Yami-Nox Aminus

Name: Yami
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Birthday: May 7
Sexuality: Straight
Special Characteristics: Has a double scar on his right eye
Personality: Yami is a young mage that enjoys andventure and the great unknown. As thus, he is extremely adventurous as he finds great joy in going on any kind of jobs and or missions. Perhaps due to his adventurous nature, Yami enjoys a good and fair fight. He finds great motivation in training hard to try to surpass stronger mages than he whether it being his friends or foes. Even so, regardless of that small fact, he is quite easy to get along with as he is friendly to those that deserve it. Yet despite his adventurous spirit and or even his love of a good fight combined, he can tend to be quite lazy at times. A reason behind it perhaps being that he can become easily tired for he runs out of energy quite fast. For this very reason, he dislikes noisy people and or any levels of noisiness in the room he is in and or around him when resting. His metabolism is also very rapid and so, in order to maintain high levels of energy, he loves to eat good food to raise his level of energy to keep his skills and abilities to the max. This also causes him to be hyper and active most of the time. Some of his fears would include spiders and the dark. No one, not even he, know why but perhaps it is just a natural fear. Yami is very gentlemanly, but can get very aggressive when things get tough, especially in battle. He works well under a leader as long as he or she, the leader, has gained his respect. As a leader, he would be a good choice yet whether or not he would accept the position would be a completely different matter. He believes greatly in the earning of respect and so he frowns on people who don't earn or who have it but don't even deserve it. Furthermore, when a person has gained Yami's respect and friendship, the person will find him to be a valuable asset. Yami is a mage that acts intelligently in battle. He is there for his teammates and has their backs as long as they have his back in return. He is a person with great combat skills thanks to his many hours training to perfect his skills, magic, and spells. He excels in close hand to hand combat therefore he doesn't really need his magic and spells because he can defend himself very well. Yami does not have any enemies nor does he want to have them. He just looks for action and to spar on friendly terms. In battle, he is extremely offensive and heads on. He doesn't run from battle but sees it as an opportunity to show off and expand on his skills. In battle, he mainly uses a gravity and or death magic, Yami's main offensive magic being gravity magic in which he uses it to enhance his closed combat techniques. During serious battles where important things are on the line, Yami uses his death magic, something he decided very rarely to use and only against his enemies.


Likes:
-to eat, who doesn't love to eat and try all kinds of foods and it taste great
-to sleep, loves to get plenty of rest and is somewhat the reason why he always yawns
-to fight, being a new mage he loves to get in tons of practices and go on missions

Dislikes:
-noisy people, being a guy who likes to sleep a lot he tends to hate extreme levels of noise
-those who don't know respect, as fellow mages its important to respect others and get along, especially fellow guild members
-hate braggers, are just people who like to talk but never back themselves in action

Motivations:
- anytime he sees someone stronger than him, encourages him to get stronger and surpass the individuals
-fellow guild members, being around them and having support from them lets him go a long way
-his foes, knowing that there will be many strong foes means that he must grow strong to protect his friends

Fears:
-heights, at times would feel he will just fall even on the most sturdiest of things
-spiders, they are just spiky looking and random creatures that pop out
-being alone in the dark, just creeps the hell out of him when alone in the dark and no presence of life around him

General Appearance
Height: 156cm
Weight: 180lbs
Hair: blonde colour, and is pointy or curved in a single area
Eyes: Brown
Skin Tone: dark light to tan colour
Appearance: An average height and weight male, has a double scar on his right eye, wears light armor all around his body except for his head, wears a small grey cape on his back

Guild/Council

Guild: Nox Aminus
Tattoo: Located on the left shoulder and is coloured red
Rank: D rank

Bump

Hey there Shirohige, sorry for how long this has taken to be reviewed.

There are a couple of things that need editing before this application can be approved I'm afraid.

First of all a lot of you BBCode tags are broken. Please fix these.

Secondly your personality is a little short at the moment. Here at FTRP we require a 500 word personality. At the moment you have just over 400 words. To fill it up you could mention how Yami acts when working under a leader and how good he is at being a leader in a combat environment.

What the heck are BBcode tags?

bump

Your coding is broken. Things like [b]. Fix that or if you don't understand what that is PM me and I will go over it with you

Name: Yami
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Birthday: May 7
Sexuality: Straight
Special Characteristics: Has a double scar on his right eye
rPersonality: Yami is a young mage that enjoys andventure and the great unknown. As thus, he is extremely adventurous as he finds great joy in going on any kind of jobs and or missions. Perhaps due to his adventurous nature, Yami enjoys a good and fair fight. He finds great motivation in training hard to try to surpass stronger mages than he whether it being his friends or foes. Even so, regardless of that small fact, he is quite easy to get along with as he is friendly to those that deserve it. Yet despite his adventurous spirit and or even his love of a good fight combined, he can tend to be quite lazy at times. A reason behind it perhaps being that he can become easily tired for he runs out of energy quite fast. For this very reason, he dislikes noisy people and or any levels of noisiness in the room he is in and or around him when resting. His metabolism is also very rapid and so, in order to maintain high levels of energy, he loves to eat good food to raise his level of energy to keep his skills and abilities to the max. This also causes him to be hyper and active most of the time. Some of his fears would include spiders and the dark. No one, not even he, know why but perhaps it is just a natural fear. Yami is very gentlemanly, but can get very aggressive when things get tough, especially in battle. He works well under a leader as long as he or she, the leader, has gained his respect. As a leader, he would be a good choice yet whether or not he would accept the position would be a completely different matter. He believes greatly in the earning of respect and so he frowns on people who don't earn or who have it but don't even deserve it. Furthermore, when a person has gained Yami's respect and friendship, the person will find him to be a valuable asset. Yami is a mage that acts intelligently in battle. He is there for his teammates and has their backs as long as they have his back in return. He is a person with great combat skills thanks to his many hours training to perfect his skills, magic, and spells. He excels in close hand to hand combat therefore he doesn't really need his magic and spells because he can defend himself very well. Yami does not have any enemies nor does he want to have them. He just looks for action and to spar on friendly terms. In battle, he is extremely offensive and heads on. He doesn't run from battle but sees it as an opportunity to show off and expand on his skills. In battle, he mainly uses a gravity and or death magic.


Likes:
-to eat, who doesn't love to eat and try all kinds of foods and it taste great
-to sleep, loves to get plenty of rest and is somewhat the reason why he always yawns
-to fight, being a new mage he loves to get in tons of practices and go on missions

Dislikes:
-noisy people, being a guy who likes to sleep a lot he tends to hate extreme levels of noise
-those who don't know respect, as fellow mages its important to respect others and get along, especially fellow guild members
-hate braggers, are just people who like to talk but never back themselves in action

Motivations:
- anytime he sees someone stronger than him, encourages him to get stronger and surpass the individuals
-fellow guild members, being around them and having support from them lets him go a long way
-his foes, knowing that there will be many strong foes means that he must grow strong to protect his friends

Fears:
-heights, at times would feel he will just fall even on the most sturdiest of things
-spiders, they are just spiky looking and random creatures that pop out
-being alone in the dark, just creeps the hell out of him when alone in the dark and no presence of life around him

General Appearance
Height: 156cm
Weight: 180lbs
Hair: blonde colour, and is pointy or curved in a single area
Eyes: Brown
Skin Tone: dark light to tan colour
Appearance: An average height and weight male, has a double scar on his right eye, wears light armor all around his body except for his head, wears a small grey cape on his back

Guild/Council

Guild: Nox Aminus
Tattoo: Located on the left shoulder and is coloured red
Rank: D rank

ok i need help, i put in the [b] but they disappeared for some reasons after submitting it...

They are meant to dissapear after posting. They modify the visual text to do things like bolding. In your original post some weren't closed properly and so text was bolded when it shouldn't be or we could see these 'code' tags.

Your second post seems to have fixed those issues so what i've done is copy that into the original post.

However, your personality is only 477 words and it needs to be 500. Annoying I know, but that's the rules

ah ok never knew that, anyhow i added abit to the personality, so anything else?

Nope should be fine. Approved. Go make your magic