Hellfire Ghost ------ Gunner Von Grave's Alt. (complete)

Name: Hellfire Ghost
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Birthday: 19th November
Sexuality: Straight
Special Characteristics: Stigmas in both eyes in the shape of pentacles.

Personality:
Before understanding Hellfire’s personality one has to know that he is a person who spent 60 years in hell and escaped. He kept the form of a 20-year-old though, thus he is technically 80.

Usually Hellfire is in a pretty good mood, never sad or depressed… which of course is partly a charade; having spent 60 years in hell he is still haunted by the memories. He is relatively hot tempered and becomes pretty aggressive when he is angry. If he is annoyed he will let you know… well… you’ll notice when his arms and legs flare up. Several people have been hospitalized because they overestimated his composure. He is someone who sees others on an equal level as himself, and in some cases even below himself, no matter what social/political status they may have. Being in hell has also corrupted him to a certain extent as well.
He may essentially be a good guy with certain “approvable” morals, but he is not one to hesitate to kill or do anything else for the matter. His laws are simple: If the soul is damned or evil, he can take it; if it’s innocent… he’ll think twice, but definitely no children. Rape, murder, torture and all those things are fine as longs as either the person deserves it or both parties “agree to it”.
He doesn’t join a legal guild because he feels misplaced there, but not a dark guild either since he isn’t evil per say, but he does have a tendency to be vile and sadistic. Obligations are another reason he doesn’t join a guild; he doesn’t want any.
He can’t exactly be described as the hero-type person; he usually acts in his own interest or out of curiosity; but he usually ends up doing a good deed.
The way he talks to people seems quite rude and his language is pretty aggressive.

There really isn’t much of a change in his behavior when fighting. The best way to describe his style would be: aggressive and head-on. If his opponent possesses an evil soul, Hellfire likes to take his time torturing his foe both physically and mentally.
Groups are something he isn’t exactly good with. Often acting on his own accord, he doesn’t operate well under leadership, nor is he the leader type. It would be preferable to him if everyone looks out for themselves. However, essentially being a good person and all, he has a knack for helping/protecting those who need it.

Likes:

Evil/damned Souls:
His magic allows him to devour souls. The more corrupted it is, the more power he gains. It’s also a good snack on-the-go.

Torment:
He likes to torment his foes physically and mentally for fun. But also innocent people though then he just messes with their minds a little bit; nothing too harmful.

Burning things:
His magic involves fire and as a result he has become something of a pyromaniac.

Dislikes:

Holy places:
Due to his circumstances he cannot enter a blessed area without permission and even then his power is drastically reduced.

Holy objects:
These don’t really harm him, but they can cause severe pain if he comes in contact.

Cats:
In Hellfire’s opinion cats are just useless, worthless animals. They can’t do any tricks or perform any tasks, unlike dogs.

Holy Magic:
Holy magic can severely harm him and thus he isn’t exactly friendly towards it.

Motivations:

NOT DIE:
If he does he goes straight back to hell. He will do almost anything to survive as long as it means he will live another day. Before he died the first time he underestimated the value of his life… now he wants to cling on to it.

Live until he is 75:
The condition for him to be able to go to heaven after escaping hell is to live for at least until the age of 75.

Being unbound:
He just wants to live it up, as a free man unbound by duties or obligations. So he pretty much acts on his own accord. This has resulted in several clashes with the council and the army.



Fears:

Early death:
Since it would send him to hell again… an experience Hellfire doesn’t want to repeat.

Someone to find out his real name:
“Hellfire Ghost” is an assumed name and due to his circumstances whoever holds his true name has complete ownership over him.

Encountering a demon that he has met before in hell:
There may not be many but some mage can conjure up demons or ask one for help. Some of these demons hold a grudge against him and Hellfire doesn’t stand a chance against their UNBOUND power.

General Appearance


Height: 5’10
Weight: 150 lbs
Hair: black, medium hair
Eyes: dark blue
Skin Tone: light
Appearance:
He is a tall man of average build. He isn’t very muscular, but he is a lot stronger than he may appear. Hi usual attire consist of a black short-sleeved shirt, a pair of black trousers, a black belt, a pair of black leather gloves, black boots and a black trench coat. He usually puts on a smiley-face mask when he goes into battle; a habit he adapted somehow.

Guild/Council

Guild: None
Tattoo: Black on his right forearm
Rank: D

Is this done?

now its done

Ok, leave out all of your commentary in the personality, and just explain your character's personality. Your commentary disrupts the flow of trying to understand your character.

Please organize your personality, it seems to jump from on part of him to another without any flow, and then back again. You should also have about only 2 paragraphs, the first one how he is on a day to day basis, the second one how he is in battle; meaning how he acts under a leader, how he is as a leader, and so on in that manner.

your likes/dislikes/motivations/fears should be in bullet form: exp-
like/dislike/motivation/fear; reason
like/dislike/motivation/fear; reason
like/dislike/motivation/fear; reason
you need a minimum of three for each, it is hard to read when they are in paragraph form.

Please convert your units of measurements to feet and lbs. It is the system we use here, not metric. Sorry.

other than that you are basically set until you have done the organizations and we look through it again.

Please bump when edited.

Find a way to remove ALL of your parenthesis (which is interruptive commentary by you, as for what it stands for) and find a way to keep it all simple.

Why are you talking about his magic in this? You shouldn't have even started your magic app so why are you talking about it here? You don't even mention it it comes out of no where for no reason.

one more motivation, one more dislike.

Once again, remove all reasons of your magic, and just talk about your character....stop incorporating something NOT INVOLVED with this app and that you shouldn't have even started yet.

Once again, convert your height and weight. If you do not do this, I will not allow you to be approved. And yes again, we need them in FEET and POUNDS (lbs)

bump when edited.

I still see parenthesis in your post.

Other than that I see no more problems. Incoorperate the parenthesis into your app without needing them. It is inturruptive.

bump.

Ok, approved. It is at least under decent standards.