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    Joshua Chapmans Prismatic Blaze

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    Post by Immurtle 12th October 2014, 7:32 am

    Primary Magic: Prismatic Blaze
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: This caster magic is a type of Fire Magic that creates different colored flames with different attributes.
    Attributes of the colors
    Blue: A flame that has an extremely low temperature
    Yellow: A flame with a horrible stench
    Purple: Flames that can be used as a solid attack
    Red: Flames of intense heat
    Black: Flames that explode upon impact

    Strengths:
    -Different attributes such as a cold flame.
    -Can be used in a variety of ways and has different uses
    -Able to control any fire, only able to control fire equal to or less than his rank
    Weaknesses:
    -Cannot control the fire of wizards who have mastery over their flames
    -If fighting against a Fire Slayer the fire slayer can still eat your flames giving them power.
    -Some of the effects of a certain flame affect the caster e.g The user is affected by horrible smell of the stench flame
    -Costs 5% more extra magic power for each extra flame after the first
    Abilities/Powers: Josh can also change the colours of his flames at will, but this costs 5% more magic



    Spells

    Name: Fireball
    Rank: D
    Type: Fire, offensive
    Description:  The caster summons a ball of one of the colors in their hand or hands and throws fire balls towards their opponent. It travels at around 35 km/h and will die out after it travels 10m or hits an object or person. Deals 1 D rank damage per fireball.


    Strengths:
    -If it hits the target it will knock the target back or if it hits an object such as a barrier or wall it will leave a crater.
    -Will damage the target through burns
    -Can make the fireball move in a specific direction

    Weaknesses:
    -When hit by water it turns to steam
    -Can be extinguished by fire of a higher rank
    -Wind of equal rank can put it aside
    -To cast bigger fireballs costs more magic, costs 5% more to make the fireball twice the size of a regular fireball.

    Duration: 1 post

    Cooldown: 2 posts

    Name: Fire Beam
    Rank: D
    Type: Fire, offensive
    Description: The caster brings their hands back and creates a small ball of flame generating the magic power, when fully charged the caster thrusts their hands forward creating a small beam of fire that flies towards the opponent at 45km/h and disperses after 20m and causes 2 D rank damage

    Strengths:
    -Has a longer range than fireball
    -Harder to dodge as it's faster than a fireball
    -Leaves a big burn on the targeted area

    Weaknesses:
    -Easily dispelled by water magic
    -Has no effect on high rank fire magic
    -Can be put out if countered with a high level Ice magic spell
    -Metals such as iron can redirect the fire

    Duration: 2 posts, (Takes 1 post to generate the flame and magic energy for the beam and 1 post
    to unleash the attack)
    Cooldown: 4 posts

    Name: Flame Barrier
    Rank: D
    Type: Fire, Defensive
    Description:  The caster puts his arms out in front of him and activates the spell by calling or shouting it's name then slams their hands on the ground creating a barrier of Flames and blocking incoming attacks, can block up to 4 D rank damage

    Strengths:
    -Blocks incoming attacks and turns them to ashes
    -Able to create multiple barriers at the cost of more magic power, costs 3% more power magic power to cast another barrier, Limit to the amount of barriers he can create at D rank is 2, can create more at higher ranks.
    -Can be moved if needed, can be moved 5 meters.

    Duration: 2

    Cooldown: 4

    Weakness:
    -Water attacks will extinguish the barrier
    -Wind attacks separate the barrier allowing the wind attack to go through
    -If casted too close to the user it will inflict burns upon the user.
    -The barrier will eventually burn out

    Name: Fire Fists
    Rank: D
    Type: Fire, Supportive

    Description: The caster brings their hands in front of their chest and generates a fireball in their hand and separates the fireball into 2 fireballs in each hand, the user then activates the spell by crushing the fireballs and calling the spell name, setting his allies fists on fire, adds 1 D rank damage to his allies attacks

    Strengths:
    -Gives allies increased attack power
    -Allies can use the fire fists in conjunction with their own magic increasing their magic power
    -Gives the casters team an advantage against certain magic types such as any weak metals and wind spells that are equal to or less than his rank

    Weakness:
    -After a while the flames start to burn the hands of the people the caster used the spell on, they take 1 D rank damage and the burn kicks in at the 3rd post
    -The fire can be extinguished if a water spell is used
    -The user cannot use other spells while casting this
    -The spell leaves the caster fatigued

    Duration: 4 posts

    Cooldown: 6 posts


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    Post by Cirven 12th October 2014, 11:39 am

    Edits are it This color. After you are done bump this thread and I'll look it over again.

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    Post by Immurtle 12th October 2014, 9:54 pm

    Bump
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    Post by Cirven 13th October 2014, 4:29 am

    Edits in This color. Bump after you are done.

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    Post by Immurtle 14th October 2014, 3:03 am

    bump
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    Post by Cirven 14th October 2014, 4:50 am

    With the flame types I was meaning the flame colors you will be using. It's considered an ability to be able to use different colored/types of flames. I wanted you to add it as an ability for you and possibly explain them more with their possible advantages after adding them there if you could. I can help with ideas if you need it.


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    Post by Immurtle 14th October 2014, 5:06 am

    I listed the flames colors i'll be using and what they do in the description of it
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    Post by Cirven 14th October 2014, 9:46 am

    Yes but the flames being able to change types is a ability for you that you need to list as such. We have a set number of abilities each member can have depending on rank. I was asking you to have the flame changing types in your abilities and have you list what each flame may do or have for advantages.

    Basically all flames can explode so what makes the black flame you have different? Is there damage caused to the people who are near the explosion? Stuff like that is what I wanted to see. If you are still confused I can list what exactly I want to know about each type before approving this. I'm just at work right now so it's kind of hard to post lol


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    Post by Immurtle 19th October 2014, 5:13 pm

    Yeah, that would be nice if you could give me a list of what you were expecting with the application
    Thanks
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    Post by Cirven 19th October 2014, 5:43 pm

    Basically in the in the rules we can only have set number of abilities in our magic based on rank. Thats why I'm saying to add the different flames you can use as one ability to your abilities list.

    The rule I'm talking about:

    Now I wanted a more thorough explanation on the flames because I feel that each different flame would make each spell you use completely different. Like your black flames cause the flames to explode but does this cause more damage from the explosion? Does it cause people around the explosion to take extra damage? Basically stuff like that if you want to add anything.

    If you don't want to add anything else to the descriptions besides what you already have then the flames will just do those things and not caused anything extra to happen besides what you said already. At that point all I would need for you to do is add that you can change the type of flames to your abilities because that is a passive ability unless you change your spells into being different types of flame spell themselves.



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    Post by Immurtle 21st October 2014, 1:14 am

    Bump
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    Post by Cirven 21st October 2014, 4:27 am

    I wanted the flame types as a separate ability together, not part of your other one. Also I wanted to go over each flame that you explained below.


    Blue Flame: How much more damage do they take from the blue flame and how are they being exposed to it after they are hit? Do you mean if they are hit by it again they take more damage?

    Yellow Flame: I don't see this really stunning anyone. Maybe disorienting them though. Also how long would this last post wise?

    Purple Flames: How much more range does this give?

    Red Flames: What does these flames do when by burning hotter? Do they do more damage, have a easier time with dealing with other spells, etc?

    Black Flames: Instead of this flame doing more damage to the people it hits you should have it do damage to the people around who it hits. Could say everyone within a 5 meter radius takes damage equal to one less rank of the fire spell that was used. (lowest being D-rank)

    Also depending on how good these flame types are I might have to say you can only use one at a time and will have to pay the extra 5% MP to change your flame to that type. You should also revise the damage of your abilities to be of rank because otherwise they will be pretty bad later on.


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    Post by Immurtle 21st October 2014, 4:31 am

    Hmmm, i might just leave it without special benefits, because i can't figure out how to do it
    Is that ok?
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    Post by Cirven 21st October 2014, 4:49 am

    That will work for now but you should try and add it at next rank. Bump after you edit.


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    Post by Immurtle 21st October 2014, 4:51 am

    Bump
    And yeah, i will add some more next rank
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    Post by Cirven 21st October 2014, 4:27 pm

    Ok so last thing, your ability you have is more like a spell and not really an ability at all. Abilities are usually passives and never have to be activated. What you have there is the opposite. Also you get 3 abilities at D-rank if you want to make them now. I suggest you do so you have more to your overall magic.


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    Post by Immurtle 21st October 2014, 4:32 pm

    It says abilities or hidden power, it's a hidden power
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    Post by Cirven 21st October 2014, 7:04 pm

    Yes but ability/powers are not like spells. They are passives not actives. What you have there is an active.

    Basically anything like "Can change the type of flame he uses for different effects(explain those flames here)" is a passive and something your magic can do.

    But one like "Shoots a huge mass of fire at an enemy to cause 3 D-ranks of damage" is a active.

    What I'm asking you to do is come up with a passive or up to 3 of them for your abilities. Save what you have there for a spell later when you are higher rank.


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    Post by Immurtle 21st October 2014, 8:19 pm

    alright, i'll remove that now
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    Post by Cirven 21st October 2014, 8:53 pm

    Are you sure you want your magic this way? You will be pretty under powered like this and there are still things you can add to your abilities to change that.


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    Post by Immurtle 22nd October 2014, 4:28 pm

    Yes i'm sure
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    Post by Cirven 22nd October 2014, 6:18 pm

    Ok. If you need help with things just ask. Approved.


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