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"his attack can be used in a four swing barrage if the wielder has room for the swing(s)." If you are gonna do that, we'd have to make all four swings together deal S rank damage. We can't let you deal S rank damage with every swing of your sword. Same goes with the second ability where you say you can have a max of two strikes. This is S rank damage we are talking about xD Give me a duration on both spells....I'm guessing it would be instant.
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Re: Ramei Okami (Thunder wolf)
Are you listening to what I'm saying? For the first ability, you can swing it 4 swings? it will do 1/4 S rank damage and that is not A rank damage because 2 A rank damage is 1 S rank.
Lightning buster is fine.
Lightning buster is fine.
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Re: Ramei Okami (Thunder wolf)
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Name: Ramei Okami(Thunder Wolf)
Type: Sword(katana)
Rank: Artifact
Description: A typical long katana, blade length: 70.6cm. The hilt is a rectangle shape with a X in the center, branching to the corners. The wrapping around the hilt is black while having a average hilt color. When this blade is in the possession of a lightning user it's blade becomes coated in blue electricity, if anyone else uses the blade it will just be a normal katana. The wielder is immune to all of the attacks and sparks from the sword. Sword is usually stored in cursed seal.
Abilities:
Strengths-Shock/slashing damage
-Abilities can only be used be lightning users
-Possibly stun enemy momentarily,
-Can launch from the sword the certain spells.(range is still applied to the spells but can be used when sword is swung)
Spell List- D-Rank:Lightning Bolt, Discharge, Lightning Spear
C-Rank:White Lightning, Boa Zekaruga
B-rank: Electric Downpour, Livewire Field, Thunder Snap
Weaknesses -Water can make sparks fly in every direction
-Max of B-Rank spells being able to be cast from it
-Close range combat
-Sparks can hit allies
Technique:
Name: Lightning Slash
Type: Lightning
Rank: S
Description: The wielder can send a lightning shock wave forward when he swings the sword. The shock wave stops after hitting something. The wielder can send out two A rank slashes, four B rank slashes, or one S rank slash and it has the same stun rate based on the number of shock-waves so long as there is room to swing the sword..The blast is the same size of the blade. Can be used in combination with Lightning Buster to break through S and lower defenses. Each shock-wave does B-rank damage. If one or two shock-waves hit they stun for one post, if three or four shock-waves hit they stun for two posts.
Strengths: -Heavy shock damage
-Stuns enemy if hit
-Fast
Weaknesses:-Goes in a straight line
-While stunned they drop anything in their hands and suffer muscle spasms and their coordination is shot while stunned
-Can hit allies if they get in the way
-Can only break through S-rank defenses when mixed with Lightning Buster
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Instant
Stun duration: 1 or 2 posts
Range: 20 meters
Technique:
Name: Lightning Buster
Type: Lightning
Rank: S
Description: The wielder places the back of the sword on his shoulder as the blade grows to fifteen feet in length being made of pure lightning. This blade causes severe shock damage to anything hit, after the attack regardless if successful or not the sword returns to normal length. When the opponent is hit the are pushed back ten feet. Breaks through A-Rank and lower defenses, but it almost breaks through S-Rank. Each attack does A-rank damage
Strengths: -Extreme shock damage
-Large reach
-Knock back of 10 feet
Weaknesses:-Good for only a max of two attacks
-Can be dodged rather easily
-Can't break S-rank defenses
-Can hit allies if they get in the way
Cooldown: 10 posts
Duration: 2 attacks
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Re: Ramei Okami (Thunder wolf)
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Nightken wrote:Weapon:
Name: Ramei Okami(Thunder Wolf)
Type: Sword(katana)
Rank: Artifact
Description: A typical long katana, blade length: 70.6cm. The hilt is a rectangle shape with a X in the center, branching to the corners. The wrapping around the hilt is black while having a average hilt color. When this blade is in the possession of a lightning user it's blade becomes coated in blue electricity, if anyone else uses the blade it will just be a normal katana. The wielder is immune to all of the attacks and sparks from the sword. Sword is usually stored in cursed seal.
Abilities:
Strengths-Shock/slashing damage
-Abilities can only be used be lightning users
-Possibly stun enemy momentarily,
-Can launch from the sword the certain spells.(range is still applied to the spells but can be used when sword is swung)
Spell List- D-Rank:Lightning Bolt, Discharge, Lightning Spear
C-Rank:White Lightning, Boa Zekaruga
B-rank: Electric Downpour, Livewire Field, Thunder Snap I'm not sure about this, as this is technically loopholing a weapon having only 2 abilities. So, I'm going to ask that this is changed or removed.
Weaknesses -Water can make sparks fly in every direction
-Max of B-Rank spells being able to be cast from it
-Close range combat
-Sparks can hit allies
If you change the requested strength, please add an additional weaknesses.
Technique:
Name: Lightning Slash
Type: Lightning
Rank: S
Description: The wielder can send a lightning shock wave forward when he swings the sword. The shock wave stops after hitting something. The wielder can send out two A rank slashes, four B rank slashes, or one S rank slash and it has the same stun rate based on the number of shock-waves so long as there is room to swing the sword..The blast is the same size of the blade. Can be used in combination with Lightning Buster to break through S and lower defenses. Each shock-wave does B-rank damage. This is contradictory to what was said earlier? Since you can send forth 2 A-rank, 4 B-rank, or 1 S-rank slash for damage~ If one or two shock-waves hit they stun for one post, if three or four shock-waves hit they stun for two posts.
Strengths: -Heavy shock damage
-Stuns enemy if hit
-Fast
Weaknesses:-Goes in a straight line
-While stunned they drop anything in their hands and suffer muscle spasms and their coordination is shot while stunned
-Can hit allies if they get in the way
-Can only break through S-rank defenses when mixed with Lightning Buster
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Instant Because the stun lasts for two posts, the duration for the ability must be 2 posts.
Stun duration: 1 or 2 posts
Range: 20 meters I suggest increasing the range to 75-80m or 100m depending on the ability's rank.
Technique:
Name: Lightning Buster
Type: Lightning
Rank: S Artifact weapons are not given two S-rank abilities. One is A-rank and the other is S-rank. Please choose which of your abilities is S and the other A. Once decided, please fix the ability up that is A-rank so it complies to A-rank damage, etc.
Description: The wielder places the back of the sword on his shoulder as the blade grows to fifteen feet in length being made of pure lightning. This blade causes severe shock damage to anything hit, after the attack regardless if successful or not the sword returns to normal length. When the opponent is hit the are pushed back ten feet. Breaks through A-Rank and lower defenses, but it almost breaks through S-Rank. Each attack does A-rank damage I'm extremely iffy on being able to deal 80dmg per hit; I would much rather have a 35-40% melee damage buff instead, but if you're only ever doing 2 hits per duration, then that's fine.
Strengths: -Extreme shock damage
-Large reach
-Knock back of 10 feet
Weaknesses:-Good for only a max of two attacks
-Can be dodged rather easily
-Can't break S-rank defenses
-Can hit allies if they get in the way
Cooldown: 10 posts I suggest lowering this to either 5 or 8 posts depending on what the rank of the ability is (A-rank can be 5, S-rank can be 8).
Duration: 2 attacks This is not a duration, please specify an actual post amount. I suggest Instant.
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Re: Ramei Okami (Thunder wolf)
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- Nightken wrote:Weapon:
Name: Ramei Okami(Thunder Wolf)
Type: Sword(katana)
Rank: Artifact
Description: A typical long katana, blade length: 70.6cm. The hilt is a rectangle shape with a X in the center, branching to the corners. The wrapping around the hilt is black while having a average hilt color. When this blade is in the possession of a lightning user it's blade becomes coated in blue electricity, if anyone else uses the blade it will just be a normal katana. The wielder is immune to all of the attacks and sparks from the sword. Sword is usually stored in cursed seal.
Abilities:
Strengths-Shock/slashing damage
-Abilities can only be used be lightning users
-Possibly stun enemy momentarily,
-Can launch from the sword the certain spells.(range is still applied to the spells but can be used when sword is swung)
Spell List- D-Rank:Lightning Bolt, Discharge, Lightning Spear
C-Rank:White Lightning, Boa Zekaruga
B-rank: Electric Downpour, Livewire Field, Thunder Snap
Weaknesses -Water can make sparks fly in every direction
-Max of B-Rank spells being able to be cast from it
-Close range combat
-Sparks can hit allies
Technique:
Name: Lightning Slash
Type: Lightning
Rank: S
Description: The wielder can send a lightning shock wave forward when he swings the sword. The shock wave stops after hitting something. The wielder can send out two A rank slashes, four B rank slashes, or one S rank slash and it has the same stun rate based on the number of shock-waves so long as there is room to swing the sword..The blast is the same size of the blade. Can be used in combination with Lightning Buster to break through S and lower defenses. Each shock-wave does B-rank damage. If one or two shock-waves hit they stun for one post, if three or four shock-waves hit they stun for two posts.
Strengths: -Heavy shock damage
-Stuns enemy if hit
-Fast
Weaknesses:-Goes in a straight line
-While stunned they drop anything in their hands and suffer muscle spasms and their coordination is shot while stunned
-Can hit allies if they get in the way
-Can only break through S-rank defenses when mixed with Lightning Buster
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Instant
Stun duration: 1 or 2 posts
Range: 20 meters
Technique:
Name: Lightning Buster
Type: Lightning
Rank: S
Description: The wielder places the back of the sword on his shoulder as the blade grows to fifteen feet in length being made of pure lightning. This blade causes severe shock damage to anything hit, after the attack regardless if successful or not the sword returns to normal length. When the opponent is hit the are pushed back ten feet. Breaks through A-Rank and lower defenses, but it almost breaks through S-Rank. Each attack does A-rank damage
Strengths: -Extreme shock damage
-Large reach
-Knock back of 10 feet
Weaknesses:-Good for only a max of two attacks
-Can be dodged rather easily
-Can't break S-rank defenses
-Can hit allies if they get in the way
Cooldown: 10 posts
Duration: 2 attacks
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