Aayla Mizune - The Takeover Water Wizard

Name: Aayla Mizune
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Birthday: February 15
Sexuality: She's 14... but I'll say straight :P
Special Characteristics:  A few, small slash like, scars mark up both sides of her arms.

Personality: Around strangers Aayla is very shy, usually quiet and likes to stay at the back of the group. She often feels that she is the most useless person on earthland. Since the age of 10 She had been living with a foster family, raised to be more their servant than their daughter. Her foster parents would force her to work, force her to use her takeover magic so that she would be strong enough to take on the jobs they had her doing. When she failed, or did an inadequate job (which was most of the time) They took it upon themselves to discipline her any chance they could. If that wasn't enough, the people of her village looked at her with disdain... a young girl of 10 years old who could transform into a monster. Most adults didn't want their children to socialize with her and only engaged in business if it was absolutely mandatory. Having undergone this sort of treatment for years, she found herself drawing away from everyone, not even attempting to talk to the villagers, nor even trying to reason with her step parents. She moved through life alone, afraid of the repercussions if she socialized, or spoke out of term.  

After she finally managed to leave her step parents, she found herself quickly looking for somewhere new to call home... She wanted someone who could actually care about her, not necessarily a parent, but someone who could make the painful memories of her past fade away. Therefore, whenever someone is able to break down the walls surrounding her heart and become her friend, she becomes extremely loyal and will let herself open up just a little bit more. Around friends, she can become quite excitable, sometimes even rowdy.

However, if someone scares her enough, she will simply shrink away from them and hide. Depending on the situations that arise, and if they get physical, she might launch a bubble attack at those that scare her as a warning, or find herself locking herself in her waterlock in hopes of staying safe from harm.

Now that she is a guild wizard, she will have to learn to work as a team with her comrades. She has no problem following other people's orders, as that has become something she's extremely used too. She would much rather be a support wizard, than a front line wizard at the moment. If ever she was asked to lead a job, or lead anything at all, she would most likely attempt to decline. She does not feel confident about herself in the least, therefore why should anyone else feel confident about her being a leader? She will however, do her absolute best to help in any way she can. Once she becomes more comfortable with those around her, she will no doubt begin to feel more comfortable in her own skin, meaning she will slowly gain the confidence needed to lead.

Aayla wants to become strong enough to protect those who are unable to protect themselves, much like herself when she was stuck with her step parents. When she comes face to face with any kind of injustice towards people, she can become quite angry and agitated. If she feels someone is in desperate need of her help in a tough situation, she will due her best to put her feelings aside, and use her takeover magic to put up a strong front as she attempts to aid them.

Any time Aayla uses her takeover, her personality instantly changes into a much more serious one. It is as if she becomes a completely different person. She is calm, and collected in the face of battle. Ready to fight to the end to protect what she believes in, to protect those weaker than her who need her help. Whenever she breaks out of her takeover however, she quickly proceeds to becoming embarrassed of her actions... no matter the result.

Likes: Loves Apples, puppies and necklaces.
-Apples are awesome, they taste good in everything!
-Puppies are cute, adorable and loyal! just the kind of partner or friend she really wants to find.
-Her blue pendant is the last remaining memory she has of her mother before she died... she has always considered Jewelry as special treasures from the heart.

Dislikes: Spiders, bugs, the dark,
-One time, she picked an apple from a tree and took a big bite out of it, not noticing there was a lady bug on it. Therefore she felt the gross crunch and inevitably swallowed it! Yuck.
-Ever since her parents passed away, she has always been afraid of being left alone in the dark... especially since her foster parents had taken it unto themselves to abuse the child when she didn't listen.
-She once tried to flee her step parents by leaping out of her bedroom window, dropping three stories into the large backyard pool. The drop felt terrible, it felt like her heart was in her chest! the sensation felt as if she would die the minute she hit the ground. Since then, she doesn't like high places.


Motivations: She strongly desires to become stronger, to stop the evil that hides itself in this world, and to find friends that will protect her(and hopefully one day she will have the strength to protect them). She wishes to become a powerful wizard, to stop all of the injustices happening in the world, especially those concerning small children.

Fears: Men with beards, Thunder, Wooden spoons
Her parents beat her nearly every day as a child as they saw her as nothing but a large "screw up" and "free labor" when they needed her. Her father always had a long beard, and her mother was always the one to strike her with anything in arms reach, most regularly a wooden spoon. Her fear of thunder also stems from this experience. The sound of wood hitting her, the sound of the belt snapping just before it struck her... reminded her so much of lightning... Every time she heard it from then on, she would jump and most often cry.

General Appearance


Aayla is usually found wearing a dress that stops just above her knees. She's never been fussy of the style of the clothes she wears, so she usually just picks the cheapest thing she can afford, if she hasn't already stolen it off of someone's clothes line.

She has a pair of long gloves that go up to her elbows to cover most of the scarring imparted onto her by her foster parents.

Flip flop sandals are usually the only thing that adorn her feet, as they are the cheapest, and easiest items to find. They are also easy for her to loose if she needs to quickly make a run for it.

Lastly, she always wears a blue pendant around her neck that was given to her by her real mother, the gemstone perfectly matching the color of her eyes. This, she never, ever takes off.

Height: 4"6
Weight: 102......102.6
Hair: Long pale blue hair with a faint tinge of green on her bangs. The tips of her hair sometimes seem to fade as if made of moving water.
Eyes: Deep blue
Skin Tone: Fair skin
Guild: Sabertooth
Tattoo: A blue sabertooth tattoo, lined in white adorns the upper part of her left arm.
Rank: D

Hey there Aayla, I said I might be the one to review your character didn't I? XD

As I said in your welcome thread, the first thing you need to do is to resize your avatar so that it doesn't overlap into the post.

Next up is your personality. At the moment you have 117 words for your personality. Here at FTRP we require a minimum of 500 words. For ideas on what to add, perhaps you could mention more about how her experiences changed her, utilising your likes, dislikes, motivations and fears to add onto her personality. You also need to go into more detail on how she's like in both a leading position of a party and as a member of a party working under leader.

Next up in your likes you mention about the blue pendant being memory of her mother, but then mention that her mother abused her in your fears. I'm assuming you meant foster mother, but if you could just mention that in the fears then that would be great =]

Once these issues are seen to I would be more than happy to approve Aayla =]

Yeah sorry, it was 1am and I just gave up for the moment... lol Will be fixing it and adding much much more :)
Also yes, I meant step-mother

~Edited~

(Still under WIP, just want to keep everything together)


Primary Magic: Takeover Magic
Secondary Magic:
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:Aayla is able to use only one form of takeover so far. The Sea Serpent Takeover. She isn't very adept with her skills yet, and so when she changes, her hands, up to her elbows will change into scales and claws, her feet will also change in a much similar fashion as well. Scales will appear to cover the outsides of her face, pushing back her long hair into a sort of mane. Her ears will transform into what looks like fins and a small tail will also grow from her tailbone. However it looks simple enough, a 40cm long scaly rough tail.

Along with this takeover, Aayla is able to manipulate the water around her, able to throw it at her enemies, and use it for different spells as she learns them. The more water she is close too, the stronger her major spells.

Strengths:
-Depending on her proximity to water, the damage can fluctuate. The Sea Serpent Takeover is at it's most powerful when by a large body of water (i.e the ocean or a lake)
- All of her natural 'passive' abilities become amplified when in the Sea Serpent takeover. (i.e strength, speed, magic power, etc.)
- Can rejuvenate her magic power by drinking up the nearby water.
- Resistance to Fire (not immune)


Weaknesses:
-If no water is available, then she has to draw water from her surroundings or herself. If she needs to draw water from her surroundings it takes about about 30 seconds to channel, and another 10 to be usable in a spell.
-Her Sea Serpent takeover is really only effective near any body of water. She can still do the takeover anywhere, but her power will not be as significant.
-Intense heat will slow her down in her Sea Serpent takeover, as it evaporates up all the water around her.

Abilities/Powers:
-When not in her Sea Serpent takeover, Aayla's body can be used as a source of water. (Think of Juvia). However, her magic is no where near as strong as when she is in her takeover form.
- Can breath underwater
- Very quick swimmer



Name: Water Lock
Rank: D
Type: Offensive Water Spell
Description: The waterlock forms a large bubble of water that will engulf a person, whether herself or an enemy, in a prison of water for 15 seconds. The spell can be cast for longer periods of time on herself, but not on enemies.
Strengths:
-Can engulf herself for long periods of time in a protective bubble of water.
-Can heat or cool the water being used for the spell.
-Can be used to trap an enemy for 15 seconds at D class

Weaknesses:
-When used on others, the waterlock will only last for 15 seconds.
-Conducts electricity. Therefore, if she uses the waterlock on herself she is making herself even more vulnerable to lightning attacks.
-Can only be used on others around a large body of water

Name: Water Slicer
Rank: D
Type: Offensive Water Spell
Description: Water Tempest creates small 'blades' of water and launches that in a quick flurry at the enemies.
Strengths:
-Water powerful enough to cut her opponents
-Launch multiple 'blades' at once.

Weaknesses:
-Cannot be manipulated once the spell is cast (will only go in a straight line)
-Takes up a decent amount of magic power (Can use it a maximum of four times before being totally exhausted)

Name: Water Bubbles
Rank: D
Type: Offensive Water Spell
Description: Creates bubbles of water large enough only to cover a persons head.
Strengths:
- This bubble can allow her friends to breath underwater.

Weaknesses:
-The more oxygen that is put into the bubbles, the more magic power is required. I.e if a person remains underwater too long, it will quickly sap away her magic energy.

Ignoring the magic as I know it's just for you to keep tabs on things. If you'd like it removed then just ask me in the chatbox or via PM.

Nice work on the application, especially the personality =] I'm more than happy to approve you and, as Sabertooth's Paragon of Selflessness, I'd also like to welcome you into Sabertooth =] Have fun RPing here!