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You need 500 words personality. I would perhaps go more into reasoning. As to what and why she finds the things she finds appealing that she finds appealing. You have filled out the why or the what but never both of them on certain topics.

Ex: Fred likes cars.

What does he find appealing about them? They are fast and Fred is a speed maniac. He likes to speed when he rides down the freeway.

Why does he find them appealing? As a child he was always taken to racing tracks. His father was a mechanic and had a lot to do with vehicles and motors. In his younger days, his father also had a short racing career which amounted to nothing in the end. Fred was quite impressed and carries the fascination of cars and racing his father had with him.

Get my drift?

Then, perhaps you can expand on Tracy's thoughts on a multitude of topics. Life, Philosophy, Religion, Magic, Guilds, Evil, Good, Family, Love etc. Explain if some of the basic aspects of life are important to her.

Once you have the 500 word count you should be good to go.