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    Zara's Magic

    DragonIce
    DragonIce

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    Position : None
    Posts : 2
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Zara's Magic Empty Zara's Magic

    Post by DragonIce 4th November 2014, 11:07 pm


    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: She is a celestial wizard. Well, everyone knows what a Celestial wizard is...so..she uses keys to summon different spirits from other worlds.
    Strengths:
    . Summoning creatures from other worlds.
    .more magic energy than normal celestial wizards

    Weaknesses: [u]
    .When the celestial spirit's time are up

    Abilities/Powers: Also has Aera magic, meaning she can grow big wings for a limited amount of time.

    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

    Name: Summoning spell and Aera
    Rank: I don't really know...She's not that weak sooooo...
    Type: Summoning and Flying for a limited time.
    Description: Zara casts the spell by pulling out a key and saying "Open, Gate of the ____!" For aera, she justs lets it happen. She relaxes and thinks of wings.
    Strengths:
    .Aera allows her to fly
    .Can summon spirits
    Weaknesses:
    .when her spirits disapear
    .when her time is up for flying
    Cirven
    Cirven

    Devil's Advocate


    Devil's Advocate

    Moderator- VIP- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : The Devil Jester
    Position : None
    Posts : 2448
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 35
    Experience : 833,050

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Devil's Zeal
    Second Skill: Aphyon Jivven
    Third Skill: Vir'ednith

    Zara's Magic Empty Re: Zara's Magic

    Post by Cirven 5th November 2014, 6:31 pm

    Hey Drago, I will be reviewing your app here.

    First thing is you should have 3 strengths and 4 weaknesses for everything the requires them. You can get away with having less(your strengths will always have to be less than your weaknesses) with some things but not with magic.

    You get a number of spells per rank. You get 4 D-rank spells at D-rank to use so you can make more spells. It is up to you if you need them but is recommended you use them all, especially as a summoner mage.

    The rules for magic can be found here so that you can understand what I mean by number of spells you get per rank.

    Also try to add more of a description to your spells if you can. What does she do when she casts the spell? How does it look, etc.

    Last thing is as a summoner mage you should be summoning companions to fight with you somehow and each spell you make will be a different summon he can call with a different ability and passive.

    If you are confused by anything I said you can PM me and I can try to help you out more.


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