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    Elemental Takeover Magic C-Rank (Ready for Approval)

    Kikuchiyo Mifune
    Kikuchiyo Mifune

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    Post by Kikuchiyo Mifune 5th July 2014, 4:58 am

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    Primary Magic: Elemental Soul Takeover
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description:
    - Kiku uses a form of takeover magic that is made possible through contracts she has made with elementals. More specific agreements made inside of a contract with a particular elemental means more powerful takeovers with that elemental. Once the contract is made, Kiku is able to transfer a portion of their magic into herself, transforming parts, or the entirety of her body into a mixture of the elemental's body, and her own. The takeover also transfers a bit of the elemental's personality into Kiku for the duration. To use a takeover, Kiku says the name of the Elemental, and focuses on the body part she wishes to transfer the Soul into. Her spells have a motion connected to them that allows Kiku to activate them, like stomping the ground, snapping her fingers, or making a fist.
    - There are two elementals that Kiku currently has a contract with. The first of which is Efreet, the Original Flame. Efreet is a fire elemental which focuses on lighting the environment on fire, and burning his enemies along with it. When in this form, Kiku will constantly spill fire from the body parts that are using the takeover. She can then manipulate the fire in different ways, making this takeover a primarily AOE style combat.
    - The second elemental which Kiku has a contract with is Astaroth, the Binding Darkness. Astaroth has no damage based spells or effects. Instead, he focuses on disabling enemies, instilling fear in their minds, and ridding them of their will to fight.

    Strengths:
    - Control: Kiku's magic focuses on terrain manipulation, and enemy control, enabling her to keep her enemies confused, immobilized, or otherwise unable to fight while she bides her time to find the right moment for her attack.
    - AOE: Kiku's first takeover, Efreet, focuses on mass attack, lighting the entire battlefield on fire.
    - Diversity: With multiple takeovers, Kiku has a wide variety of strategies that she can pool from, giving her versatility in combat.

    Weaknesses:
    - Destruction: Kiku's first takeover, Efreet, is extremely destructive. She does not have a lot of control over where her fire goes, or who/what it burns until it is set on the ground.
    - Elemental: Each element has an opposite, fire has water, shadows have light. If the sunlight is too powerful where Kiku is, she cannot use Astaroth without taking serious damage.
    - Direct attacks: Kiku's magic is focused on strategy, not directly attacking her opponent, making her less effective in a one on one fight.
    - Slayers: As all of Kiku's magic is based around the elements, there are slayers that can absorb her attacks, making her useless in a fight against slayers of her element.

    Abilities/Powers:
    Thermic Breath: Kiku, when outside of any takeover, can breathe a small amount of fire. This fire does no damage, rather it warms Kiku and her environment. Kiku's body becomes warm enough that she can slowly melt snow if she is walking on it. She can also heat a cup of water she's holding to the point of steaming. This ability cannot be used in combat.

    Takeover Class Advancement, and Statistics:

    Efreet, The Original Flame:

    Astaroth, the Binding Darkness:


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    Last edited by Kikuchiyo Mifune on 11th August 2014, 1:53 am; edited 2 times in total
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    Post by Guest 6th July 2014, 4:50 pm

    Hey Ushio Kiki, sorry for the delay in reviewing your magic =]

    Any requested edits will be written up in blue in the spoiler below.

    Please bump the thread as soon as the edits are made. If you wish to talk to me about any of the edits I've requested then please feel free to PM me and I'll happily talk to you about them =]

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    Kikuchiyo Mifune
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    Post by Kikuchiyo Mifune 7th July 2014, 5:48 am

    Bump, made changes to the specified areas. The Idea behind World in flames was more that it would spill out fire constantly while in takeover that would stay on the ground for three posts, but after thinking about it, that seems a bit OP at the moment, so I've changed it a bit. Hopefully it is to your liking. I think I made things a bit more clear now, as far as the fire goes.
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    Post by Guest 7th July 2014, 6:04 am

    Okay fair enough =] Well thanks for understand and good work on the edits.

    Also I wanted to say, nice magic. I like it =]

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    Post by Indiana Jones 11th August 2014, 12:36 am

    Unlocked for C-rank additions.


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    Post by Kikuchiyo Mifune 11th August 2014, 2:12 am

    Bump

    Here is a list of things that I've changed (in other words everything)
    - The general layout has been changed so that the spells for a given takeover are now within the spoiler of that takeover. The abilities of a given takeover have also been added to the spoiler of that takeover.
    - Nictophobia, though the spell rank and effects have not changed much, the description has been clarified so that it is more clear as to what exactly it does.
    - Each spell has now been connected to a body part, and given a gesture that activates the spell.
    - Flash Fire has been upgraded to C-Rank and has been made my signature spell. The effects have also been clarified and increased reasonably.
    - Shackling Shadows has been moved to C-Rank. The effects have been increased reasonably.
    - I have added five new spells, three to Efreet, and two to Astaroth, and I got rid of Magnesium Starburst.
    - I added the non-combat ability called Thermic Breath.
    - I added an ability to Efreet called Flames of a Kin.
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    Post by Indiana Jones 12th August 2014, 2:14 pm

    I honestly see no problems with any of your new stuff. So yeah...

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