Xayne Tashori

Slayne wrote:

"If you can't believe in yourself, believe in me who believes in you."

Name: Xayne Tashori [Black Prince]
Nickname: The Demon Emperor
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Birthday: June,12
Sexuality: Bisexual
Special Characteristics: None

Personality:
Xayne is a highly intelligent indiviual who is also calm, sophisticated, and arrogant due to his aristocrat upbringing. While at school, Xayne conducts himself as a sociable, likable, and often easy going student. However, in reality, this is a mask to hide his true nature. While as Zero his true nature is expressed. His charisma and beliefs in justice gain him the trust and respect of many soldiers and leaders.
While Xayne is righteous and noble by nature he is more than willing to do acts that go against his morality; this is due to his belief that he must commit evil to destroy an even greater evil.

Xayne has a habit of accepting responsibility for actions which he has no fault in. This may be his tragic flaw. Xayne seems to have an average amount of concern for innocent lives, while he does oppose the concept of terrorism, he does not display a great amount of remorse for the collateral of his endeavors. <--- You currently have a grand total of: 164 words. You will need 500 words to be accepted as per the limitations and statures of the approval process. I also need to understand how your character acts when is in charge of a group, and when is just a member in the background of a group. Allow for use to get a sense of how your character fights and what strategies he employs. You've touched on this a bit in your likes.


Likes:

Winning battles; Being a mage driven by a force to become stronger, for his siblings more than anyone else, Xayne always likes to win battles. This means that, although once taught otherwise, Xayne will never play fair. Feigned exhaustion and hidden spells he leaves until necessary are but two of his sneaky tactics, and he had some others that he hides in case needed during battle. No matter what however, unless forced down to the ground and physically unable to get back up, Xayne will never give up, and will always get back up if he's forced down, no matter how suicidal his situation may be. <--- Fine


His Magic; Being a rare and powerful form of Lost magic that is capable of great healing and great destruction, Xayne thinks his magic is the best. His element is air so he will usually have a ready supply of his element to consume to revitalize himself with. His magic is "lost" so he wishes to make it very well known. People know of Dragon Slayers, but they will soon know the power of Air. <--- This has absolutely nothing to do with your magic that you have approved. Replace it, modify it, or whatever cause it doesn't fit.


His Guild; Over the last three years, he has developed a love for his ‘family’ that goes much beyond what most guild leaders feel. These aren’t his members, they’re his brothers and sisters, his children, his nieces and nephews. They’re his family, and he will fight to the death to protect them. <--- Fine


Dislikes:
Being Given Responsibility; The entire reason he acts immature is for this reason. Xayne does not like being given huge responsibilities. Small things like going to the shops to buy food for the guild is fine, but something that, if it goes wrong, could put a comrade in danger, is the kind of responsibility he hates the most. If he is given such a responsibility he will perform it to the best of his ability, no matter his feelings on the matter. He does not like it but he will still do it. <--- Fine


Meetings; Since he is immature and does not like being given major responsibility, Xayne does not like going to meetings because they will usually be about giving him something to do. He will still attend meetings no matter how unimportant they may be, but just don't expect him to be the first there or even on time. He will usually make up a very bad excuse like the one listed above to explain his tardiness. He is a very bad liar. <--- Correlates with the above statement, so it's fine.


Being noisy for no reason; As listed above Xayne likes being in peace. In quietness and calmness. When a person jumps in and starts to scream at people for no solid reason he might get angry. Xayne doesn't raise his voice allot and is used to being in silence. He dislikes loud shouting people. <--- Fine


His twisting gut; When Xayne is unsure about a certain move or action he has a twisting gut, it's rather mentally than it is physically. He had this for years and it's an very unpleasant feeling which he strongly dislikes. <--- Fine


Being rushed to do things; Xayne is a slight bit of a control freak. Everything he does he does slightly slow. He likes relaxing whilst doing these things. Of course this doesn't reflect upon his response speed. <--- Fine


Motivations:

Leading and protecting his guild; Finally, he is clearly a loyal master of his guild, wanting to protect them more than anything else in the world. He doesn’t want to see them get hurt, as they’re the ones who managed to bring him back to his old self after the council incident. <--- Change this, or change your other three things. If he was motivated to protect and lead his guild, he would be motivated enough to handle the responsibility thrust upon him.


To Become the Strongest Mage There Is; Since his magic is a very strong form of magic, Xayne wishes it to be known as the strongest form of magic. Dragon Slayer is one of the strongest but he wishes Air Dragon Slayer to be known more than the rest. This mean that he wishes to rise in the ranks of his guild to become and S rank mage. He does not wish to be Guild Master, but to be well known in his guild and throughout the world. <--- Fine, however you're not a Dragon Slayer, or an Air Magic user. Remove those indications.


Fears:
Loss; All of his life, Xayne has been forced to come to terms with people he loves dying. His parents, his fiance, his teacher, his best friend, and so many more besides. After all this time, he fears losing again. He doesn’t want to have to go through that. Not once more. <--- Fine

Being Defeated; Since he wishes to become a very strong mage, Aokami believes that, if he is defeated in a battle, he will shame his father. This is why he wishes to become stronger and it is also why he refuses to give up, no matter what. <--- Who is Aokami? Explain that a bit.

Becoming Angry; Due to the fact that he ends up doing a lot of stuff that he regrets when he loses himself to rage, he has ended up being scared about becoming angry. He doesn’t like to think about the things that he ends up doing when he’s mad. <--- Fine

General Appearance

Height: 178 cm <--- Fine
Weight: 55 KG <--- Fine
Hair: Light Black <--- Fine
Eyes: Violet (Before)
Both eyes are encompassed with Geass <--- Fine
Skin Tone: Fair <--- Fine
Appearance: Xayne's trademarks are his ebony hair, and violet eyes, which he inherited from his mother, and father respectively. Lelouch is somewhat scrawny, having little muscle, and being rather thin. <--- Who the hell is Lelouch? Also, add some details about his outfit. What does he enjoy wearing? Does his outfit differ on missions? If so explain the differences.

Guild/Council

Guild: Raven Tail <--- Fine
Tattoo: Xayne has a few tattoo's all over his body, though not every tattoo is revealed because of his clothing. <--- Why does he have so many guild tattoos? Explain why he would do that in one of the above areas. That is crazy.
Rank: D <--- Fine
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Slayne wrote:

"What I'm saying is, we are the strongest guild there is... and Raven Tail has no need for weaklings!!!"

Name: Xayne Tashori [Black Prince] <--- Fine

Nickname: The Demon Emperor<--- You need to add Zero to this, if his nickname is Zero.
Gender: Male <--- Fine
Age: 25 <--- Fine
Birthday: June,12 <--- Fine
Sexuality: Bisexual <--- Fine
Special Characteristics: None <--- Fine

Personality:
Xayne is a highly intelligent indiviual who is also calm, sophisticated, and arrogant due to his aristocrat upbringing. While at school, Xayne conducts himself as a sociable, likable, and often easy going student. However, in reality, this is a mask to hide his true nature. While as Zero his true nature is expressed. He seems to believe that his power is absolute, or, at least, higher than that of anyone else. In battles he is often bored by the weakness of his opponents. His self-confidence, in fact, comes from great skill, but it is not flawless.He seems to be sadistic, when he finds a strong opponent, he will make them suffer. He is also afraid of his father.

He does not respect his opponents, as he often calls them trash or maggots. He is willing to do all that is needed to achieve his goal. As a leader of a dark guild, he is cruel even to his comrades, as he attacks his friends for losing to a regular guild. His comrades are just puppets for him, as he says that he can just find new ones. He has two personalities: There is the face he shows to the world, which loves fame and goes by the codename of "Xayne" and another hidden face, which loves destruction and goes by the name of "Zero". Xayne may be disrespectful and cruel to foes and allies alike, but Zero just seeks to destroy everyone and everything. Zero states that from of his perspective, if someone or something has still some kind of form, he, she, or it is worth destroying. Xayne seems to be somewhat afraid of his other self, Zero, so as a consequence he used every Raven Tail member as a "key" to lock his other personality away and when he was defeated, even warned the Light Alliance about him.

However, Xayne's true personality tends to surface every time he gets angry. In such state, he shows himself as he truly is: an evil, reckless and sadistic man, willing to cause extreme suffering to his enemies and to commit evil deeds only to prove the superiority of his own Guild, which seemed to get his full attention and care. He is also greedy, and willing to blackmail and pump money out of the rich by keeping hostage to finance Raven Tail's activities. This evil side of him seems capable of literally affecting Xayne's appearance.

Towards enemies, Xayne acts hostile and doesn’t take anything from anyone. Not only does he always keep his guard up, he looks death in the eyes like it’s nothing, but that doesn’t mean he doesn’t fear anything. His eyes turn from his regular expression to a cold-hearted one; craving for blood. It’s completely the opposite he normally has towards friends, possibly even worse than the opposite of that. If he does have the opportunity to let the enemy live, he would gladly do so, but if they should cross him a second time, death will be the only option he will have. <--- Fine, but how come he is in school? There are no magic colleges in Fiore. xD.

Likes:

Winning battles; Being a mage driven by a force to become stronger, for his siblings more than anyone else, Xayne always likes to win battles. This means that, although once taught otherwise, Xayne will never play fair. Feigned exhaustion and hidden spells he leaves until necessary are but two of his sneaky tactics, and he had some others that he hides in case needed during battle. No matter what however, unless forced down to the ground and physically unable to get back up, Xayne will never give up, and will always get back up if he's forced down, no matter how suicidal his situation may be. <--- Fine

Fighting; Xayne enjoys fighting, as long as there are no drawbacks attached to the fight, such the opponent having hostages. He admires someone that can stand up to him without calling for help and actually fight him one on one, without any tricks. <--- Fine

His Guild; Over the last three years, he has developed a love for his ‘family’ that goes much beyond what most guild leaders feel. These aren’t his members, they’re his brothers and sisters, his children, his nieces and nephews. They’re his family, and he will fight to the death to protect them. <--- This no longer is accurate, because in your personality you have stated he doesn't care about anything but himself. Even going as far to belittle and attack his allies. This needs to be changed to reflect his view found in his personality. State things like he like the guild because of their uses and how expendable they are. Rather than having any actual personal ties to them.

Dislikes:
Being Given Responsibility; The entire reason he acts immature is for this reason. Xayne does not like being given huge responsibilities. Small things like going to the shops to buy food for the guild is fine, but something that, if it goes wrong, could put a comrade in danger, is the kind of responsibility he hates the most. If he is given such a responsibility he will perform it to the best of his ability, no matter his feelings on the matter. He does not like it but he will still do it. <--- Fine

Meetings; Since he is immature and does not like being given major responsibility, Xayne does not like going to meetings because they will usually be about giving him something to do. He will still attend meetings no matter how unimportant they may be, but just don't expect him to be the first there or even on time. He will usually make up a very bad excuse like the one listed above to explain his tardiness. He is a very bad liar. <--- Fine

Being noisy for no reason; As listed above Xayne likes being in peace. In quietness and calmness. When a person jumps in and starts to scream at people for no solid reason he might get angry. Xayne doesn't raise his voice allot and is used to being in silence. He dislikes loud shouting people. <--- Fine

His twisting gut; When Xayne is unsure about a certain move or action he has a twisting gut, it's rather mentally than it is physically. He had this for years and it's an very unpleasant feeling which he strongly dislikes. <--- Fine

Being rushed to do things; Xayne is a slight bit of a control freak. Everything he does he does slightly slow. He likes relaxing whilst doing these things. Of course this doesn't reflect upon his response speed. <--- Fine

Motivations:

To Become the Strongest Mage There Is; Since his magic is a very strong form of magic, Xayne wishes it to be known as the strongest form of magic. This mean that he wishes to rise in the ranks of his guild to become and S rank mage. He does not wish to be Guild Master, but to be well known in his guild and throughout the world. <--- Fine

His own limits; Anyone can become strong with enough effort – What Xayne is planning is to push passed his own limits, becoming the one that can ultimately protect what he chooses to protect, in other words; become a real warrior. One without hesitation. <--- Fine


<--- Mission Motivation number Three. Fix this issue.


Fears:
Loss; All of his life, Xayne has been forced to come to terms with people he loves dying. His parents, his fiance, his teacher, his best friend, and so many more besides. After all this time, he fears losing again. He doesn’t want to have to go through that. Not once more. <--- Fine

Being Defeated; Since he wishes to become a very strong mage, Xayne believes that, if he is defeated in a battle, he will shame his father. This is why he wishes to become stronger and it is also why he refuses to give up, no matter what. <--- Fine

Becoming Angry; Due to the fact that he ends up doing a lot of stuff that he regrets when he loses himself to rage, he has ended up being scared about becoming angry. He doesn’t like to think about the things that he ends up doing when he’s mad. <--- Fine

General Appearance

Height: 178 cm <--- Fine
Weight: 55 KG <--- Fine
Hair: Light Black <--- Fine
Eyes: Violet (Before)
Both eyes are encompassed with Geass <--- Fine but what the heck is a Geass. Explain that.
Skin Tone: Fair <--- Fine
Appearance: Xayne's trademarks are his ebony hair, and violet eyes, which he inherited from his mother, and father respectively. Xayne is somewhat scrawny, having little muscle, and being rather thin. When he is happy, he has a face that could light up an entire town, but when he's angry... well, there is something that only those who have lived through hell have, and it's planted straight on his lips. That's right, he looks like a demon when he is pissed off. Even more so when he fades to black, a symptom of long-time exposure to mind altering magic. When he fades to black, his eyes literally start to be pure black, as if he was a legitimate demon.

In terms of clothes, he wears whatever he finds comfortable, although there's a lot of dark colours, and wearing things that are very tight to his body. Black linen trousers, a white shirt with black overshirt, and leather boots. The only thing that isn't like that is the cloak he wears over the top, a plain cloak that seems, for all intents and purposes, to be made out of burlap. It has a hood that falls down so far that it hides his face in shadow but still allows him to see. <--- Fine

Guild/Council

Guild: Raven Tail <--- Fine
Tattoo: Located on the left chest. <--- Fine
Rank: D <--- Fine

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