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    Kodai Venator
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    Post by Kodai Venator 11th October 2014, 9:51 am

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Ancient Huntsman Magic
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: A hybrid ReQuip/Summoning branch. He can Requip tools and weapons that were used for hunting long ago, i.e. a bow, skinning knives, hunting knives, a spear, leather armor. There's also a summoning aspect, in which Kodai can summon hunting animals, such as dogs and hawks.
    Strengths:

    • Requipping objects designed to kill
    • A combination of close-combat weapons and long-ranged weapons
    • Summoning animals that kill

    Weaknesses:

    • Requipping emits a bright flash of light, making stealth hard
    • Summoning also emits a flash of light
    • Weapons can be broken
    • Animals can be killed


    Abilities/Powers:

    • Outside of combat, requipping clothes, usually made of fur or leather. It can also allow the user to store remains of creatures, such as bones or skin.
    • Summoning
    • Grants it's user the ability to wield their weapons with ease, even a longbow with a 300 lb draw weight.
    • Allows Kodai to open a 'door' to a pocket dimension, allowing him to store things within it. Kodai cannot enter this pocket dimension.



    spells:


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 11th October 2014, 11:15 am

    Kodai Venator wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Ancient Huntsman Magic
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Essentially, a combination of Requip Magic and Take-Over Magic. He can Requip tools and weapons that were used for hunting long ago, i.e. a bow, skinning knives, hunting knives, a spear, leather armor. The magic also gives a strange ability: when he drinks the blood of animals he kills, he gains the ability to transform into that creature.
    Strengths:

    • Requipping objects designed to kill
    • A combination of close-combat weapons and long-ranged weapons
    • Transforming into various creatures
    • Stealth ability (Small animals)
    • Combat ability (Large, fierce animals)

    Weaknesses:

    • Limited transformation (Five per thread, including back into his human form)
    • If all five transformations are used, one hour cool-down This doesn't make sense. We don't really do a 'time based' thing here. You'll need a number of posts
    • If he doesn't return to his human form in those five, he is stuck in his last transformation for two hours Same point as above
    • Limited transformation index (Only twelve, if more are added, others must be lost)
    • Limited Requip index (Only 42, including every piece of armor) This and the above aren't weaknesses. Requips take spell slots out of your list. As will be your transformations.
    • At his level, the transformation is only the animal, not it's abilities. For instance, if he transforms into a dragon, he can't use the dragon's magic, only it's fangs and claws.
    • Transformation requires a small blood sacrifice to activate

    Abilities/Powers:

    • Transformation
    • Outside of combat, requipping clothes, usually made of fur or leather


    Spell Template


    Name: Basic Transformation
    Rank: D
    Type: Variable, depending on what he transforms into
    Description: Kodai sheds some of his blood, the manner doesn't matter. He then pushes his magic into the wounded area, and pictures what animal or monster he wishes to transform into. This basic spell is limited to medium- or small-sized animals, such as dogs, cats, mice, rats, squirrels and wolves.
    Strengths:

    • Transformation into animals

    Weaknesses:

    • See weaknesses above, in the magic form



    Ok first things first: Please read the takeover and requip rules.

    Requip: Any armors and weapons you want are actual spells.
    Takeover: You get THREE full transformations maximum. These transformations can have four partials e.g. arm, leg etc. These partials must be at least one rank below the full. Thus at D rank you won't get a full.


    As you seem to want 'animal transformation' I would not make this takeover.
    I would instead have various armours that you have made from animals...and that is what gives you their abilities. This would allow you more versatility I think.


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    Post by Kodai Venator 11th October 2014, 5:17 pm

    Bump


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 12th October 2014, 10:56 am

    You need to bulk up the descriptions. We like a paragraph.
    We also prefer to have three strengths and four weaknesses unless you clearly describe the flaws in the spell description.
    Each of your requips will also need a duration and cooldown. For D ranks this is normally around 3 posts for both.


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    Post by Kodai Venator 12th October 2014, 11:04 am

    Well, for basic requips, there's not much to tell. Also, there's not many flaws or strengths. When I get higher rank spells, there would be more to write about.
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 12th October 2014, 11:21 am

    There is a lot you can say. What the weapon looks like, how long they are, how much damage they can take before they break (normally measured in D ranks). They will also need durations and cooldowns.


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 12th October 2014, 12:13 pm

    Durations cannot be longer than cooldowns.


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 12th October 2014, 12:18 pm

    Approved


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    Post by Indiana Jones 8th November 2014, 11:56 am

    Unlocked for upgrades.


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    Kodai Venator
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    Post by Kodai Venator 8th November 2014, 3:01 pm

    All done upgrading. Ready to be reapproved.


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    Post by Cirven 8th November 2014, 6:16 pm

    *Busts through the ceiling*

    Its time for a review Kodai!

    Edits will be in THIS color. Bump when finished.

    Kodai Venator wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Ancient Huntsman Magic
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: A Requip branch. He can Requip tools and weapons that were used for hunting long ago, i.e. a bow, skinning knives, hunting knives, a spear, leather armor. There's also a summoning aspect, in which Kodai can summon hunting animals, such as dogs and hawks, but he hasn't figured it out yet.
    Strengths:

    • Requipping objects designed to kill
    • A combination of close-combat weapons and long-ranged weapons
    • Allows for quick, silent kills
    • Summoning animals that kill

    Weaknesses:

    • Can't summon yet
    • Can only requip four times in as many posts
    • Requires a four-post cool-down
    • Can only requip four things
    • Can't requip magic objects (yet)

    Abilities/Powers:

    • Outside of combat, requipping clothes, usually made of fur or leather
    • Summoning (Will come later)


    For all of your spells I will need you to list the CD and durations in their own column just so its easier to find and read.

    spells:



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    Post by Aria Beleren 8th November 2014, 7:42 pm

    Kodai Venator wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Ancient Huntsman Magic
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: A Requip branch. He can Requip tools and weapons that were used for hunting long ago, i.e. a bow, skinning knives, hunting knives, a spear, leather armor. There's also a summoning aspect, in which Kodai can summon hunting animals, such as dogs and hawks, but he hasn't figured it out yet. Remember that when you use summoning magic that you will need to include the costs for the summons.
    Strengths:

    • Requipping objects designed to kill
    • A combination of close-combat weapons and long-ranged weapons
    • Allows for quick, silent kills Not all attacks are going to be quick and silent. Give me another strength.
    • Summoning animals that kill

    Weaknesses:

    • Can't summon yet Please express the rank you will need to be at to summon and we will go from here.
    • Can only requip four times in as many posts Too general you need to tell me how many posts you can requip.
    • Requires a four-post cool-down "What" requires this cool down?
    • Can only requip four thingsYou've stated this before this does not count as a weakness.
    • Can't requip magic objects (yet)This is not a weakness either.

    Abilities/Powers:

    • Outside of combat, requipping clothes, usually made of fur or leather
    • Summoning (Will come later)
      As this is a "requip branch" you will be using one of your abilities to be able to open pocket dimensions to switch your armor and weapons. Along with that you will need to state that you cannot "enter" the pocket dimensions.



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    Please make these edits. Thank you.


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    Post by Kodai Venator 8th November 2014, 7:55 pm

    Kyll, you reviewed the unedited version of my app. I fixed most of these things already. Also, with the weaknesses, I realized after I posted the most recent edit that they were all wrong, and now I can't figure out what to do with them.


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    Post by Aria Beleren 9th November 2014, 12:53 pm

    If you look at the unedited version I gave you all the edits you need to add in. Let's go over your sumons. They will take two of their rank to kill off. I would recommend telepathy around B rank. When you upgrade your hawk to A rank you can work on doing vision.

    As far as your weapons go. The 1-2 ratio of strengths to weaknesses is fine. However, I gave you a range for your bow. 30 meters the spell will be in effect, if the targets are outside of that range, then you have just a regular arrow. It's a great strength, because you can use arrows with out magic if your target is out of the range of the spell to cause piercing damage, but you can't use any magical capabilities of the weapon when it's outside of the range.


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    Post by Kodai Venator 18th November 2014, 9:27 am

    Bump


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    Post by Aria Beleren 18th November 2014, 10:59 pm

    alrighty. Approved


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