Oversoul

Magic

Primary Magic: Oversoul exquip and take over
Secondary Magic:
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Oversoul is a magic can only be used by someone who is half Yōkai (spirit) and half human, this is because since the user is half human they are able to be possessed by another Yōkai and since the user is half spirit, like Ayame, the user is not possessed all the way which means they have control of their mind and body even though they are possessed by a Yōkai, this technique is called Oversoul because of the user would summon a Youkai then Overlay their soul with the soul of Youkai summoned, hence the name Oversoul. This magic is taught by multiple types of Yōkai similarly how dragons would teach dragon slayers. It is a similar to slayer and exquip magic because it allows the user to be partially possessed by a Yōkai thus gaining the Yōkai’s abilities and attributes similar to slayer magic, when possessed the Yōkai is manifested on the users body as clothes and armor each Yōkai is manifested into different clothes and armor, the user is able to exchange then equip another Yōkai thus gaining another Yōkai’s ability and attributes thus making it similar to exquip magic.  This magic is used to slay Yōkai’s, it can also prove to be deadly when used against another mage. Since she is a half nine tail fox spirit she uses her fox form as a medium in order to control a Yōkai’s abilities and attributes during an Oversoul transformation. (How each Oversoul goes: Summon+Get Partially Possessed= Oversoul with the spirit)

Strengths:
- It is very versatile it can range from supportive, to offensive and even defensive.
-The user is able to use different Yōkai’s abilities and attributes.
-The user gains the Yōkai’s knowledge and memories.
-The user is able to use multiple elements due to the Yokais ability.
- The user is able to exquip different types of Yōkai’s.
- Can absorb an element that a Yōkai governs.  For example if in fire form the user can absorb fire and so forth with the other elements.

Weaknesses:
- The user can only use ONE Yōkai per take over, meaning one element per take over.
- If the user stays possessed for too long the user will go insane and the Yōkai will fully take over the users’ body and mind.
- The user is weak against exorcists, and exorcism based magic. (holy magic)
- Slayers can absorb the elemental attacks.
- Since this magic has the ability to change to different elements the user will automatically be weak to the elements rival element, for example if in fire form the user will be weak against water, if in water form it will be weak against  thunder, and so forth.
- The user cannot exquip Yōkai’s every turn, the user has to wait until the transformation ends.  Meaning they are stuck in that form until the transformation wears off.
-The user cannot stop a transformation once it is underway.

Abilities/Powers:
- The user is able to talk to animals and spirits.
- Gathering of the spirits: Ayame is able to call fourth her four spirit aids and summons them when changing Oversouls. (note she MUST use this ability to switch Oversouls)
- Yōkai’s Howl: The user lets out a ghostly howl, similar to a dragons slayers roar or a God slayers bellow , made out of the element in which their Oversoul  governs. (Example in fire fox form= Yokai’s Blazing Howl)  


Spell Template


Name:  Fire Fox- Oversoul  Oni
Rank:  D
Type: Offensive, fire, steel
Description: Ayame gained this form from  a spirit of a corrupt blacksmith that turned into an Oni (demon spirit). The Oni taught Ayame how to wield fire and molten steel but to fully access this power Ayame must summon the Oni and Oversoul with the it and let herself become partially possessed by the Oni. In fire fox form Ayame gains the Oni’s memories and experiences, she becomes a bit more aggressive and easily angered during battle. This Oversoul is mostly offensive. The Oni manifests on Ayame’s body as a fire red dress and a pair of flaming gauntlets. (lasts for 5 posts, cool down is 6 posts)

Strengths:
-The user is able to absorb fire.
- Has 20% fire resistance.
- Physical and magical strength is boosted by 45% while in this form.
- Fire Forge; the user is able to manipulate fire and molten steel; the user can make things, like weapons out of the molten steel. All creations last for 2 posts. (This ability can ONLY be activated while in Fire Fox form)

Weaknesses:
- Fire slayers can absorb the fires produced by this Oversoul thus making this Oversoul weak and highly in ineffective against Fire slayers
- Steel slayers can also absorb the steel produced by this magic. (note, they are still burned due because the steel of this Oversoul  is molten steel)
- Incredibly weak against water magic of all types, any water damage is doubled while in this form.
- The user MUST wait until the transformation ends.  User cannot change to another Oversoul while in currently in an Oversoul.
- The fires and molten steel can injure nearby Allies.
- Weak against holy magic.
-Can only gain these abilities and weaknesses in this form.

Oni, fire spell:

Fire Fox:

Name: Rain Fox- Oversoul Zennyo Ryūō

Rank: D
Type: Defensive, Supportive, Water
Description: Ayame gained this form by a spirit called Zennyo Ryuo the rain dragon. Zennyo taught Ayame how to manipulate water and its healing properties but to fully access this power Ayame must summon Zennyo and Oversoul and then allow herself to be partially possessed by Zennyo. Ayame gains Zennyo’s memories and experiences; in a battle she becomes more reserved and cautious.  Zennyo manifests on Ayame’s body as a blue and white dress with leather straps and various jewelry. (lasts for 2 posts cools down for 3 posts)

Strengths:
- The user can absorb water
- The user can control and manipulate water
- 20% water resistance

Weaknesses:
- Weak against thunder magic, thunder magic deals double damage while in this form.
- Weak against holy magic.
- Water slayers can absorb the water of this form making this form in ineffective against water slayers.
- The user’s physical strength is decreased by 25% while in this form.
- The user MUST wait until the transformation ends. User cannot change to another Oversoul while in currently in an Oversoul.
-Can only gain these abilities and weaknesses in this form.

Zennyo, healing spell:

Rain Fox:

Name: Sky Fox – Oversoul  Tengu
Rank: D
Type: Wind, Offensive, Deffensive
Description: Ayame gained this form by a Tengu spirit. The Tengu taught Ayame how to manipulate wind and fighting techniques properties but to fully access this power Ayame must summon the Tengu then Oversoul with the it and allow herself to be be partially possessed by The Tegu. Ayame gains the Tengu’s memories and experiences; in a battle she becomes more eager and excited.  Tengu manifests on Ayame’s body as a white uniform and white cap. (lasts for 3 posts cools down for 4 posts)

Strengths:
-The user can absorb wind.
- 20% wind resistance.
-The user can control and manipulate wind.
- The users speed is increased by 20%
- The user fighting techniques and abilities are increased by 20%


Weaknesses:
-Wind Slayers can absorb the winds created by this form making this form in ineffective against wind slayers.
- Weak against thunder magic, damage is doubled while in this form.
- Weak against holy magic.
- Strength is decreased by 20%
- The winds are not really effective against earth magic.
- The user MUST wait until the transformation ends.  User cannot change to another Oversoul while in currently in an Oversoul.
-Can only gain these abilities and weaknesses in this form.

Tengu, wind spell:

Sky Fox:

Name: Stone Fox – Oversoul Shishi
Rank: D
Type: Earth, Offensive, Defensive
Description: Ayame gained this form by a Shishi the lion dog spirit. Shishi taught Ayame how to manipulate the earth and use her inner strength but to fully access this power. Ayame must summon Shishi and Oversoul with it, she must allow herself to be partially possessed by Shishi. Ayame gains the Shishi’s memories and experiences; in a battle she becomes more brave and steadfast.  Shishi manifests on Ayame’s body as a shrine priestess outfit, her hair becomes shorter. (lasts for 4 posts cools down for 5 posts)

Strengths:
-Can manipulate rocks and earth
- Can absorb rocks and earth
- 20% Earth resistance
- The users physical, magical, and defense strength by 30%

Weaknesses:
-Earth Slayers can absorb the earth created by this form making this form in ineffective against earth slayers.
- Weak against fire magic, damage is doubled while in this form.
- Weak against holy magic.
- The users Speed is decreased by 30%
- The user MUST wait until the transformation ends.  User cannot change to another Oversoul while in currently in an Oversoul.
-Can only gain these abilities and weaknesses in this form.

Stone Fox:

Stone Fox:

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Hey there Lovely =] First of all, well done with this app. It's looking good considering it's your first magic app. I do have a few things that I'd like to see edited though before I can approve your magic.

First of all, none of your spells have Durations or Cooldowns. You need to make sure your spells have these for the sake of the RP.

Next is the issue in regards to takeover magic. Takeover magic itself is a bit of a difficult one as there are certain rules in place for it. First of all you can only have up to three full takeover forms. Each part of your takeover can of course have a spell attached to it, as a takeover itself is not classed as a full spell. Personally I think having a summoning magic would be better and having Ayame take on the element of that summon. Whether you limit her spells to only ones sharing her element is up to you, but I feel this would be the best and least limiting way to keep your magic idea, as otherwise Ayame would be limited to only 3 elements if you stuck with takeover.

Lastly your ability of healing allies is a bit too much for an ability I'm afraid. You'll have to remove that, although there's no stopping you from having something like that as a spell =]

These are my only edits for now. Let me know when these changes are made and I'll be happy to re-review =]

Thank you soo much for taking the time to review my magic legacy-san, I think i made the edits you requested I also took the liberty to post what the different forms would look like in the spoilers above, I hope that it's okay. Thank you again.

For each of your Oversoul's Default spells you need to fill out a spell template (the same as the ones you've used to write up each of your forms), with their range/area of effect, cooldowns and durations and of course strengths and weaknesses (which would probably be the same as the strengths and weaknesses of your Oversouls themselves, so it shouldn't take long to do).

As soon as this is done I should be able to approve your magic =]