Joshua Chapmans Prismatic Blaze

Immurtle wrote:Primary Magic: Prismatic Blaze
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: This caster magic is a type of Fire Magic that creates different colored flames with different attributes.
Attributes of the colors
Blue: A flame that has an extremely low temperature
Yellow: A flame with a horrible stench
Purple: Flames that can be used as a solid attack
Red: Flames of intense heat
Black: Flames that explode upon impact
You should add this to the list of abilities of flames themselves. So if you want you can make the description longer somehow.

Strengths:
-Different attributes such as a cold flame.
-Can be used in a variety of ways and has different uses
-Able to control any fire You should add to this "Can only control fire spells equal to his rank or less".
Weaknesses:
-Cannot control the fire of wizards who have mastery over their flames
-If fighting against a Fire Slayer the fire slayer can still eat your flames giving them power.
-Some of the effects of a certain flame affect the caster e.g The user is affected by horrible smell of the stench flame
-Using multiple flames costs more magic power How much more magic power?
Abilities/Powers:
Hidden Power: Spectral Blaze, Summons a spinning circle of all the flames and fires a massive blast from all the flames towards the opponent, can only be used when Josh awakens his 2nd personality and can only be used once per job also leaves him exhausted.
I need you to explain how he brings out this second personality and how much damage does this attack do? Also like I said above you should add each flame type here. Also explain what each type does. Basically speaking do the flames cause more damage, make the flame attack move differently or does it freeze instead of burning, etc. Also do these different flames have advantages over anything that the fire usually would not?



Spells

Name: Fireball
Rank: D
Type: Fire, offensive
Description:  The caster summons a ball of one of the colors in their hand or hands and throws fire balls towards their opponent. It travels at around 35 km/h and will die out after it travels 10m or hits an object or person. Deals 4 D rank damage per fireball.
So 4 D rank damage is too much for this spell. At most this spell should do a D rank of damage.


Strengths:
-If it hits the target it will knock the target back or if it hits an object such as a barrier or wall it will leave a crater.
-Will damage the target through burns
-Can make the fireball jump in a specific direction. Do you mean you can move the fireball's direction? I keep imagining it jumping off of something. If so can you be more specific on this. Don't want people to get confused.


Weaknesses:
-When hit by water it turns to steam
-Can be extinguished by fire of a higher rank
-Wind of equal rank can put it aside
-To cast bigger fireballs costs more magic
How much extra magic would it cost to make the fireball larger and how big would it get after?

Duration: 1 post

Cooldown: 2 posts

Name: Fire Beam
Rank: D
Type: Fire, offensive
Description: The caster brings their hands back and creates a small ball of flame generating the magic power, when fully charged the caster thrusts their hands forward creating a small beam of fire that flies towards the opponent at 45km/h and disperses after 20m and causes 7 D rank damage
Way too much damage for a D rank spell. At the highest you can have this be 2 D ranks of damage.

Strengths:
-Has a longer range than fireball
-Harder to dodge as it's faster than a fireball
-Leaves a big burn on the targeted area

Weaknesses:
-Easily dispelled by water magic
-Has no effect on high rank fire magic
-Can be put out if countered with a high level Ice magic spell
-Metals such as iron can redirect the fire

Duration: 2 posts

Cooldown: 4 posts
This sounds more like a spell where he just shoots off the beam so I don't think it would last 2 posts unless you explained that he could hold the beam for an extra post.OR do you mean that it takes him 2 posts to build up the flames?

Name: Flame Barrier
Rank: D
Type: Fire, Defensive
Description:  The caster puts his arms out in front of him and activates the spell by calling or shouting it's name then slams their hands on the ground creating a barrier of Flames and blocking incoming attacks How much damage can the barrier(s) take before they are dispelled?

Strengths:
-Blocks incoming attacks and turns them to ashes Should add "any attacks equal to D rank"
-Able to create multiple barriers at the cost of more magic power At the cost of how much more magic? And I think there should be a limit on how many he can make at D rank. I'm thinking 2.
-Can be moved if needed How far can it be moved?

Weakness:
-Water attacks will extinguish the barrier
-Wind attacks separate the barrier allowing the wind attack to go through
-If casted too close to the user it will inflict burns upon the user.
-The barrier will eventually burn out

This spell needs a cooldown and duration.

Name: Fire Fists
Rank: D
Type: Fire, Supportive

Description: The caster brings their hands in front of their chest and generates a fireball in their hand and separates the fireball into 2 fireballs in each hand, the user then activates the spell by crushing the fireballs and calling the spell name, setting his allies fists on fire
Does this spell add damage to their attacks? If so, how much?

Strengths:
-Gives allies increased attack power
-Allies can use the fire fists in conjunction with their own magic increasing their magic power
-Gives the casters team an advantage against certain magic types What magic types? I'm thinking any weak metal or D rank wind spells.

Weakness:
-After a while the flames start to burn the hands of the people the caster used the spell on Do they take damage from this burn and how long does it take for the burn to kick in?
-The fire can be extinguished if a water spell is used
-The user cannot use other spells while casting this
-The spell leaves the caster fatigued

Duration: 3-4 posts I need you to choose either 3 or 4 for the spell duration.

Cooldown: 6 posts

Immurtle wrote:Primary Magic: Prismatic Blaze
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: This caster magic is a type of Fire Magic that creates different colored flames with different attributes.
Attributes of the colors
Blue: A flame that has an extremely low temperature
Yellow: A flame with a horrible stench
Purple: Flames that can be used as a solid attack
Red: Flames of intense heat
Black: Flames that explode upon impact

Strengths:
-Different attributes such as a cold flame.
-Can be used in a variety of ways and has different uses
-Able to control any fire, only able to control fire equal to or less than his rank
Weaknesses:
-Cannot control the fire of wizards who have mastery over their flames
-If fighting against a Fire Slayer the fire slayer can still eat your flames giving them power.
-Some of the effects of a certain flame affect the caster e.g The user is affected by horrible smell of the stench flame
-Using multiple flames costs twice the amount of magic power. Twice the Mp will really drain you. Lets just say that you have to pay 5% extra Mp for each extra flame used after the first.
Abilities/Powers:
Hidden Power: Spectral Blaze, Summons a spinning circle of all the flames (Blue: Cold flame, Yellow: Stench Flame, Purple: Solid Flame, Red: Flame of intense heat and Black: Bomb Flames) and fires a massive blast from all the flames towards the opponent, can only be used when Josh awakens his 2nd personality and can only be used once per job also leaves him exhausted, causes 3 D rank damage.
Josh awakens his second personality when he takes a lot of damage or whenever he sees his friends in life threatening danger.
I was wanting you to add the different flame types you could use down here seeing as that its more of an ability. I also was wanting to see them explained more if you could with advantages the different flames have over different things that regular flames wouldn't. Also if the different flames are able to do anything different than regular flames I'd like you to explain it here for each one.



Spells

Name: Fireball
Rank: D
Type: Fire, offensive
Description:  The caster summons a ball of one of the colors in their hand or hands and throws fire balls towards their opponent. It travels at around 35 km/h and will die out after it travels 10m or hits an object or person. Deals 1 D rank damage per fireball.


Strengths:
-If it hits the target it will knock the target back or if it hits an object such as a barrier or wall it will leave a crater.
-Will damage the target through burns
-Can make the fireball move in a specific direction

Weaknesses:
-When hit by water it turns to steam
-Can be extinguished by fire of a higher rank
-Wind of equal rank can put it aside
-To cast bigger fireballs costs more magic, costs 3x more to make the fireball twice the size of a regular fireball. How about we have it that you pay and extra 5% Mp to double the size? 3x is way too much and can really suck you dry too quickly.

Duration: 1 post

Cooldown: 2 posts

Name: Fire Beam
Rank: D
Type: Fire, offensive
Description: The caster brings their hands back and creates a small ball of flame generating the magic power, when fully charged the caster thrusts their hands forward creating a small beam of fire that flies towards the opponent at 45km/h and disperses after 20m and causes 2 D rank damage

Strengths:
-Has a longer range than fireball
-Harder to dodge as it's faster than a fireball
-Leaves a big burn on the targeted area

Weaknesses:
-Easily dispelled by water magic
-Has no effect on high rank fire magic
-Can be put out if countered with a high level Ice magic spell
-Metals such as iron can redirect the fire

Duration: 2 posts, (Takes 1 post to generate the flame and magic energy for the beam and 1 post
to unleash the attack)
Cooldown: 4 posts

Name: Flame Barrier
Rank: D
Type: Fire, Defensive
Description:  The caster puts his arms out in front of him and activates the spell by calling or shouting it's name then slams their hands on the ground creating a barrier of Flames and blocking incoming attacks, can block up to 4 D rank damage

Strengths:
-Blocks incoming attacks and turns them to ashes
-Able to create multiple barriers at the cost of more magic power, costs 3 power magic power to cast another barrier, Limit to the amount of barriers he can create at D rank is 2, can create more at higher ranks. So it costs 3% more Mp to make another barrier right? If so can you make it clearer saying that.
-Can be moved if needed, can be moved 5 meters.

Duration: 2

Cooldown: 4

Weakness:
-Water attacks will extinguish the barrier
-Wind attacks separate the barrier allowing the wind attack to go through
-If casted too close to the user it will inflict burns upon the user.
-The barrier will eventually burn out

Name: Fire Fists
Rank: D
Type: Fire, Supportive

Description: The caster brings their hands in front of their chest and generates a fireball in their hand and separates the fireball into 2 fireballs in each hand, the user then activates the spell by crushing the fireballs and calling the spell name, setting his allies fists on fire, adds 2 D rank damage to his allies attacks Lower the damage added to 1 D rank. 2 D rank is kind of high.

Strengths:
-Gives allies increased attack power
-Allies can use the fire fists in conjunction with their own magic increasing their magic power
-Gives the casters team an advantage against certain magic types such as any weak metals and wind spells that are equal to or less than his rank

Weakness:
-After a while the flames start to burn the hands of the people the caster used the spell on, they take 2 D rank damage and the burn kicks in at the 3rd post You can lower this damage to 1 D rank.
-The fire can be extinguished if a water spell is used
-The user cannot use other spells while casting this
-The spell leaves the caster fatigued

Duration: 4 posts

Cooldown: 6 posts