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    Kurayami, Tenno

    Kurayami
    Kurayami

    Player 
    Lineage : Strength Of Hercules
    Position : None
    Posts : 52
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Dark Ecriture
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    Kurayami, Tenno Empty Kurayami, Tenno

    Post by Kurayami 29th October 2014, 4:36 am

    Name: Kurayami, Tenno
    Gender: Male
    Age: 20
    Birthday: November, 24
    Sexuality: Straight
    Special Characteristics:Nothing as of yet

    Personality: Tenno is  for lack of a better word, popular- setting the tone, taking the spotlight and leading his teams forward to victory and fame. Later in life, Tenno continues to enjoy supporting His friends and loved ones, organizing social gatherings and doing His best to make sure everyone is happy.He is concerned with fashion and his appearance, his social status and the standings of other people. Practical matters and gossip are his bread and butter,he does his best to use his powers for good.(Remember Good is a matter of prospective)Tenno is a altruist, and he takes seriously his responsibility to help and to do the right thing. Tenno will base his moral compass on established traditions and laws, upholding authority and rules, rather than drawing their morality from philosophy or mysticism.Tenno loves to be of service, enjoying any role that allows him to participate in a meaningful way, so long as he knows that he is valued and appreciated. This is especially apparent at home, and Tenno makes loyalty and devotion high on is list, both in himself and in partners and parents. Tenno respects hierarchy, and do his best to position Himself with some authority, at home and at work, which allows him to keep things clear, stable and organized for everyone.Supportive and outgoing, Tenno can always be spotted at a party - He is the one finding time to chat and laugh with everyone! But His devotion goes further than just breezing through because they have to. Tenno truly enjoys hearing about His friends' relationships and activities, remembering little details and always standing ready to talk things out with warmth and sensitivity. If things aren't going right, or there's tension in the room, Tenno picks up on it and will to try to restore harmony and stability to the group.Being pretty conflict-averse, Tenno spends a lot of his energy establishing social order, and prefer plans and organized events to open-ended activities or spontaneous get-togethers. Tenno puts a lot of effort into the activities He has arranged, and it's easy for Tenno's feelings to be hurt if his ideas are rejected, or if people just aren't interested.The best thing for Tenno to do is to do what he does best: be a role model, take care of what he has the power to take care of, and enjoy that so many people do appreciate the efforts they make.At his heart, Tenno is a social creature, and thrives on staying up to date with what his friends are doing.The Thing that sets Tenno off from most People is that he is is a bit of a recluse, he keeps to himself, till he makes friends, then he is open only with his friends.

    In Combat like Situations, Tenno would do anything that he felt was right, what he thought was justice would be done, and he would always try to take lead, he would make sure if anyone around him would get hurt other then who he is fighting against, he would be the first one hurt, maybe being a little reckless in fights, but he is tenacious and wont give up till he is killed, As for listening to orders, he may not respeond when given orders, but he will follow them, usualy a little more to his liking then the one giving the orders, and when he is the one in charge, he meticulously plans everything he possibly can, and makes sure everyone plays their roles he assigns them
    Likes:-People with Strong Practical Skills - Tenno is an excellent manager of day-to-day tasks and routine maintenance, enjoying making sure that those who are close to him are well cared for
    -People with a Strong Sense of Duty - Tenno Has a strong sense of responsibility and strives to meet his obligations, though this may sometimes be more from a sense of social expectations than intrinsic drive.
    -Loyalty - Valuing stability and security very highly, Tenno is eager to preserve the status quo, which makes them extremely loyal and trustworthy partners and employees. Tenno is a true pillar of any group He belongs to - whether it is his family or a community club, Tenno can always be relied upon.
    -Being Sensitive and Warm - Helping to ensure that stability, Tenno seeks harmony and cares deeply about other people's feelings, being careful not to offend or hurt anybody. Tenno is a strong team player, and win-win situations are the stuff smiles are made of.
    -Connecting with Others - These qualities come together to make Tenno social, comfortable and well-liked. Tenno Has a strong need to "belong", and has no problem with small talk or following social cues in order to help them take an active role in their communities.
    Dislikes:-Negetive Social Status - These Likes are related to a chief Weakness: Tennos' preoccupation with social status and influence, which affects many decisions He makes, potentially limiting their creativity and open-mindedness.
    -Making a Choice -Tenno places a lot of importance on what is socially acceptable, and can be very cautious, even critical of anything unconventional or outside the mainstream. People with this personality type may also sometimes push his own beliefs too hard in an effort to establish them as mainstream.
    -to Innovate or Improvise - Just as he can be critical of others' "unusual" behavior,Tenno may also be unwilling to step out of his own comfort zones, usually for fear of being (or just appearing) different.
    -Criticism - It can be especially challenging to change these tendencies because Tenno is so conflict-averse. Tenno can become very defensive and hurt if someone, especially a person close to him, criticizes his habits, beliefs or traditions.
    -Being Ignored - Tenno needs to hear and see a great deal of appreciation. If his efforts go unnoticed, Tenno may start fishing for compliments, in an attempt to get reassurance of how much they are valued.
    -Selfishness - The other side of this is thatTenno sometimes try to establish his value with doting attention, something that can quickly overwhelm those who don't need it, making it ultimately unwelcome. Furthermore, Tenno often neglects his own needs in the process.
    Motivations: -Friends- Because of the Tenno's want to be sociable, his Friends would be their biggest motivators to do much of anything
    -Plans-When Following a laid out plan Tenno is fully motivated to following them to the very Minute Detail, also Motivating him to reach the end of the plan that was formulated
    -Social Status- For tenno social status is the biggest thing about him, and so if something would be expected of him due to their social status, he would be Motivated to do the something he would be expected to do, as to keep his social status if not grow more of one
    Fears:-Lonliness- Tenno does not like to be alone, he is a social butterfly, so he Fears this probobly the most out of anything else
    -Social Status Lost- As he likes to be the one in the spotlight Tenno fears to lose any social status he has gained, so he would try his hardest to prevent this from happening
    -Loss Of Friends- Tennos second biggest fear is losing the friends he has already made, as he knows he will never be alone with these friends, but loss in anyway would scare Tenno to tears most likely

    General Appearance


    Height: Six Foot two inches
    Weight: one hundred and fifty four pounds
    Hair: Black Hair, in a pattern all his own, his bangs six inches away from his forhead and it would be Neck length and reached for his shoulders all over the rest of his head
    Eyes: Sapphire Blue with black specks in it
    Skin Tone: Light skin tone, which seems to be enchanced by all the dark he likes to wear
    Appearance: His build of his muscles was defined, as if he did do some working out, but not to the point he was buff, he was more built for speed, he liked to wear a dark blue tee shirt with a black coat that was long sleeved, but only covered the top half of his chest, and then a over coat that buckled around his neck and ran all the way to the floor in length, it was short sleeved, with Sapphire blue fire on the bottom of the short sleeves, black belts went across his stomach section,black pants on this legs with sapphire blue flames running up to the knees, and a pair of black shoes with blue lacers in them

    Guild/Council

    Guild: Savage Skull
    Tattoo: The Black Skull would be Tattooed across his neck on the right side, skull faceing forward
    Rank: D


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    Post by Guest 29th October 2014, 11:10 am

    Hey there, I'm Legacy and I'll be reviewing your application for you =]

    For your personality, you've pretty much just stated a personality type rather than talking about Tenno's actual personality. While anime characters have a general personality, there is always something that makes them a bit different. You need to do the same here, as you've just stated he's the same as every other ESFJ character (whatever that means).

    Furthermore, your personality is 78 words short at the moment, so you will need to work on that a bit to bulk it up. Use your Likes, dislikes, fears and motivations to fluff it up where necessary. Also, you need to state what your character behaves like in combat and how they act should they be in a leadership role.
    Kurayami
    Kurayami

    Player 
    Lineage : Strength Of Hercules
    Position : None
    Posts : 52
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Dark Ecriture
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kurayami 29th October 2014, 11:26 am

    Well nice to Meet you Legecy and thank you for taking your time to review my application and Mod it today, I have edited and hope this makes things a little better


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    Post by Guest 29th October 2014, 11:40 am

    Thanks for that addition, but the majority of the personality is still written as a personality type, rather than Tenno's actual personality. As I said before, even characters who share a personality type have unique traits within that. Furthermore, as it's written now (and I honestly don't mean to offend you by saying this), it looks almost like you've copied and pasted a personality type rather than writing it based purely on your own character.

    If you could just rephrase the personality so that it is about Tenno, rather than a generalisation of a personality type then I would be happy to approve the application for you =]
    Kurayami
    Kurayami

    Player 
    Lineage : Strength Of Hercules
    Position : None
    Posts : 52
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Dark Ecriture
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kurayami 29th October 2014, 11:57 am

    Thank you once more for your time and Patience, I believe everything is in order to your liking now


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    Post by Guest 29th October 2014, 12:53 pm

    Thank you for the edits and good work getting them done so fast XD

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