Strengths:

    • Multiple Allies- This magic allows Kai to build an army of friends to fight his enemies; an overwhelming support for the opposition, in some cases.
    • Versatile- There are countless Celestial Spirits in the Celestial Spirit World. Therefore, Kai has many spirits to choose from.
    • Control- Kai does not have to control these spirits like puppet; they can fight on their own while their brain power is just as strong- and sometimes stronger- than their owner's.

    Weaknesses:

    • Contracts- Kai can only summon spirits from the Celestial Spirit World whom have successfully signed contracts with him in the past.
    • Pacifism- Kai is a complete pacifist, and therefore much weaker than his spirits. If his spirits fail to get in his opponent's way, Kai is an open target for punishment.
    • Damage- Each spirit can only take so much damage before they must be sent back into the Celestial Spirit World for healing (cooldown).

    Lineage:
    Soldier of Chaos:
    Description:There was once a general who's skill in battle was unsurpassed, and his leadership demanded the respect of all his soldiers. However he craved longingly for a warrior to match his skill. Slowly, this craving turned to a corrupting desire until he was lost in his search. He challenged everyone and everything that came across his path, slaughtering his king-his soldiers- fellow generals- and soon started a massive war that spread across the continent. One by one, kingdoms fell to his might. Finally, his desire turned his men against him, where they tricked their general to being entombed and to rot for eternity. The general finally died, but his spirit lived on to possess other soldiers to finally end his craving. Every so often; a Soldier is consumed by unquestionable blood-thirst, and an immeasurable desire for carnage and war until they meet their true rival in a battle to the death.
    Ability: Upon activating the lineage, the user's strength is dramatically increased, as well as his endurance and speed. They obtain a cleaving passive for their physical attacks, with a blood red aura wave emitting from whatever they are using for a weapon. 5 meter range.
    Usage: The user can only buff themselves once per thread, and it lasts five posts. While under the effects of the buff, they receive a debuff, where they will turn on everything near them, including allies until the buff has ended. If used too much, the side effects increase in duration until the person is completely corrupted by the desire.
    Unique Abilities:

    • Celestial Spirit World- As a Celestial Spirit Mage, when outside of battle, Kai can freely transport himself into the Celestial Spirit World to meet his spirits, along with countless others in their own dimension. He can also use this method to transport out, as well.
    • Gravity Manipulation- Kai is the key-holder of Libra, a Celestial Spirit who specializes with gravity. Therefore, Kai is able to  freely manipulate the effect that gravity has on his body. This is mostly used to allow for flight or to enable faster falling for an attack. This doesn't effect magically created gravity. Kai is able to reduce the effect of gravity to zero or increase the effect up to three times normal gravity. This also allows him to alter his sense of gravity so that he can freely walk up walls and on ceilings as if they were the ground.[color=red]this would only be in effect when Libra is out as this is a Libra related abilities.
    • Swap- Kai can instantly swap which Celestial Spirit he is using in the middle of battle as long as he pays the price in magic power, respectively. In his current rank, D, this will put the swapped spirit on cooldown.




    Name: Gate of the Silent Hound: Absol
    Spoiler:
    Rank: D
    Type: Summon
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Kai utilizes the power of the Silent Hound's Gate- a silver key- to release Absol from the Celestial Spirit World. Absol is very silent, though merciless in battle. The exception to this is his obedience, which he reveals proudly as he respects the commands of his owner, respectfully. He will not speak to anyone but Kai. His personality takes after his owner's completely. Absol has the ability to engulf whatever target he pounds his paw upon in flames (immune to his own power). Absol runs at 30 MPH, is 4 feet in height, and weights 75 pounds. this is really good but you need to say that the summon only sets things he wants on fire so its not whatever he touches gets set alight also you need to but the damage the summon cause and what would make the summon return to the spirit world
    Passive Abilities:

    • Absol can burn harmlessly through any inanimate object that can be burned through.
    • Absol can seek whatever his owner desires in a 30-meter radius as if looking through a thermal scope.

    Strengths:

    • Burn- Whatever Absol pounds with his paw is set on fire.
    • Summon- Absol's summon is instant.
    • Immunity- Both Absol and his owner are immune to the flames Absol produces.

    Weaknesses:

    • Damage- Two amounts of D-Ranked damage, one amount of C-Ranked damage or anything above will force Absol back into the Celestial Spirit World, and put him on cooldown.
    • Water- Water will instantly nullify the burning effect Absol holds.
    • Fire Slayers- Any sort of fire slayer can absorb Absol's flames harmlessly.
    • Physical Contact- Absol must physically touch the enemy for his combative ability to trigger.


    Name: Gate of the Heavenly Scales: Libra
    Spoiler:
    Rank: D
    Type: Summon
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Libra is one of the 12 Golden Zodiac Keys. Kai utilizes Libra's key to summon her from the Celestial Spirit World. Libra's combative ability is to reduce the effect of gravity on an enemy to zero, as long as that enemy is within 15 meters of her location. Libra is just as silent as Absol, and has a personality identical to Kai's. She will only talk with him. Libra runs at a fast speed of 40 MPH, is 5 feet in height and weights 85 lbs.
    Passive Abilities:

    • Libra can see through the dark.
    • Libra can detect things as if looking through a thermal scope.

    Strengths:

    • Gravity Manipulation- Libra can manipulative gravity to send the enemy afloat.
    • Tactician- Kai counts on Libra the most as she proves to be the most intelligent Kai has to summon. She utilizes her surroundings well.
    • Fast- In her current D-Ranked state, Libra is the fastest Celestial Spirit Kai has to offer into a fight.

    Weaknesses:

    • Damage- It takes two amounts of D-Ranked damage, or the equivalent to force Libra back into the Celestial Spirit World (cooldown).
    • Lightning- Lightning strikes down from high to low potential, which is enough to break through the gravity effect Libra can use upon her enemies.
    • Range- Libra can only affect her enemies if they are standing within a small range of 15 meters from her.
    • Earth- Mages who specialize with the earth element, or have any power that can move the earth, like the lightning element, can break through Libra's gravity effect.


    Name: Gate of the Moon Feline: Mew
    Spoiler:
    Rank: D
    Type: Summon
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Mew is a completely speechless, unknown creature that has been assumed a feline, hence the name of her key. She is overly protective of Kai and obedient to him. Mew has the ability to unleash lightning upon targets within 15 meters of her and apply deal D-Ranked damage if her enemies are struck successfully. Mew can run 25 MPH while on the ground, is 3 feet in height, and weights 50 lbs.
    Passive Abilities:

    • Mew can fly up to an altitude of 25 meters.
    • Mew can detect things as if looking through a thermal scope.

    Strengths:

    • Immunity- Mew's conditions of battle do not harm Kai even if he is within Mew's field of attack.
    • Water- Mew is especially dangerous to those who specialize in the water element.
    • Flight- According to Mew's passive ability, she can fly. Therefore, it can be difficult for those who normally attack targets on the ground to strike her successfully.

    Weaknesses:

    • Wind- The element of wind can set Mew's lightning off-course, along with her if she's flying.
    • Earth- Mages who specialize with the element of earth will have a resistance towards Mew's lightning attack.
    • Damage- Two amounts of D-Ranked damage will force Mew back into the Celestial Spirit World. If this is the case, Mew will be forced on cooldown, as well.
    • Movement- Mew does not know how to move while she is afloat.


    Name: Gate of the Enforcers: Phoenix
    Spoiler:
    Rank: D
    Type: Summon
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Kai utilizes the silver key, Gate of the Enforcers to summon Phoenix. Just like the other D-Ranked spirits, Phoenix is very silent, and will only speak to Kai. He is more obedient to Kai than the other spirits, and merciless in battle. Phoenix has the ability to trigger a tornado in a 15-meter radius of himself, both he and his owner being immune to this. Those who are caught in this tornado will receive D-Ranked damage and rippling effects. Phoenix is 6 feet tall and weights 180 lbs. His wings are 8 feet.
    Passive Abilities:

    • Phoenix has the ability to fly up to an altitude of 25 meters. Here, he can fly 35 MPH.
    • Phoenix can detect things as if looking through a thermal scope.

    Strengths:

    • Flying- Phoenix can fly, making it difficult for those who would normally seek targets on the ground to hit him.
    • Lightning- Phoenix's wind can set lightning off-course, and is there especially strong versus the element.
    • Field Control- Phoenix assures nobody gets close to him as his tornados only circulate around himself.

    Weaknesses:

    • Damage- If Phoenix receives two amounts of D-Ranked damage or the equivalent, he will be forced back into the Celestial Spirit World, where he will be set on cooldown.
    • Slow- Phoenix is slow on the ground, and will only travel 20 MPH.
    • Range- Phoenix's combative ability only affects a small range of 15 meters.
    • Fire- Phoenix is especially weak against fire. One fire spell will send him into the Celestial Spirit World.


    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)

    the active ability on your summons need to also follow the spell template gold key is fine with the tow passive ability's but silver keys only get one active and one passive


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    Post by Guest 28th March 2015, 9:12 am

    Edits made.

    All of my spirits show how much damage is required to send them back into the Celestial Spirit World if you read their weaknesses. Also, they were in spell format already.
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 28th March 2015, 10:34 am

    Let me just step right in
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    Gonna change the world

    Just wanted to step in and explain what Thorn meant as its something I asked her to ask you to do.

    Basically, your active abilities (e.g. libra's gravity manipulation bit) need to follow the spell template as well. For example:

    Spell:

    Hope that helps clarify things. We do the same on weapon apps (or we should be). It basically allows us to know the strengths and weaknesses of the active abilities as those differ from the summon itself.


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 28th March 2015, 12:05 pm

    Guess whose back
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    I'm gonna be taking over this app at Thorn's request based on a discussion with the admins.

    For your gravity manipulation passive ability...this won't fly as it isn't really how CS magic works. Perhaps if you introduced the star dress concept, but that won't be allowed till higher levels.

    We would allow it as a passive ability for Libra however it would need to be phrased something like this:

    Due to the telepathic link between the two (you could use this as a new passive that you can communicate with spirits via telepathy whilst you hold their key) whilst it is active she subconsciously alters the gravity around Kai as he needs it. And then add what this can do (which is what the passive ability of your magic says).

    Hope that's ok.

    Once that's sorted, and you think you've done the other edits let me know.


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    Post by Guest 28th March 2015, 2:12 pm

    Edits made. Thank you!
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 29th March 2015, 2:49 am

    Kai wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: Celestial Spirit Magic is a type of Magic in which the user summons Celestial Spirits by opening their gates through the use of Celestial Spirit Gate Keys. In order for a Mage to have successful use over a Celestial Spirit and bring it/him/her into the human world, a contract must be signed between the user and the spirit. After a contract is signed, that spirit becomes available to the user for any means necessary.

    Kai uses his Celestial Spirits not only to help him advance in battle- since he alone is a complete pacifist- but also figure out more about himself. The powers of different Celestial Spirits derive from distinct concepts; each with their own, special personality. With the guidance of each spirit, Kai has a new trait to gain when seeing them fight in battle. The most connective spirit Kai holds is Libra; the Celestial Spirit of Balance. This spirit alone helps Kai understand what is right and wrong about himself to build a new future.  
    Strengths:

    • Multiple Allies- This magic allows Kai to build an army of friends to fight his enemies; an overwhelming support for the opposition, in some cases.
    • Versatile- There are countless Celestial Spirits in the Celestial Spirit World. Therefore, Kai has many spirits to choose from.
    • Control- Kai does not have to control these spirits like puppet; they can fight on their own while their brain power is just as strong- and sometimes stronger- than their owner's.

    Weaknesses:

    • Contracts- Kai can only summon spirits from the Celestial Spirit World whom have successfully signed contracts with him in the past.
    • Pacifism- Kai is a complete pacifist, and therefore much weaker than his spirits. If his spirits fail to get in his opponent's way, Kai is an open target for punishment.
    • Damage- Each spirit can only take so much damage before they must be sent back into the Celestial Spirit World for healing (cooldown).

    Lineage:
    Soldier of Chaos:
    Description:There was once a general who's skill in battle was unsurpassed, and his leadership demanded the respect of all his soldiers. However he craved longingly for a warrior to match his skill. Slowly, this craving turned to a corrupting desire until he was lost in his search. He challenged everyone and everything that came across his path, slaughtering his king-his soldiers- fellow generals- and soon started a massive war that spread across the continent. One by one, kingdoms fell to his might. Finally, his desire turned his men against him, where they tricked their general to being entombed and to rot for eternity. The general finally died, but his spirit lived on to possess other soldiers to finally end his craving. Every so often; a Soldier is consumed by unquestionable blood-thirst, and an immeasurable desire for carnage and war until they meet their true rival in a battle to the death.
    Ability: Upon activating the lineage, the user's strength is dramatically increased, as well as his endurance and speed. They obtain a cleaving passive for their physical attacks, with a blood red aura wave emitting from whatever they are using for a weapon. 5 meter range.
    Usage: The user can only buff themselves once per thread, and it lasts five posts. While under the effects of the buff, they receive a debuff, where they will turn on everything near them, including allies until the buff has ended. If used too much, the side effects increase in duration until the person is completely corrupted by the desire.
    Unique Abilities:

    • Celestial Spirit World- As a Celestial Spirit Mage, when outside of battle, Kai can freely transport himself into the Celestial Spirit World to meet his spirits, along with countless others in their own dimension. He can also use this method to transport out, as well.
    • Gravity Manipulation- Kai is the key-holder of Libra, a Celestial Spirit who specializes with gravity. Therefore, Kai is able to  freely manipulate the effect that gravity has on his body. This is mostly used to allow for flight or to enable faster falling for an attack. This doesn't effect magically created gravity. Kai is able to reduce the effect of gravity to zero or increase the effect up to three times normal gravity. This also allows him to alter his sense of gravity so that he can freely walk up walls and on ceilings as if they were the ground.No. This has to be an ability of libra. It cannot be a passive of the magic. Sorry
    • Swap- Kai can instantly swap which Celestial Spirit he is using in the middle of battle as long as he pays the price in magic power, respectively. In his current rank, D, this will put the swapped spirit on cooldown.




    Name: Gate of the Silent Hound: Absol
    Spoiler:
    Rank: D
    Type: Summon
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Kai utilizes the power of the Silent Hound's Gate- a silver key- to release Absol from the Celestial Spirit World. Absol is very silent, though merciless in battle. The exception to this is his obedience, which he reveals proudly as he respects the commands of his owner, respectfully. He will not speak to anyone but Kai. His personality takes after his owner's completely. Absol has the ability to engulf whatever target he pounds his paw upon in flames (immune to his own power). Absol runs at 30 MPH, is 4 feet in height, and weights 75 pounds. Only whatever Absol desires to have on fire (after touching the target) will be set on fire. Inflicts one amount of D-Ranked damage. This burning seems like it should be an active ability. I.e. It can actively set its paws on fire. Otherwise its like...you can burn anything whenever you like. Which seems a bit OP to me.
    Strengths:

    • Burn- Whatever Absol pounds with his paw is set on fire.
    • Summon- Absol's summon is instant.
    • Immunity- Both Absol and his owner are immune to the flames Absol produces.

    Weaknesses:

    • Damage- Two amounts of D-Ranked damage, one amount of C-Ranked damage or anything above will force Absol back into the Celestial Spirit World, and put him on cooldown.
    • Water- Water will instantly nullify the burning effect Absol holds.
    • Fire Slayers- Any sort of fire slayer can absorb Absol's flames harmlessly.
    • Physical Contact- Absol must physically touch the enemy for his combative ability to trigger.

    Passive 1:
    Absol's Passive:



    Name: Gate of the Heavenly Scales: Libra
    Spoiler:
    Rank: D
    Type: Summon
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Libra is one of the 12 Golden Zodiac Keys. Kai utilizes Libra's key to summon her from the Celestial Spirit World. Libra's combative ability is to reduce the effect of gravity on an enemy to zero, as long as that enemy is within 15 meters of her location. Libra is just as silent as Absol, and has a personality identical to Kai's. She will only talk with him. Libra runs at a fast speed of 40 MPH, is 5 feet in height and weights 85 lbs.
    Passive 1:
    Libra's First Passive:
    Passive 2:
    Libra's Second Passive:
    Strengths:

    • Gravity Manipulation- Libra can manipulative gravity to send the enemy afloat.
    • Tactician- Kai counts on Libra the most as she proves to be the most intelligent Kai has to summon. She utilizes her surroundings well.
    • Fast- In her current D-Ranked state, Libra is the fastest Celestial Spirit Kai has to offer into a fight.

    Weaknesses:

    • Damage- It takes two amounts of D-Ranked damage, or the equivalent to force Libra back into the Celestial Spirit World (cooldown).
    • Lightning- Lightning strikes down from high to low potential, which is enough to break through the gravity effect Libra can use upon her enemies.
    • Range- Libra can only affect her enemies if they are standing within a small range of 15 meters from her.
    • Earth- Mages who specialize with the earth element, or have any power that can move the earth, like the lightning element, can break through Libra's gravity effect.


    Name: Gate of the Moon Feline: Mew
    Image of Mew:
    Rank: D
    Type: Summon
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Mew is a completely speechless, unknown creature that has been assumed a feline, hence the name of her key. She is overly protective of Kai and obedient to him. Mew has the ability to unleash lightning upon targets within 15 meters of her and deal D-Ranked damage if her enemies are struck successfully. Mew can run 25 MPH, is 3 feet in height, and weights 50 lbs.
    Passive Abilities:
    Mew's Passive:
    Strengths:

    • Immunity- Mew's conditions of battle do not harm Kai even if he is within Mew's field of attack.
    • Water- Mew is especially dangerous to those who specialize in the water element.
    • Field Control- Mew's spell promotes a sign that nobody should come near her as her lightning continuously affects a small radius around her.

    Weaknesses:

    • Wind- The element of wind can set Mew's lightning off-course.
    • Earth- Mages who specialize with the element of earth will have a resistance towards Mew's lightning attack.
    • Damage- Two amounts of D-Ranked damage will force Mew back into the Celestial Spirit World. If this is the case, Mew will be forced on cooldown, as well.
    • Movement- Mew cannot move while her lightning goes off.


    Name: Gate of the Enforcers: Phoenix
    Spoiler:
    Rank: D
    Type: Summon
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Kai utilizes the silver key, Gate of the Enforcers to summon Phoenix. Just like the other D-Ranked spirits, Phoenix is very silent, and will only speak to Kai. He is more obedient to Kai than the other spirits, and merciless in battle. Phoenix has the ability to trigger a tornado in a 15-meter radius of himself, both he and his owner being immune to this. Those who are caught in this tornado will receive D-Ranked damage and rippling effects. Phoenix is 6 feet tall and weights 180 lbs. His wings are 8 feet.
    Passive Abilities:
    Phoenix's Passive:
    Strengths:

    • Flying- Phoenix can fly, making it difficult for those who would normally seek targets on the ground to hit him.
    • Lightning- Phoenix's wind can set lightning off-course, and is there especially strong versus the element.
    • Field Control- Phoenix assures nobody gets close to him as his tornados only circulate around himself.

    Weaknesses:

    • Damage- If Phoenix receives two amounts of D-Ranked damage or the equivalent, he will be forced back into the Celestial Spirit World, where he will be set on cooldown.
    • Slow- Phoenix is slow on the ground, and will only travel 20 MPH.
    • Range- Phoenix's combative ability only affects a small range of 15 meters.
    • Fire- Phoenix is especially weak against fire. One fire spell will send him into the Celestial Spirit World.


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    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)


    It looks like you misunderstood me on this.

    Active abilities have to follow the spell template.
    Didn't mean that passives have to, but its a good idea to do so as that way we know the limitations and capabilities of it.
    Passive abilities don't need durations and cooldowns though as they are always active whilst that summon is out hence the term passive.


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    Edits made. Apologies for the confusion!
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 29th March 2015, 11:47 pm

    Err....the passives still have durations and cooldowns as far as I can see.

    Also for phoenix I don't think you need to use an ability to fly...it has wings so it can fly


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 30th March 2015, 11:49 am

    For libra's second passive I'd like to see some limitations on what you can do with it.

    And like I said your ACTIVES have to be in the spell format e.g. Absol's ability to set stuff on fire, Libra's ability to turn gravity off for people.

    Also, the gravity manipulation passive ability of the magic is a no go. It has to be either a passive of libra (taking up one of her passive slots) or you don't get it. Simples.


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