Aetheira Deathscyth(done)

Name: Aetheira "Thea" Deathscyth
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Birthday:  12/1
Sexuality: straight
Special Characteristics: Black Feathered Wings(flight Capable), Large scar(across chest under her right breast curling around to her back)
Personality:

Not everyone is born with wings, fewer so to parents the dont have them. From birth she was something of an outcast, the children of her home town making fun of her for her wings, and on bad days beating her up. This drove her to learn magic so she can have her revenge, but as she got stronger and older people started to care less. she continued to focus on her study failing to notice her peers no longer had eyes filled with scorn, some even showed lust as they looked upon her, but she paid them no heed any longer. 3 years ago one of her biggest tormentors as a child asked her out, this caused her have a violent outburst, she nearly killed him stopping only seconds from killing him. she simply smiled Yelled Hippocrates and walked out of the city leaving what she felt was a unloving family behind. she traveled for a time moving from place to place enjoying the wonders of the world, well the wonders books of the world, as more often then naught she would end up in public library's. because of Aetheira's love of books she tends to ignore those around her, that she comes of as antisocial, which is true to a point.
the one thing she tells anyone that wishes to be her friend is to "Be truthful i have been harmed by false words and will no longer be their target." most often for the center of a book.
Aetheira bears the scar of a mad man how wished to do her ill, she had belive his honeyed words and was punished for it by nearly losing her life. she had attempted to help him in his "reaserch" failing to realise that she was apart of it. As his true intentions came to light she resisted using ice make magic but failed to hit him in any degree. as his blade rended her flesh aetheira was unable to cast so instead used her own bloods as a medium, oddly this allowed her more control over her magic, and to this day continues to use her blood instead of water.
Her upbring along with this event has given her a sour view on people and it shows when she talking to people. thankfully she is hard to anger giving her a calm that often make people uneasy, but this is just another way she drive people away. Oddly enough even though she tends to scorn those around her she fears being alone and this often leads to ackward situations.

Aetheira's focus in combat is long range attack most often leaving melee to others as she pelts the enemy with
attacks. Aetherir is unskilled at commanding others out of lack of espriance but grasps the basic concepts of mixed unit tactics, this often lead to following more often then leading, her reason if asked is "less talking i have to do..." often with a shrug. when following she follows the lead of her allys often attacking at the same time as them or defending them with petals. she make up for her lack of skill with zeal in helping those who side with her, she often overdoes thing when her ally start getting hurt and has more than once defeated a enemy only to faint from blood loss.


Likes:

Books: Thea can almost always be found with her nose in a book and if her nose is not in one you can bet that one is close at hand. the word book-worm only begins to describe her.


Flowers: You know Thea has entered the room as the sweet scent of flowers, wild or otherwise, is always upon her


Weapons: Despite her dislike of fighting she like creating new weapons, often with flower motifs. her weapons have yet to earn her any fame as the only one that gets used is her own. best not to bring it up in conversation.

Dislikes:

Fighting: as a child she was scorned because of her wing and often beaten up for them, oddly enough the created a live and let live attitude.


Fire magic: Pretty simple reason being a Ice Make caster but she will give other reasons if pressed.


Preying on the weak: Despite her hate of fighting she hates it when people prey on those who can fight back, to the point of stepping in... Violently if need be.

Motivations:

Strength: never wishes to be the victim again. she has been in so many situation when she was helpless that she often get offendend if helped without asking for it.


A home: never really having a home to call her own she hope to build on with her own to hands(not literal)


making her parents proud: despite everything that happened to her as a child she still wish to return home one day and when she does she wish to be someone that her parent can be proud of

Fears:

Being accepted and alone: after all her time being scorned she both yearns and fears the day someone accepts her, to the point that she tends to keep people at "arms length".


The origins of the wings:Perhaps somewhat unreasonable but not whole unwarranted

being weak: after suffering at the hands of a men so prejudice she fears being weak.


General Appearance


Height: 6' 4"
Weight: 145lbs
Hair: Silver long but messy
Eyes: Teal
Skin Tone: pale
Appearance:
Tall but lithe aetheria has most of her clothing custom made often in shades of purple. the clothing itself usually is quite elegant but made to protect against a cold that is not there.

Guild: Nox Animus
Tattoo: Left thigh Red
Rank: D

First I need to ask you to bold your template: This is just to help keep things understandable on where the template begins and ends. (Standard Procedure; sorry if it is tedious.)

Your personality needs to be 286 more words long; making it 500 characters minimum.

As for your personality as well, you don't add in anything about your magic as that is not a personality trait. You can keep how she prefers attacking and defending at the same time; but don't go in-depth about your magic.
Instead, talk about how she IS while fighting: Does her personality change? Is she easier to anger? How is she as a leader? How is she under a leader? Does she work best alone? Does she work best with a group? How does she judge her enemies? These are the questions to answer in that In battle section.
(And perhaps hel clean up the grammar a bit; as it is hard to tell at first glance where a sentence ends and begins in your personality. Just a personal suggestion does not need to be done; but a want if you are able too.)

You first and last motivation need a bit more of a lengthier description, just add in a bit more detail as they are too short.

Your Guild information also needs an update; as you still need to place where a tattoo would be located, and the rank of your character: Defaulting to D rank.

please bump when you have edited.

i had to go to work so i did not finish

bump

Added guild and rank as wells as a brief description