Lilin the Succubus

Name:Lilin
Rank: Weak
Species: Succubus
Type:Exceed
Description:

Spoiler:

She normally takes the form of a 15-16 year old girl. She has a lusty nature but never initiates anything, and is normally teasish. VERY obidient (as strange as that sounds) and basically obeys Lucifer's any and every command. Aside from her lusty nature she is very playful, and doesn't act what age she appears, she acts more like a 9 year old. She is childish, but clever as well. She can exploit other's feelings to her advantage which gets her out of trouble or other prediciments. As the previously stated "obedient" nature entails she is highly loyal to Lucifer like a dog is to its master, treating him like a father figure and doing whatever it takes for him to be proud of her. Lilin also takes high notice to her appearence, and is somewhat narcissistic. But instead of saying "I love myself and I wanna get married with a mirror" she takes it to a low level of noticing "how hot she is" or "how better she looks than the next person."
Abilities: Can speak english

Name: Charmkiss
Rank: D
Description:User kisses an opponent out if battle, nothing extra-terrestrial it's just a kiss. As she kisses opponent the spell takes effect, and passes a type of "neurotranssmision" through th opponents brain, putting him under an enslavement spell.
Strengths:Person that has the enchantment on them becomes an ally and will obey Lucifer for 2 turns (duration)
Strength 1- Opponent does whatever Lucifer says to do, regardless of how rediculous
Strength2- Opponent can fight for lucifer against oppinents, protecting him
Strength 3- Afterward, opponent loses all will to fight Lucifer (by this I mean he wont try to fight me unless I provoke him, otherwise "water under the bridge") (at thread at hand of course)
Weaknesses: Must be done before a battle starts
Can only be done on straight men or gay women
Can only be used on pets, NPCs or other people that aren't actual players
Must be in contact for ability to work so easily avoided by staying away from Lilin
Cannot be done in battle (although ability can extend into battle)
Cooldown of 5 posts

I have edited, although I gotta do the paragraph 2 morrow (phone about to die)
I'll bump afterward.

The edits have been made

I'm gonna take this over. But before that, please make sure your avatar doesn't exceed the 200 width x 300 height border that ensures avatars DON'T cut into forum text.

Stuff is happening XD

Your spell will only work on NPC's, pets or summons, not on PC's. That would be overpowered, you could kill a ton of characters, it incorporates godmodding and a lot of other stuff. So, add in that it only works against NPC's or change the spell.

*yawn* edits have been made

Just a little ps
1- You made the spell not fun anymore
2- I knew how OP it seemed when I first made it, in which case I wouldn't use it like that. Don't think I'm not smart, I can tell something that can't be use a certain way when I see it.

If you have a spell only to troll around in duels, then conclude yourself why that wouldn't get approved. Also, if you wouldn't have used it in that way, then why apply it that way in the first place?

Anywho, approved. Have fun.