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    ErzaScarlet_Tatania
    ErzaScarlet_Tatania

    Player 
    Lineage : Wrath Of Neptune
    Position : None
    Posts : 33
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
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    Post by ErzaScarlet_Tatania 30th November 2014, 12:23 am

    Name: Ruri Takame
    Gender: Female
    Age: 18
    Birthday: January 1st
    Sexuality: straight
    Special Characteristics: is a cat but has a human form

    Personality: She likes reading books and doing puzzles. She frequently studies to remain as a model student. She is often seen with a book, and seems to always have one on her person She relies a lot on books to help her understand things, and is sometimes teased by her friends, who calls her a bookworm. She seems to prefer to stay in her house and read or study, emphasized by her lack of ability to play games such as basketball (despite her athleticism), as she does not know the rules.

    She is stubborn, foolhardy, gloomy-natured and is quick to resort to violence. However, these traits only apply to her when she is upset. She is actually very brave, smart, confident and responsible. Despite her mature and serious demeanor, she sometimes shows some child-like girlish traits she is bright, cheerful, direct and confident, smart, and hard working She can also be very thoughtful, kind and compassionate. She is enthusiastic, but sometimes takes her enthusiasm too far and can be bossy at times. However, over time, she can admit to her mistakes and is not too proud to apologize.

    She is kind and caring to her friends. Her willing to help is not limited to her friends, as she will stop to help out or encourage even strangers that she finds are having a hard time. She will not hesitate to do anything to help her friends, although she also will also not hesitate to put them in line if they do something inappropriate. Although she was always kind hearted, mature, and level headed, she has noticeable temper problems. She shows quick irritation at other characters when they do things that annoy her. Since she is generally mature and focused she is the most reliable despite not being as strong as others are in combat.

    She can be extremely sensitive and emotional when someone scorns her abilities. But she is not prideful or arrogant about her achievements whatsoever; in fact, she is the opposite. Deep down, she still has insecurities and doubts about herself on how strong she is. she is very brave, and willing to throw herself at any enemy no matter how strong they are. She is very determined in battle, never giving up fighting even when the chances of her victory look grim. She also displays an almost frightening ferocity and drive in battle, not afraid of punching her opponents directly in the face (which she does quite often). She sometimes has a tendency to lose control of her usual stable emotions more in battle she also holds deep respect for her superiors. she will listen to what they have to say and do what ever it takes to achieve the tasks they give her. she will not back down in a fight especially if her superiors are there to help her she will do anything to make them proud that she is on their team. as a leader she would do what ever it takes to keep her team safe and unharmed. she would help everyone and answer any questions her other team members have.

    relatively no evil or insanity within her. This likely is largely the reason for her noble and heroic personality traits, and her natural desire to do good. It also likely explains why most of her techniques are based around erasing or destroying evil, as it accompanies her heroism.she became displeased of her father's behavior as he cheated on his wife and led to a strain between him and her mom, which gave her large amounts of possible stress, though, It seems not to affect her now, but it has effected her thoughts on her father.

    Likes:

    •books, she likes books because it gives her an excuse to ignore her dad



    •studying, she loves to get good grades on everything so she studies a lot



    •yogurt, she loves eating healthy and her favorite snack is yogurt



    Dislikes:

    •spiders, she hates spiders simply because she was bitten by a spider



    •snakes, she hates snakes because her best friend was killed by one



    •dogs, she hates dogs because well she's a cat



    Motivations:

    •her friends, she likes to get support from her friends every once in a while



    •her mom, her mom is the hole reason she is motivated to pass



    •her owner, she is motivated to work harder at keeping her owner safe



    Fears:

    •losing her friends, she is afraid that if she does something wrong she will lose her friends



    •fire, she was almost killed by fire



    •buffalo, she was almost trampled by a Buffalo as a baby



    General Appearance


    Height: 5 feet 4 inches (in human form)
    Weight: 100lbs
    Hair: she has Black fur/Hair she always has it down around her shoulders
    Eyes: her eyes are red
    Skin Tone: light
    Appearance: she wears a black dress with black gloves, and black lacy heels
    Guild/Council guild

    Guild: Fairy Tail
    Tattoo: the color is Red and it is on her Back
    Rank: D


    Last edited by ErzaScarlet_Tatania on 30th November 2014, 5:09 pm; edited 1 time in total
    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
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    Post by Aayla 30th November 2014, 9:46 am

    Okay everything looks to be in order. I just want to clarify that you are in fact a human sized cat? It's fine it you are I just want to be sure. Also, if you could just fix the bold code where your eye color is stated. Please fix all of that in this thread, don't make a new one.


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    Felicity
    Felicity

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Slayer- Dragon Slayer- Dark Guild Ace- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Advertisement Achievement Badge- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Evil Angel
    Position : None
    Posts : 2984
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 25
    Experience : 75987.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Toxic Scourge
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    Post by Felicity 1st December 2014, 1:01 am

    Um, this character has already been approved (here). @Erza, you don't need to make new threads each time a Moderator asks you for an edit. You simply click the edit button, do the necessary changes and post a reply to the same thread that says "BUMP" (Or any damn thing).

    This thread will be archived soon and you can make the necessary edits on the thread that I linked above (Since it was already approved by me once). As for the edit that Aayla asked for, you can elaborate the size of your cat form in the other thread as well.


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