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Yvette Alvarez wrote:

Fire Magic | Yvette Alvarez

Primary Magic: Fire Magic: Ignacia | 火の魔法 Hi no Mahō
Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Fire Magic is a form of Magic that ultizes the element of Fire, allowing Yvette to manipulate the element for various purposes, including offensive and defensive types, as well as for supplementary types and healing. The user can change the properties of the element at her will, allowing her to take any kinds of shape, be it a solid or a gas. This type of magic has many different kinds of colours and each colour portrays a different purpose. For example, Red and Yellow and Purple would represent offensive and defensive types of spells, whereas White flames are capable of healing an ally and buffing her comrades’ spells. Yvette is able to conjure and control Fire from any part of her body or even from nearby surroundings.

This kind of Fire Magic can do much more than just burning her enemies. For instance, Yvette is also able to produce fire bullets from her hands or her body and launch them at her opponents. The Fire produced from this type of Magic is tremendously hotter than the standard fire, since her body temperature is even capable of melting irons and steel. As this magic is produced from her own body, it is somehow connected to her feelings. The more emotional Yvette gets, the stronger her Fire become and the more it will burn. Depending on her emotions, Yvette can change colours of her Fire. Moreover, Yvette has the ability to set her whole body on fire without causing any harm to her body.

Okay from what I read here, I see that you're using "Fire Magic." The thing is, I DO NOT see any viable explanation of the multiple elements here. So please put that in here. What you have going on in some of your spells is that there is a multiple use per spell (4 per spell). People are just going to assume before reading the spells that each element gives you four spells per spell. If this is the case, you are to not have any signature spells. I'm willing to meet you halfway on this one if you can give me a better explanation to this. This is too general.

Colour List for Offensive Types
Red/Orange = Generic Fire
Purple = Fire and Poison
Bright Yellow = Fire and Lightning

Generally, only the Red/Orange Fire can cause burning, the Purple Fire is able to slow the movement speed of her enemies and make explosions as well as infecting them with poison and the Yellow Fire can cause attacks based on Lightning on her enemies. Apart from the Red/Orange Fire, the Purple, White and Yellow Fire cannot be extinguished by wind or water.

Once again, you're going to have to explain why you have these elements in your magic. From what I am reading is that this is not really a "fire" magic to compare this to canonically. You're working with a Paper Magic Type of magic.

Aura Type: N/A
Strengths:
:: Elemental Resistance: This magic enables Yvette to become immune to the effects of the Fire, Poison and Lightning produced from her enemies and herself.

Fire Spells:
D-Rank: 20% Resistance
C-Rank: 10% Resistance
B-Rank: 5% Resistance
A-Rank: No Resistance
S-Rank: No Resistance
H-Rank: No Resistance

Lightning & Poison Spells:
D-Rank: 10% Resistance
C-Rank: 5% Resistance
B-Rank: No Resistance
A-Rank: No Resistance
S-Rank: No Resistance
H-Rank: No Resistance

Once again, this is fine if you can give me a viable explanation of why you have multiple elements with a magic dedicated to fire.

:: Healing: Yvette has the ability to heal herself and her comrades due to the capability of White flames which are produced from her body.
:: Endurance: This magic gives her high endurance, allowing her to take a couple more attacks than a regular mage. This is too general, please explain this.
:: Catching Fire: Fire can be easily spread out by Wind, causing nearby objects to burn rapidly into a wide area.
Weaknesses:
:: Slayers: Fire Dragon Slayers has the ability to consume Yvette’s Generic Fire spells only whereas Demon and God slayers can devour every kind of Yvett's spells, even mixed ones.
:: Water & Ice: As it is known, Water is used to put out fire and Ice is capable to freeze her Fire. Ice... freezes fire? It would freeze fire if it was a higher ranked spell. You're going to be able to be on par with fire spells your rank.
:: Sand: More than Fire can put out water, Sand can extinguish Fire even faster. This is a strength, because as it is stated in a sand magic type. Fire turns sand into glass. Earth like a big rock would be fine to put here.
:: Wind: As Wind can help surrounding objects to catch fire, it also acts as an enemy. When harsh Wind is blown against Fire, it can doused out the flames. Once again, the spell has to be higher ranked.
:: Enraged State: When Yvette is out of control, that is if she is raging too much from her anger, her own flames can harm herself, regardless of how much she is able to resist to her Fire.
Lineage:
Soldier of Chaos:
Description: There was once a general who's skill in battle was unsurpassed, and his leadership demanded the respect of all his soldiers. However he craved longingly for a warrior to match his skill. Slowly, this craving turned to a corrupting desire until he was lost in his search. He challenged everyone and everything that came across his path, slaughtering his king-his soldiers- fellow generals- and soon started a massive war that spread across the continent. One by one, kingdoms fell to his might. Finally, his desire turned his men against him, where they tricked their general to being entombed and to rot for eternity. The general finally died, but his spirit lived on to possess other soldiers to finally end his craving. Every so often; a Soldier is consumed by unquestionable blood-thirst, and an immeasurable desire for carnage and war until they meet their true rival in a battle to the death.
Ability: Upon activating the lineage, the user's strength is dramatically increased, as well as his endurance and speed. They obtain a cleaving passive for their physical attacks, with a blood red aura wave emitting from whatever they are using for a weapon. 5 meter range.
Usage: The user can only buff themselves once per thread, and it lasts five posts. While under the effects of the buff, they receive a debuff, where they will turn on everything near them, including allies until the buff has ended. If used too much, the side effects increase in duration until the person is completely corrupted by the desire.
Unique Abilities:
:: Wings: Yvette can summon wings on her back for transportation for short distances. The edges of her wings is usually burnt with live flames. With wings, Yvette can travel 25 m/s. Duration: 1 post, Cooldown: 4 posts
:: Regeneration: The fire in Yvette’s body allow her to regenerate and heal herself for 10% of her health over time. The Regeneration can be Duration: 1 post, Cooldown: 5 posts. This ability can be used 3 times per thread.

No. Here is why:

**Addendum to Abilities**: Health regen abilities can only cap out to 5% of HP regardless of rank or type. Health regen has to MAKE SENSE with your magic. Meaning that if you have healing magic, of course you're going to have regen. By stacking weapons/etc to your character for regen you are only allowed to max out at 15%.

:: Damage Over Time: Every offensive spell casted by Yvette deals an extra burn that is half the spell’s damage for the next 2 posts. If the extra burn has affected an enemy, they can’t be affected by the burn for 4 posts after the duration has ended.

I don't like that it's half the spell's damage for 2 posts. For one post is fine and then after that it goes on cool down for three posts.

D-Rank:

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