Necro's pet

Name:Nemu
Rank: Weak
Species: Human
Type: combat pet

Description: Nemu is a little girl, she has no family or anyone who will take care for her. Necro taught her how to fight, Nemu is Necro’s assistant, but Necro only see’s her a pet. Nemu has stitches due to the fact she lost a few limbs and where replaced with the help of Necro’s medical knowledge. She has no emotionsand feels no pain and is completely obedient to Necro, she only cares for her master. Nemu is about 4 feet 11 inches tall, she weighs about 100 pounds, she has pasty white skin. If she is ever hurt or "killed" in action Necro simply takes her back to his secret laboratory in order to stitch her back together.

Abilities:
She usually acts as a distraction while Necro sneaks from behind; Nemu knows a few sword techniques.  Nemu is quick and strong for her age.

Name:Slice and Dice
Rank: D

Description:
Nemu uses two butcher knives to cut her opponent. She moves quickly weaving here and there as she aims for her opponent’s vitals. She travels at 6 feet per second.

Strengths:
Cutting: She can cut and injure her opponent.
Speed: Her speed is bossted by 10% in this attack  
Attck: Her attack is boosted by 10% during this attack

Weaknesses:
~Nonmagic: Her attack has no magical properties. Her weapons are not
~Limits: She is only human, so she can easily get injured and over powered by someone or something stronger than her.
~Stats: She can be inflicted by stat problems; she can be poisoned, blinded, stunned e.t.c.
~No Defense: She cannot block while executing this attack. (cool down 3 posts)

Name:Bloody Elixir
Rank: D

Description: Nemu, cuts her self and then uses her blood and magic to to heal and give power to Necro. (Activation is instant, heals up to 10% per post lasts 2 posts cool down is 4 posts)

Strengths:
~Assist: This can be used as an assist.
~Healing: Heals 10% health of a select target.
~This spell can eliminate one status problem of the select target.

Weaknesses:
~Cannot attack: Nemu cannot attack while using this spell
~Damage: Nemu loses 5 heath points every time she uses this spell
~No defense: Nemu cannot defend while using this spell
~Target: She must be next to Necro in order to use this spell. The target also must stay still while the healing spell is activated.

ネクロの汚名 wrote:Name:Nemu
Rank: Weak
Species: Human
Type: combat pet
Description: Nemu is a little girl, she has no family or anyone who will take care for her. Necro taught her how to fight, Nemu is Necro’s assistant, but Necro only see’s her a pet. Nemu has stitches due to the fact she lost a few limbs and where replaced with the help of Necro’s medical knowledge. She has no emotions and is completely obedient to Necro, she only cares for her master. (Just a slightly longer description as to what Nemu looks like would be really nice. It gives other people you rp a better understanding of the pet. Nothing excessive is needed just a couple of sentences.)
Abilities:
She usually acts as a distraction while Necro sneaks from behind; Nemu knows a few sword techniques.  Nemu is quick and strong for her age.
Name:Slice and Dice
Rank: D
Description:
Nemu uses two butcher knives to cut her opponent. She moves quickly weaving here and there as she aims for her opponent’s vitals. (Just need an exact speed here. Feet per second is the best for this.)
Strengths:
Cutting: She can cut and injure her opponent.  
(Please add 2 more strengths.)
Weaknesses:
Nonmagic: Her attack has no magical properties. Her weapons are not
Limits: She is only human, so she can easily get injured and over powered by someone or something stronger than her.
Stats: She can be inflicted by stat problems; she can be poisoned, blinded, stunned e.t.c.
(Please add a cool-down and a duration. Cool-down could be 3 posts and duration seems to be instant.)

Okay, the edits are in this color. Also your pet can have two abilities, not just one. It's a good thing to give them both abilities aka gives you more options. Bump the thread when the edits have been made. ;3

Bump!

Alright, since my buddy is having trouble with his phone, he has asked me to take over for him for now.

Your first spells seems okay, since you've made the modifications that have been asked for.

For your second spell, there are some things I'd like you to change and modify.

First of all, since this is a healing spell, it won't restock your magical energy to go with it, especially at D-Rank; healing is all its capable of as of now, so please remove the magical energy increase, so replace that strength. Next, what about the person you're healing? Wouldn't they need to stand still as well?

Please bump once you've made the changes~

Bump!

bump

Okay.

Only thing here, i will need a cooldown and a duration on your second spell. Then i can approve ya ;3.

Bump ;)

Okay, edits have been made. So nothing else for me to do but this: