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    EastT
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    Post by EastT 4th May 2014, 9:51 am

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Shikigami Book magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster/Semi-Holder
    Description: The magic is one a way of paper magic. This magic consist on using the shikigami magic and a "Soul Book" to activate unique abilities. Soul books are not easy to get, this soul books are in some way, alive, and only react and open to its first user. When casting a spell, the user rites the magic in strange ancient letters and shouts the magic in order to activate.
    Strengths:
    -The paper can is used to create different monsters as a summon.
    -They can be used in many type of ranges.
    -The Spirit Book can't be touched by another user, if another person tries to grave it or take it, he will receive a energy discharge.
    Weaknesses:
    -The summons will always have a big weakness to a element.
    -Whenever a summon is destroyed, the user receives 1/4 of the damage dealt to the monster.
    -The user can't use this magic with no Soul Book and can't get another one.
    -What ever happens to the book, it happens to the user, the users soul is linked to the book.
    Abilities/Powers:
    -As the book is linked to him, whatever is in the book, the holder will remember it.
    -Once during each topic, the book is able to generate more pages. The user gets 10% extra mp.

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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 7th May 2014, 5:52 pm

    I need you to have a minimum of 3 strengths and 4 weaknesses on your spells please.

    ...I..Can see where this is creative idea but...Your description is a bit....confusing. I don't feel as though I am reading what the magic is actually about or how it is able to be used. It all feels very vague, and for me personally that is a huge confusion area. If you may please try to add in some more information and details to the description; it might help others who may find this confusing incase we get asked to explain how your character is performing all of these artes.

    What is the purpose for Soul Link Seal? It seems to be a pointless spell at the moment that has no relative purpose. Please either give more information for this spell to bring out what you exactly had in mind for it, or drop the spell completely for something else.

    Massive Tree Script: This seems to be a tad too strong for you to currently use. IF the roots were just a simple binding spell that would be fine; but your summoning an entire tree from the lack of description which I cannot allow. Please nerf this spell down a bit.

    Going back to my confusion earlier, I see now that this is very confusing. You are summoning AND casting other stuff? I do not think I can allow this. Until you pick out what KIND of magic this is; I am going to suggest your spells be put on a temporary hold until we figure out what the magic itself is for the moment.


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    Post by EastT 10th May 2014, 10:40 am

    Ready, sorry for the time, i was quiet occupied with school.


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    Post by EastT 11th May 2014, 2:18 pm

    Bump


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    Post by EastT 16th May 2014, 5:51 pm

    bump


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    Post by EastT 18th May 2014, 8:40 am

    COrrected


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    Post by Guest 18th May 2014, 9:34 am

    For the Falcon spell, elaborate on "normal attacks". Does this mean D-Ranked damage? Also, I need an altitude limit because I can't allow you to be carried into space (just a joke). Finally, your spells need at least 3 strengths, meaning they also require 4 weaknesses. Reply to this for another review.
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    Post by EastT 18th May 2014, 11:31 am

    Ready thankes xD


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    Post by EastT 22nd May 2014, 4:33 pm

    Bump


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    Post by EastT 24th May 2014, 6:30 am

    Bump


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    Post by EastT 26th May 2014, 3:09 pm

    bump?


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    Post by EastT 26th May 2014, 6:02 pm

    Bump? D:


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    Post by Aria Beleren 26th May 2014, 7:15 pm

    Approved


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