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    The Amulet of the Dragons

    Viola-chan
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    The Amulet of the Dragons Empty The Amulet of the Dragons

    Post by Viola-chan 11th June 2014, 11:11 am

    The Amulet of the Dragons Dragon-347x520


    Name:
    Amulet of the Dragons

    Rank:
    Legendary

    Type:
    Amulet

    Description:

    The Amulet of the Dragons Pristine_blue_amulet_by_amadoptables-d2xk2qd

    This Magical Item is a small blue crystal wrapped around in metal with, black laces dangling from the bottom of it, and a loop at the top of it. This item was made when Viola's siblings left Earth to venture to other worlds in hopes of creating peace everywhere, though, before they left, they transferred all of their remaining power to a small blue crystal and placed it in the back of Viola [upper back]. It was there way of keeping something small, and un-seen to protect her from the danger that could possibly encounter her some-day.

    Strengths:

    This item isn't seen, since it is literally inside Viola's very body, just under-neath her X shaped scar that rests behind her lower neck some-what reaching her upper back. So if, somebody wanted to find the source of where her magic ability were coming from, they would have a very hard, almost impossible time finding it.

    In dangerous situations, when Viola's energy has suddenly vanished from her, this item restores it for some odd reason, in hopes of helping her some-what, even healing minor wounds or cuts. Along with healing it has the ability to increase her strength as-well, whenever she is weakened or on the brink of being defeated by an enemy, as said before, this small magical item has a strange way of sensing when Viola is in danger.

    This small item gives her resistance to heat and other elements that might harm her, for example if Viola were to, per say, accidentally touch a hot stove, her hand wouldn't at all be burned in the slightest, for the amulet inside her body had reacted quicker than her own nerves.

    For some odd reason as-well, the amulet, gives her the strength to even sense danger before it has arrived, but only if the danger will strike her way, and harm her. The amulet has an odd way of sensing Viola's future, before it has even happened, though the amulet doesn't do this all the time, so it isn't very often for Viola to ever sense danger before it has even arrived. The amulet, only gives Viola to sense danger that is heading her way if it will kill her.



    Weaknesses:

    It increases her emotions, in-fact, every slightly strong emotion she feels, her amulet will react causing her dragon side to react along side it and scales will grow onto her cheeks, hands, upper back and arms, sometimes thighs. Though, this can be good in some cases, it also can't for if she get's angry, she won't be able to stop herself.

    The amulet has a strange blocking to ensure that Viola won't be able to see any important memories, although she already knows who she is, if she wants to re-read her entire past her head will ache greatly as though somebody has driven a screwdriver into the back of her head. Also the same thing for Viola sensing grave danger, her head will ache strongly, so much that she will find herself onto her knees groaning.

    Though this amulet is used for good, and mainly only helps Viola in danger, if this item is pulled out from her body some-how, black luck will fall greatly to anybody who attempts to use it, for only disaster, suffering and pain will be pulled toward them, her included. She must keep the amulet with her forever, for it was made for her to use.

    When Viola was encased into a block of ice for over 300 or more years the crystal suddenly stopped working, so when Viola awoke, she started to age like any human girl would, though in her dragon years 417 is the age of 17 for humans, this crystal ensures to protect her and heal her wounds, leaving her some how immortal in away, or just, a very very slow grower. Thought this can be good, it also cannot, for there are many dark dragons and wizards that would kill to have what she has. And she says she'd rather die a normal being, then live forever being chased by those who are jealous of her, and tortured if she doesn't tell anybody where the special amulet is.



    Abilities:

    Royalty - Since Viola's siblings placed practically their very being into the amulet, there is a special aura that often surrounds Viola's entire body. Though every being has an aura around themselves, white and black are the most important of all, for they stand for royalty, or somebody important. When Viola is in her human form, a white dragon like aura will always be around her body, and will only be visible to dragons, and sometimes dragon slayers, reminding them of how important Viola is, and who she is. Though the amulet gives off the presence of her two siblings and along with herself, this causes at least most people, too respect her.

    Mind Reading - Viola's most unique ability is to be able to read minds, though she cannot do this unless she presses both her hands to the temples of the person, or beings head and closes her eyes, or leaves them open. If her eyes are open, they will glow brightly, and usually this ability is not used unless Viola wants to know something about the person, or if the person wants to know something about themselves that they can't seem to remember. When Viola reaches S rank, she'll even be able to read others minds and very thoughts if she wishes without touching their head.








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    The Amulet of the Dragons Empty Re: The Amulet of the Dragons

    Post by Samus Aran 12th June 2014, 3:09 am

    Alright, looking somewhat good but before I go into this really and start picking some things apart I must ask of you something.

    Could please state what are the two abilities that this has? I get the feeling this has more than two abilities and that they arent user-ranked. but then again thats just me. However, You do need to clearly state the two abilites (give them a small name or separate them clearly) and what rank they are, and what they do.

    Please bump once you have done so~


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    The Amulet of the Dragons Empty Re: The Amulet of the Dragons

    Post by Samus Aran 14th June 2014, 3:38 pm

    Viola-chan wrote:
    The Amulet of the Dragons Dragon-347x520


    Name:
    Amulet of the Dragons

    Rank:
    Legendary

    Type:
    Amulet

    Description:

    The Amulet of the Dragons Pristine_blue_amulet_by_amadoptables-d2xk2qd

    This Magical Item is a small blue crystal wrapped around in metal with, black laces dangling from the bottom of it, and a loop at the top of it. This item was made when Viola's siblings left Earth to venture to other worlds in hopes of creating peace everywhere, though, before they left, they transferred all of their remaining power to a small blue crystal and placed it in the back of Viola [upper back]. It was there way of keeping something small, and un-seen to protect her from the danger that could possibly encounter her some-day.

    Strengths:

    This item isn't seen, since it is literally inside Viola's very body, just under-neath her X shaped scar that rests behind her lower neck some-what reaching her upper back. So if, somebody wanted to find the source of where her magic ability were coming from, they would have a very hard, almost impossible time finding it.

    In dangerous situations, when Viola's energy has suddenly vanished from her, this item restores it for some odd reason, in hopes of helping her some-what, even healing minor wounds or cuts. Along with healing it has the ability to increase her strength as-well, whenever she is weakened or on the brink of being defeated by an enemy, as said before, this small magical item has a strange way of sensing when Viola is in danger. <----------This is an ability, specifically because it restores her energy (in any way) and heals her. This double whammy acts as an ability, which it needs to be placed as. Please do so if you would.

    This small item gives her resistance to heat and other elements that might harm her, for example if Viola were to, per say, accidentally touch a hot stove, her hand wouldn't at all be burned in the slightest, for the amulet inside her body had reacted quicker than her own nerves. <------------- This also seems like an ability more than a random strength you just throw in. I need to know really what gives her this ability to not be burned, so if you explain more i 'might' just let this one go free.

    For some odd reason as-well, the amulet, gives her the strength to even sense danger before it has arrived, but only if the danger will strike her way, and harm her. The amulet has an odd way of sensing Viola's future, before it has even happened, though the amulet doesn't do this all the time, so it isn't very often for Viola to ever sense danger before it has even arrived. The amulet, only gives Viola to sense danger that is heading her way if it will kill her. <-------------Once again this seems like an ability more than a random strength. Being able to sense the future in 'any' way is helpful, even to an extent of stopping death. Although, this is another one I 'might' let go simply due to how obscure a kill shot might happen.



    Weaknesses:

    It increases her emotions, in-fact, every slightly strong emotion she feels, her amulet will react causing her dragon side to react along side it and scales will grow onto her cheeks, hands, upper back and arms, sometimes thighs. Though, this can be good in some cases, it also can't for if she get's angry, she won't be able to stop herself. <--------- Why does it do this? You'd need to explain it more in your description.

    The amulet has a strange blocking to ensure that Viola won't be able to see any important memories, although she already knows who she is, if she wants to re-read her entire past her head will ache greatly as though somebody has driven a screwdriver into the back of her head. Also the same thing for Viola sensing grave danger, her head will ache strongly, so much that she will find herself onto her knees groaning.

    Though this amulet is used for good, and mainly only helps Viola in danger, if this item is pulled out from her body some-how, black luck will fall greatly to anybody who attempts to use it, for only disaster, suffering and pain will be pulled toward them, her included. She must keep the amulet with her forever, for it was made for her to use.

    When Viola was encased into a block of ice for over 300 or more years the crystal suddenly stopped working, so when Viola awoke, she started to age like any human girl would, though in her dragon years 417 is the age of 17 for humans, this crystal ensures to protect her and heal her wounds, leaving her some how immortal in away, or just, a very very slow grower. Thought this can be good, it also cannot, for there are many dark dragons and wizards that would kill to have what she has. And she says she'd rather die a normal being, then live forever being chased by those who are jealous of her, and tortured if she doesn't tell anybody where the special amulet is. <-------This seems like it should be a part of the description more than a weakness. I need more than just what you have, an actual downside is more needed here.


    Depending on your changes and answers, you my need to add a fifth weakness.


    Abilities:

    Royalty - Since Viola's siblings placed practically their very being into the amulet, there is a special aura that often surrounds Viola's entire body. Though every being has an aura around themselves, white and black are the most important of all, for they stand for royalty, or somebody important. When Viola is in her human form, a white dragon like aura will always be around her body, and will only be visible to dragons, and sometimes dragon slayers, reminding them of how important Viola is, and who she is. Though the amulet gives off the presence of her two siblings and along with herself, this causes at least most people, too respect her. <------------ Now this is a random strength, that should be mentioned in the description. This has no real value unlike the strength, so please remove this from here if you would kindly.

    Mind Reading - Viola's most unique ability is to be able to read minds, though she cannot do this unless she presses both her hands to the temples of the person, or beings head and closes her eyes, or leaves them open. If her eyes are open, they will glow brightly, and usually this ability is not used unless Viola wants to know something about the person, or if the person wants to know something about themselves that they can't seem to remember. When Viola reaches S rank, she'll even be able to read others minds and very thoughts if she wishes without touching their head. <-------Okay. This is asking for a lot. But able to be done. All I really need are specifics. What rank is this ability? Does it leave their bodies vulnerable while shes looking into their memories? How far can she go? How many posts does it take to delve fully into their memories? Keep in mind also, this is a legendary item. All abilities cap at A-rank, meaning she would get no extra bonus from this as an S-rank mage that she wouldn't already have as an A-rank mage.







    Alright. Anything in Bold needs to be addressed. Keep in mind this is a legendary item, which means you only get up to two player ranked effects, capping at A, and you also can only use any effects that are your rank (meaning if something was A-rank, it would be unavailable to you as a B-rank.)

    Bump when finished


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