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    Riley's pet

    Iesha
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    Approved Riley's pet

    Post by Iesha 23rd December 2014, 7:39 am

    Name: Theo
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Arctic wolf
    Type: exceed
    Description: Theo is a young Arctic wolf, covered in white fur with a small bushy tail. He has big grey eyes and a tiny black nose. He has a weight of 15 pounds and is 30 inches tall. His body is 1 m long. Theo has a playful personality and does not resort to violence unless he feels that he's in danger. He can adapt to any climate and he loves playing in the snow. 


    Theo:
    Abilities: Theo is absolutely adorable. 


    Last edited by Riley Nightwalker on 6th January 2015, 10:42 am; edited 4 times in total
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    Approved Re: Riley's pet

    Post by Cirven 26th December 2014, 8:31 am

    Yo Riley! Review time! PM me if you have any questions.

    Riley Nightwalker wrote:Name: Theo
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Arctic wolf
    Type: combat pet
    Description: Theo is a young Arctic wolf, covered in white fur with a small bushy tail. He has big grey eyes and a tiny black nose. He has a weight of 15 pounds and is 30 inches tall. His body is 1 m long. Theo has a playful personality and does not resort to violence unless he feels that he's in danger. He can adapt to any climate and he loves playing in the snow. 


    Theo:
    Abilities: Theo is absolutely adorable. 


    Name: Frost breath
    Rank: D
    Description: Theo can breath on non-magical solid object, turning it into ice Seeing how this is a combat pet this Ability will deal damage to anyone/anything he breathes on equal to the rank of this spell. Also this spell needs a CD and after its use.
    Strengths: It can turn any non-magical object into ice. You are going to need at least two more strengths here.
    Weaknesses:  -The ice can melt.
                         -Cannot affect magical objects.You are going to need at least two more weaknesses here.


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    Iesha
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    Approved Re: Riley's pet

    Post by Iesha 26th December 2014, 11:40 am

    Bump Bump Bump!! ready to be re-checked!!
    :laugh:
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    Approved Re: Riley's pet

    Post by Cirven 26th December 2014, 12:58 pm

    Riley Nightwalker wrote:Name: Theo
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Arctic wolf
    Type: combat pet
    Description: Theo is a young Arctic wolf, covered in white fur with a small bushy tail. He has big grey eyes and a tiny black nose. He has a weight of 15 pounds and is 30 inches tall. His body is 1 m long. Theo has a playful personality and does not resort to violence unless he feels that he's in danger. He can adapt to any climate and he loves playing in the snow. 


    Theo:
    Abilities: Theo is absolutely adorable. 


    Name: Frost breath
    Rank: D
    Description: Theo can breath on non-magical solid object, turning it into ice. The duration of the spell is 2 posts and the cooldown is 3 posts This spell fits better as a instant use rather than having him blowing out cold for 2 posts straight where he could be made vulnerable. This spell's 3 post CD is fine though. Also please state that this does 1 D-rank damage.
    Strengths: 
    -It can turn any non-magical object into ice.
    -The spell can turn non-magical objects at a distance of 1 m into ice.
    - The spell can decrees the temperature down by 2 degrees Celsius.   This strength isn't going to work. We don't have anyway of explaining how much temperature it will take to freeze a target at all. Something like 'Deals 25% extra D-rank damage to water based creatures' will work here.
    Weaknesses:  
    -The ice can melt
    -Cannot affect magical objects.
    -Can only be active for 2 posts. Please state here that the non-magical item being frozen will only be frozen for 2 posts here.
    -The wind can redirect the direction of the breath causing it to miss it's target.


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    Approved Re: Riley's pet

    Post by Iesha 26th December 2014, 1:10 pm

    Bump Bump Bump. Ready for approval.
    :kyllwhenshesee
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    Approved Re: Riley's pet

    Post by Cirven 26th December 2014, 1:26 pm

    Last thing is just add to a part of the description that this spell deals D-rank damage so it is specified.


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    Approved Re: Riley's pet

    Post by Iesha 26th December 2014, 1:28 pm

    Done!!
     :heeromoment:
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    Approved Re: Riley's pet

    Post by Cirven 26th December 2014, 1:40 pm

    Annnnnnd...

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    Approved Re: Riley's pet

    Post by Hikachu 6th January 2015, 10:38 am

    Unlocked for edits.


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    Approved Re: Riley's pet

    Post by Hikachu 6th January 2015, 11:31 am

    Approved shizzle.


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