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    Trick Shot Gun Magic done W.I.P.

    Cathrine
    Cathrine

    Player 
    Lineage : Rage of the Soul Torn
    Position : None
    Posts : 63
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 37.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Trick Shot Gun Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Cathrine 30th May 2014, 8:48 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Trick Shot Gun Magic
    Secondary Magic: None yet
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: Since Cathrine was young, her father has been training her in the magic that his father had taught him. The magic involves two different steps, the first is taking miniature guns, only an inch or two in size, and sending your magic through it to make it into a full sized weapon. The second step is focusing  your magic to create ammunition for the gun, using different elements that can create different effects depending on the gun it is fired from. When the guns are in their small forms, Cathrine keeps them on a chain that she wears on her belt.
    Strengths:
    - Versatility: She has a variety of shots for different situations.
    - Large array of elements: Can use different elements depending on who she is fighting
    - Even if she loses one of her guns, she still has extras

    Weaknesses:
    - Elemental shots can be eaten by slayers
    - Without her guns she is powerless
    - Drains her magic power quickly
    - Very little defensive capability

    Abilities/Powers: None

    D Rank Spells:


    C Ranked Spells:


    Signature Spells:


    Last edited by Cathrine on 18th November 2014, 8:58 pm; edited 3 times in total
    Chaotic Rumble
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    First Skill: Refraction : Sword King
    Second Skill: N/A (for now)
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Chaotic Rumble 31st May 2014, 9:59 am

    Alright, hey there mate, I'll be checking your magic. Now, normally I'd quote the entire app saying "change this and that", but there really isn't much to do with your magic, so I can simply type it down here.

    First off, cool magic. Secondly, let's move onto the spells~

    Alright, for your first spell, I would like to know how many magazines you can carry, or do you only have one single magazine? If that's the case, it's a bit underpowered, and you can have as many as two magazines extra. Not every single one of your shots is gonna hit anyways, so it's all fine. Increase the cooldown to 5 posts, since this is an offensive spell, and a pretty good one at that.

    For your second spell, you can also increase some things about it. The first is the range of effectiveness; 10 feet is rather short. You can have as much as 25 feet if you want. I'd also like to know how many magazines you carry on this one; again, two is fine, but since it only contains a single shot, you may even be allowed three. I'd like to know the spread of the shots, as in, how many bullets does this thing spread?

    For your Fire Shot spell, I just need you to elaborate on a few things. How is it effective against plant magic? Can it burn away spells with a single hit or something? Up to what rank can it burn and be effective against? Same with your weaknesses, how is wind and water magic affect this spell? Does it cause it to sizzle? Redirect the bullet or something? What exactly? What ranked spells can do that?

    For Water Shot, my basic questions for the Fire Shot spell remain; please elaborate on how it's effective against fire magic, and how it's weak against ice magic. Also, for your shotgun version, you can increase the range it can shoot to up to 25 feet, and increase the radius of the bubble exploding to 15 feet. Also, compared to normal, how much slower is the shotgun version?

    Hmm... Maybe I should've quoted it. Not because it has a lot of faults or anything, but because it'd be easier to understand. Either way, I hope this makes sense, and please bump once the changes are made~


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    Cathrine
    Cathrine

    Player 
    Lineage : Rage of the Soul Torn
    Position : None
    Posts : 63
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 37.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Trick Shot Gun Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Cathrine 31st May 2014, 7:29 pm

    fixed and bumped
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    Lineage : Corrupted King of Knights
    Position : King Of Kings
    Posts : 2754
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Mentor : Sapphiron ; The Shadow
    Experience : 601,187

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Refraction : Sword King
    Second Skill: N/A (for now)
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Chaotic Rumble 2nd June 2014, 2:56 am

    Alright, sorry this took time to reply.

    I don't really see what else needs tinkering...

    'Tis approved!


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