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    Seikairyuu's Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic(Waiting for Approval)

    Tajima [Banned]
    Tajima [Banned]

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    Guild : Lamia Scale
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    Age : 27
    Mentor : Skiadrum The Shadow Dragon
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Shadow Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill: -
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    Post by Tajima [Banned] 28th August 2012, 8:59 am

    Primary Magic: Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    A Magic which allows Seikairyuu to transform the physiology of his body into that of the Shadow Dragon, making his body into a shadow that cannot be touched by normal means. Actually shadows are the effect of light hitting you so you are technically touching shadows. With this Magic, Seikairyuu is also able to fade himself into shadows to move swiftly, dodging efficiently and making surprise attacks. However, if the user is caught while in a tangible form, they are then vulnerable to attacks. Seikairyuu learnt this form of Magic through two means, by both receiving the teachings of a Dragon and having Dragon Lacrima implanted into his body. Seikairyuu can use this Magic to bend his own shadow for various purposes like battle purposes or defense, giving Shadow Magic a great deal of flexibility. A skilled user can also merge with his shadow and the shadow of others, which provides a stealthy method of transportation.
    Strengths:
    Shadow Dragon Slayer magic is essentially land and light and come together to produces Shadow on the ground, this allows Seikairyuu to eat both types of magic to restore his magic power. It will be stronger on the shadow itself. Shadow Dragon Slayer can not be touched in the normal way because it is not an object that can be touched. The greatest advantage this magic offers Seikairyuu is no blind spots. With the shadow being everywhere, he is able to attack from any angle, in any position, at any time. He can feel when an opponent is coming towards his by moving his magic energy throughout the shadow, meaning the shadow on a person(once it is running) can also reveal which direction they are coming from.
    Weaknesses:
    This magic depends to Seikairyuu thinking because his mind is not fast enough to compete with the very fast movement. Before using Shadow Dragon Slayer, Seikairyuu must think the appropriate direction to coincide with the movement. Even though Seikairyuu is able to sense an opponent from any direction , it is extremely difficult for him to focus on more than one opponent at a given time. This makes it hard for Seikairyuu to deal with opponents who can create mirror images of themselves or replicas. Seikairyuu's Magic is extremely weak against fire and light based magic because both these magic reduce shadows. This magic should use at night or dark place. A great disadvantage to Shadow Dragon Slayer magic is that if the user is fighting in water they will not be able to replenish their strength as shadows aren't cast on water.

    Abilities/Powers:
    Ability to devour shadows/darkness.
    Enhanced senses
    Enhanced strength
    Flight during the night
    Enhanced endurance
    Keener senses than that of normal humans such as in smell, sight and hearing

    SPELL TEMPLATE

    D-Rank:

    C-Rank:


    Last edited by Seikairyuu on 1st September 2012, 2:24 am; edited 7 times in total


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    Tajima Yuchiro | Shadow Dragon Slayer

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    Emilia Hawke
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    Post by Emilia Hawke 29th August 2012, 6:21 pm

    OK. Shadow Dragon's Drive if I understand correctly is a third gen only ability seeing as Natsu, Gajeel, and Wendy haven't displayed such an ability. So since your a first gen like everyone else who has applied to be a Dragon Slayer, you can't have it until they do. Also Holy Shadow Dragon's Flash Fang... yeah NO. That's a Unison Raid of the Light and Shadow Dragon slayers. You can't just have it on your own. And... you DO know you can have more spells right? Just saying. 3 C and 5 D. If you want. Just saying. Bump when edited.


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    Tajima [Banned]
    Tajima [Banned]

    Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Power of Apocalypse
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    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Age : 27
    Mentor : Skiadrum The Shadow Dragon
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Shadow Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill: -
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Tajima [Banned] 30th August 2012, 3:02 am

    Ooh..i dont know about spells,sorry.
    Bump


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    Tajima Yuchiro | Shadow Dragon Slayer

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    NightDrivenEn7
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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 31st August 2012, 8:56 am

    Agreeing with Eclipse, Shadow Dragon Force is third gen, of which we do not have yet. SO you will have to wait until mostlikely S rank to be able to use it frequently, or unless (like Natsu twice) Have devoured a very particular source of your devourable magic, that gives it even further power than a normal variation; thus making you able to temporarily enter Dragon Force for which I think can be 3 posts but that is debateable and needs to be discussed first. So really your only given is most likely when you reach S rank.

    Shadow dragon slayer slash-if it is a slash, why are the shadows punching? That makes NO SENSE! Give more of a description of that spell, one that fits the name.

    Shadow ...whatever Knuckle, again the name doesn't fit, and wtf is with your description? Your character is kicking, what the hell do the shadows do? It is making no sense, either get rid of it, or really revamp the entire spell.

    Your guard is a bit too strong, a frontal guard is more suited for a D rank, you have in mind a B or C rank spell.

    Your roar is also over powered, that is either B rank or A rank roars that can have that fatal power. as for a C rank, it is just highly damaging. Edit the spell to fit the rank.

    Your orochi spell is also too strong, nerf it down a bit.

    Your fang spell is acceptable, but only to other C rank and below spells. B rank and above will break that snake head.


    All in all your magic is unstable, and you do not give credit for the ranks. You have your idea in mind of what they are, but you forget that you are ranking them which limits power. You are only a C rank caster, no B, yet you make your moves sound as though they are either B or higher when they are C rank. You need to remember your position, and lable how they would do against other spells of similar rank, lower rank, and higher ranked. S>A>B>C>D that is how it goes, keep that in mind.


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    Tajima [Banned]
    Tajima [Banned]

    Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Power of Apocalypse
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    Posts : 876
    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Age : 27
    Mentor : Skiadrum The Shadow Dragon
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Shadow Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill: -
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    Post by Tajima [Banned] 31st August 2012, 10:06 am

    Ok..done


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    Tajima Yuchiro | Shadow Dragon Slayer

    Spoiler:
    NightDrivenEn7
    NightDrivenEn7

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    Age : 32
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requip: Four elements.
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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 31st August 2012, 1:32 pm

    Good...However, I do remember talking to you about giving all of your spells comparisons to other ranks. I also want more information in the descriptions on your D rank spells.

    You asked me to check and I am picky about what I approve.


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    Ysmir Ddvansebrom


    Ysmir Ddvansebrom

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    Post by Emilia Hawke 31st August 2012, 3:22 pm

    Btw to not confuse you, he was referring to Shadow Dragons DRIVE, not Dragon Force. They are two completely different things (He doesnt read the mangaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa)


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    Tajima [Banned]
    Tajima [Banned]

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    Mentor : Skiadrum The Shadow Dragon
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Shadow Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill: -
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    Post by Tajima [Banned] 1st September 2012, 1:12 am

    Bump


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    Seikairyuu's Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic(Waiting for Approval) Untitled-1-1

    Tajima Yuchiro | Shadow Dragon Slayer

    Spoiler:
    Emilia Hawke
    Emilia Hawke

    Ysmir Ddvansebrom


    Ysmir Ddvansebrom

    Moderator- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Dragon Slayer- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Senior [500]- Novice [250] - 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
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    Age : 31
    Experience : 87,500

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    Post by Emilia Hawke 1st September 2012, 2:31 am

    Looks good to me. Approved.


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